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The broken string



Abir has been waiting here since 2 hours.Its been a sweet period of patience.

He watched over the surroundings.All were near perfect.Mishti doesn't like things to be perfect.A simple tent invested under a big tree.Pink lights making the way for the trees to sparkle themselves.2 feets away from the tent,there is placed a small bench,suitable only for two,decorated with some hidden lights.Its motive and way of working was the moment she will be seating here,it will lighten up automatically.Thats how it is designed.

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Then he rechecked the food items and everything was of her wish.There was one dish among those,which abir made taking 4 hours of his night.And that's sort of was cake but of low suger yet quite impactful in taste.He always considered their relationship not over sweet type but a realistic diabetic type which had its own sweetness that doesn't need any of the extra sweeteners!!He smiled upon his intelligencey for planning this metabolic cake.

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He sat on the bench and started recalling everything.They had a terrible breakup.But mishti mended all of it within 1 week.She is a real tigress who stood against everyone,Revealed everything to kunal.

Abir thought the truth would break kunal and yes,It DID!But he was destined to know.Now or Ever.But Abir forgot he was there for Kunal.Blood is thicker than anything-seems one kind of a myth created by those who never got any true relationship beyond bloodline.Abir forgot this.He is himself enough to hold kunal up.Kunal doesn't even need himself to be normal again,Abir can do that unconsciously.The moment he saw kunal having his break down in the middle of the road and still when kunal didn't refuse abir's hug,his not brother's comfort,Abir then knew he can fix kunal's broken heart and no one else.Kunal isn't fine still now but Abir believes he will be fine.He has no other choice when abir has taken the charge of him.

And about meenakshi,as mishti warned her,she has lost both her sons.Truly she never had them in first place so there was no room to loose,according to Abir.

After all this fiasco,he couldn't find courage to face her.All he did was cruel yet he had high expectations from mishti that everything would be normal again.
Last night,he reinstated lots of courage in himself.

Unexpected.Situation.These are the keywords.

Situation is he never thought he would need courage to speak to mishti.She was his that comfort zone which every child find in their mother's lap.Mishti was this much for him.

And now situation is he didn't know what to write.

Mishti was ready to sleep.Phone beeps and a message is shown-

"Ajeeb to hamesha se hi tha.Abh to kayer bhi ho gayi.Ekbar milna chahogi iss asal chor se?"

Abir's heart was pumping severely for the minutes.Reply came.

"Chorni to mein hu na?Tum chor kabse bani?Chalo koi nehi.Done.Same place."

Abir was somehow dissatisfied.Is that all?Nothing more.In a huff,he lashed himself.What did he expect mish would go gaga over his message.Her message.Her things need to be still handled by abir,he thought.Tomorrow is gonna be a tough day still the waited one!!He went to make the cake.

Abir is still waiting.When will she come?

"Wow,Not bad.This place is amazing"

Abir didn't expect such sudden entry.He was startled for a moment.She is wearing a pink suit with a French ponytail.Abir didn't know how she looks in ponytail.Now he knows.Marvelous.Small pink queen.
He gets up from the bench and runs to her.

"You are late"

"This time you have made the place more beautiful.Last time it was only a bonfire" -she said as if Abir never spoke.

He didn't again expect mishti would recall the past one.He brushes it off.

Coming close,he takes her hand in his and pulls her in.Her neck is a soft spot. Whispering there-

'I would never let that past one come again in your life'

'I BELIEVE YOU', mishti says smiling,pusing him away.

She roams.Abir comes near her.Taking her hand,he drags her to the bench.

Have a seat.

As soon as she seats,it lightens up.

Its awesome.Thank you,Abir.

Again,he was dissapointed.Why is she so formal?

Khush nehi ho?

Obviously hu.Infact,Aj kuch jada hein khush hu.

Accha?

Yeah.Aur kya kya kian?I should see your capabilities once more.

Once more?Matlab?

She smiles.She gets up from the bench and accidentally the plug gets hit by her leg and all the lights are gone.She is about to fall.

There is darkness.Sun has set behind.Bench is not strong enough.Mishti's failed grip makes her loose more.As the moment she is about to crash on the mud floor,she falls on abir.

A serious sound happend.They both get hurt.Mishti in hand and abir in back.

Her soft back is open.The dress is like that.Exactly on her collerbone,his hand was accidentally reached.The balance position is really tough in that situation.

THEY didn't have any mutual eyelock.Only he is gazing at her.He can feel her naked back.His hands wants to move there.

