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It is a rainy evening...
Thunder's sound irritates Madhu.So she goes near the window to close it.The rain drops remind her of her own tears.
Her mind reminds her with pain:The rain fall reminds me of my own tear fall when i came to know that Rishab is in love with Piya.
Rishab and Madhu are childhood friends.But Madhu fell in love with him unknowingly.Her heart was broken when Rishab gave his heart to Piya.
But Madhu accepted her fate and supported Rishab's relationship with Piya.
Unexpectedly Madhu hears Rishab's voice:Madhu!Madhu!
MADHU:Rishu?
She opens the door.She sees the depressed Rishab drenched in rain.
MADHU:Rishu!Come inside.
He gets inside the house with luggage. She sees it.
MADHU:First you dry your hair and change clothes.Otherwise you will catch fever.
He goes inside and changes his clothes.He dries his hair also.Then he comes back.
MADHU:Rishu..what happened?
RISHAB:I left the house.
Madhu is shocked:Why?
RISHAB:Dad is against my relationship with Piya.He wants me to marry someone else.So i broke my relationship with that house.
MADHU:But can you break your relationship with your parents?
RISHAB:Mom is with me.But dad...he is too cruel.
MADHU:You could have tried to convince him.He may not be knowing how serious you are about Piya.
RISHAB:There is no use.I tried my level best.But he does'nt believe that Piya is my true love.
MADHU:Piya...?
RISHAB:Today morning she left for UK for her studies.I went to her bedroom to surprise her.She was sleeping.She had worn a red gown.She looked so beautiful.I caressed her beautiful silky hair.She opened her eyes.She was surprised to see me.
Rishab to Madhu:It was such a sweet moment.I dropped her to the airport.We both wept.Piya will be in UK for more than a year.I will miss her.Since she has gone there we can't get married soon.I don't want to tell Piya about me leaving the house.She will be upset.
MADHU:Don't worry Rishu.You can stay here till your dad's anger melts.
He smiles:Thank you so much Madhu.You are my best friend.No one does such a great thing for the best friend.
She says in her mind:You are more than a best friend for me.
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Chand chupa badal mein... The moon hiding behind the clouds Part 1
It is the Rishbala version of my old Anurag Taani SS.I will be making a few changes in the Rishbala version.It is a very emotional sweet love story.There may not be too much of suspense in this SS.
Thunder's sound irritates Madhu.So she goes near the window to close it.The rain drops remind her of her own tears.
Her mind reminds her with pain:The rain fall reminds me of my own tear fall when i came to know that Rishab is in love with Piya.
Rishab and Madhu are childhood friends.But Madhu fell in love with him unknowingly.Her heart was broken when Rishab gave his heart to Piya.
But Madhu accepted her fate and supported Rishab's relationship with Piya.
Unexpectedly Madhu hears Rishab's voice:Madhu!Madhu!
MADHU:Rishu?
She opens the door.She sees the depressed Rishab drenched in rain.
MADHU:Rishu!Come inside.
He gets inside the house with luggage. She sees it.
MADHU:First you dry your hair and change clothes.Otherwise you will catch fever.
He goes inside and changes his clothes.He dries his hair also.Then he comes back.
MADHU:Rishu..what happened?
RISHAB:I left the house.
Madhu is shocked:Why?
RISHAB:Dad is against my relationship with Piya.He wants me to marry someone else.So i broke my relationship with that house.
MADHU:But can you break your relationship with your parents?
RISHAB:Mom is with me.But dad...he is too cruel.
MADHU:You could have tried to convince him.He may not be knowing how serious you are about Piya.
RISHAB:There is no use.I tried my level best.But he does'nt believe that Piya is my true love.
MADHU:Piya...?
RISHAB:Today morning she left for UK for her studies.I went to her bedroom to surprise her.She was sleeping.She had worn a red gown.She looked so beautiful.I caressed her beautiful silky hair.She opened her eyes.She was surprised to see me.
Flash back...
Piya:Rishu..You?
why did'nt you tell me that you are coming here now?
RISHAB:To give you a surprise.
PIYA:Really?Then i will also give you a surprise.
She pushed him to the bed and fell on him.
Rishab:Ouch!Don't fall on me.My bones will break.
Piya:What?
She tickled him.They both burst into laughter.
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RISHAB:To give you a surprise.
PIYA:Really?Then i will also give you a surprise.
She pushed him to the bed and fell on him.
Rishab:Ouch!Don't fall on me.My bones will break.
Piya:What?
She tickled him.They both burst into laughter.
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Present...
Rishab to Madhu:It was such a sweet moment.I dropped her to the airport.We both wept.Piya will be in UK for more than a year.I will miss her.Since she has gone there we can't get married soon.I don't want to tell Piya about me leaving the house.She will be upset.
MADHU:Don't worry Rishu.You can stay here till your dad's anger melts.
He smiles:Thank you so much Madhu.You are my best friend.No one does such a great thing for the best friend.
She says in her mind:You are more than a best friend for me.
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