Be Intehaan:The Tale of Limitless love Ashlok SS Last part

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This is my 1st SS on Ashlok.Plz support me.
It is inspired by Sujatha Rangarajan's tamilnovel Pirivom Santhippom .I have not read the novel,I just read the summary.Scenes and the story may differ,only the theme is same.
 
 
Be Intehaan:Tale of Limitless love Part 1
Shlok came wearing sherwani.Swati was dressed in a gorgeous lehenga.
They exchanged rings.
Swati was excited:I am so happy Shlok.inally my dream is coming true.You are mine now.
Shlok gave a painful smile to her.Pain was hidden in his mind.
Aastha's face kept reflecting his mind.
Swati embraced him.He did not resist as he knew that Swati is his present and future..

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Shlok went shopping.He was preparing to get married to Swati.Wedding shopping has begun.
He went to the saree section to pick up a saree for Swati.
He bought a saree and walked.By mistake his shoulder hit a lady who passed by.
Turning his face towards her he said:Sorry.
Their eyes met each other.
Shlok couldn't believe his eyes.Both were shocked.
S:Aastha!
They both looked at each other deeply.
A painful eye lock.

Flash back...

Shlok was a gloomy serious student in college.He did not mingle with anyone.But Swati who was his class mate gazed at him secretly.Aastha felt strange about his isolation.
A:Why is this guy like this?
During the break she walked up to him.
A:You are Shlok Agnihitri.Right?
He stared at her nodding his head.
Aastha extended her hand towards him:Hi...I am Aastha Garewal.
He turned off his face.
A:Hey...shake hands.
He stared at her:I'm not interested.
A:Why?
S:I am not interested.That's it.
A:What is your problem?When ever someone approaches you,you are giving them a cold shoulder.You are ignoring others.In your world only you are there.
Shlok remained silent.
A:But I won't be like others who ignore you when you shove me away.I will definitely make you my friend.
S:Nonsense!
A:You look cute when you get angry.
S:Youuu!
She laughed
and walked off.
S:Mad girl.

The next day...
Aastha saw Shlok in the canteen.She walked up to him and sat near by.
S:What the hell!Why are you sitting here?
A:Hello...this is not your seat.This is college canteen.We can sit anywhere.
S:Then you sit here.I will sit somewhere else.
He got up and looked around.No seat was vacant and he sat there itself.Aastha could not control her laughter.He was embarrassed.
Aastha ordered orange juice.She was served orange juice.Shlok also ordered for orange juice.
"Sorry,orange juice is over".
S:Oh!
A:Then you take mine.
S:Why should I take yours?
A:Because you want orange juice very badly.I will drink pineapple juice.
S:I don't need your favour.I will have pineapple juice.
He ordered pineapple juice and drank it.She watched it with a smile.
As soon as he finished drinking he got up.
A:You are going so soon?Sit.Let us talk for some time.I am getting bored.
S:My job is not helping you to get rid of boredom.
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He walked away.
A:So strange.
Swati walked to her seeing it.
S:Aastha,why are you trying to make friends with Shlok?He is not that sort of a guy.You can never get his friendship.
 

A:No Swati.It's my challenge to make him accept my friendship.
S:You are over confident.It will never happen.Becoming Shlok's friend is only your dream.You will keep getting embarrassed if you try for that.

A:No Swati.It will happen.Wait and watch.
Aasthawalked away confidently.

 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start. Many unanswered questions you left are making my head spin and so Pls update soon..
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oh god what happened that shlok is marrying swati please update soon
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Nice start...
Keep writing...
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Great concept👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...
Astha wants to do friendship with shlok...now thats something really really interesting...when he is going to marry swati...😃
And the  pics are adding more charm to the story😳😳😳😳...
Thank you sooo much for the pm
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Lovley start👏do continue😃
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awesum start...aastha wants to be frdly with shlok...😳😳
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Nice but don't like Rubina as swati sorry 
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Loved the concept. Something new. Good luck with the rest of the story.  Will be waiting for the next update. 
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Nice concept plz continue
Loved it ❤️