She is trying to get up.His hand reaches to her neck.Before he could proceed it down,her voice comes

Shit!!what kind of a bench is this?

They both laugh.Abir makes her stand and gets up himself.

She is looking at the set of the sky.The stars are beautiful.

Two hands wrape themselves around her waist.She immediately jerks them off.

What happened?Why are you so off today?Ajeeb rajbansh se itna gussa ho?

She smiles actually laughs loudly.

Abir,I am not angry at all.I am very cold and calm today-she says again pushing him away.

No,you are very much off.I am sorry.Sorry is never enough yet I am shamelessly saying it.You know na,I couldn't think over Kunal that day and..." he couldn't finish.Mishti places her finger on him to stop.

Sshh..let's not go to the past.

I have brought something for you.

Abir brings the same pendent from his pocket.

Gosh!!!!It still has?

Abir can smell her noninvasive behaviour.

Kya hua mishti?Will you not wear it if I make you wear?

Abir,You r so dumb.See,The colour has faded.How can I wear such a thing?

The colour is actually faded due to water.Also is broken at a corner.But he never thought she would complain something like this.

He cups her face.

I will repair it,Okay?

She gently removed his hand.

Your pendent.You decide what will you do with that.

Mishti,Its our thing.

Oh!Really? She asked while walking to the cake.

Having a bite,she threw it out.

Abir,yuck man,what is this?If you can't make cake,don't even try.Its awful.Where is the sugar in it?

Mishti,I thought you would like this.

But I didn't.

Abir now knew she was showing her angerness.All the incidents have taken over her heart.

He diverts the whole thing.

Mishti,did you like the tent?We will fit in this-saying he enters and offers his hand to her.

Come,Lets see this small world.

I don't think I will fit in here.

Is that so?Ekbar andar to aao.
He drags her hand and immediately she pushes them hard and abir falls making the tents crushed.

Stop behaving like a child-Mishti shouted.

Abir is hurt.Terribly.

Mishti,itna gussa hein to nikalo na?Express yourself.Mishti shout more.

She then smiles.

I said already.I am not angry.

He doesn't know what to say.

Mishti,I love you a lot.

Abir,I have come to show you something.I cracked my SAT exam and all other formalities have been done.I am going to London and will join frens and co as an event management trainee.

Abir is happy but not happy.

Wow!!Congratulations.How much time will take this training?

I don't know.Actually I don't care.Let time take the place.

What do you mean by u don't know?What about me?

What about you,Abir?-she smiles saying.

Our marriage!

What rubbish?Why r you bringing a non existing topic?

What?Mishti,Are you breaking up?

Now she fully laughs.

That you have done time back.

He holds her hands.

Mishti,Dont do this.I will do everything to make it up to you don't be like this.Just don't.-he shouts.

But why will you make it up to me?For whom?Ek parai ke liye?Why so greatness,man?

Abir sighed.He knows where this is coming from.

He tries to hold her in a hug.She makes him stop.

Don't be so clichey.

He can't take it anymore.Taking her hand,he pins her to the tree behind.

Gussa hain?To dekhao.Dont pretend.

He is burning with fire.

Mishti as if comes out of the facade and pushes him fiercely.

Ha hein.So what?What will you do?

Listen,Mr abir.I have not more time to break up with you.I really don't consider you now.And yeah mind it,dont make a false promise again to make it up because you cant.You just can't.In future,If anytime this type situation comes,You will choose anyone but me.You know why?Cz I am the soft spot.Every one chooses me to hurt.So,right now,I really don't care,don't care about anything.-she says in one gulp.

She runs.Before that,she does one thing.Taking the pendent agian out,she throws it in the water.

Now its over,Mr.Abir raajvansh.You couldn't do it better last time.

Abir wasn't in tear but in utmost shock.He didnt see her going but himself going from his body.

He thought he lost the right to promise her again but now he things he lost all the reason for it also.

He had lost her from that day itself.He wished he could realize it earlier

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I hope you guyz would love it!









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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's awesome. I'm out of words to express how terrible I'm feeling to see these two gone apart.

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I really want this to happen in our show. This is beautiful and painful.

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Aisha such mein nahi ho sakta kya?

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Waooo....nice.

Very well written. This is beautifully painful😊 This should happen in the show.

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Beautiful written..👏👍🏼 their breakup is painful for us.. hate to see them apart.. i wish aisa hota..

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