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Wow such a lovely update di

Sorry for being late actually missed this update somehow

Lesa enakku mounaragam smell varuthu appadiye continue pannuga as u know it is my favourite too

Atul and malhar ka relationship kya hi bole gaash Atul zinda rahtha for some more time and played cupid for kalma

Cvs ne toh maar hi diya poor thing ko after reforming

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Part 7

"Papa...!! Aap yahan bed pe so jaiye.. Mai sofe pe so jaungi.."

Atul had looked at her disapprovingly, "Hunh...!! Pati patni ke beech itna bada deewar khada na kiya hota toh sofe pe sone ki naubat nahi aati..."

She understood his taunt but didn't reply and just took a pillow and duvet.

Kalyani had woken up with a stiff neck after sleeping on the living room sofa. She was adding water in the vessel to make the morning tea when Raghav entered the kitchen with a bag full of vegetables and groceries.

"Goodmorning Didi..."

"Goodmorning Raghav...Chai piyoge..?"

"Nahi Didi.. Maine subah jaldi pi li.."

"Acha.. Mai Papa aur Malhar ko..."

"Koi zaroorat nahi hai.. Raghav ne hamare liye chai banake flask me rakh diya hai..", Atul announced entering the kitchen.

He didn't give chance for Kalyani to say anything more and directed his full attention towards Raghav.

"Maine jo bhi bola tha sab le aaye na...?"

"Ji saab... Abhi nashte me kya banaun.."

Atul instructed the boy to make vegetable oats chilla for breakfast along with a good bowl of fruits and fresh orange juice.

"Phir lunch me soup, roti, subji aur salad bana dena..."

"Ji saab..."

Kalyani couldn't stop herself, "Itne saare sabziyaan aur saamaan... Kisike shaadi keliye khana banane wala hai kya..?"

"Akal hai toh khud samajh jaati ki ghar me ek insaan hai jo abhi abhi hospital se lauta hai aur use paushtik aahar ki zaroorat hai..", her father retorted.

Kalyani rolled her eyes at her dad and told Raghav she would help him out.

"Apne kaam se kaam rakho..Raghav itna kaabil hai ki woh teen logon ka khana bana den.. Aur agar use madad chahiye toh mai karunga..."

"Mai kyun nahi kar sakti Papa..? Mai isse acha khana banaungi.."

"Toh bana lo apne liye acha khana aur khud hi kha lo... Jaise itne mahinon se karti aa rahi ho..."

"Papa..!! Aap..."

"Kya Papa..!! Wahi toh kiya hai tumne.. Ghar me ek aur insaan hai lekin kya tumne kabhi bhi ek newala uske liye banaya..? Toh ab ye meherbani kyun..? Nahi chahiye... Mai dekh lunga..."

"Chugli ki aapke bete ne...?"

"Bilkul nahi... Baap hun tumhara.. Tumhare baare me mujhse behtar kaun jaan sakta hai... Ye jo kitchen me partition kar rakha hai use samajhne keliye scientist hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.."

"Tumse baat karke wakt barbaad ho raha hai.. Chalo Raghav kaam shuru karte hain..."

"Saab..aap bhaiya ke paas aaram se baitiye.. Mai sab kar lunga.."

Kalyani had lost the mood to cook and just ordered some food for herself. Her dad had his lunch with Malhar in his room. She sat alone at the dining table toying with the spoon. It was certainly not the first time she was sitting alone at this table for lunch or dinner but this was the first time she felt the emptiness. She took her plate and went to put it back to eat later if she felt like. There she saw Raghav sitting on the kitchen floor having his lunch.

"Raghav tum yahan kyun baite ho.. Table pe baitke khao..."

"Nahi Didi mai yahin teekh hun..."

"Kya matlab..? Papa tumhe aise neeche bitathe hain..? Mai abhi jaake unse puchti hun... Bade aaye mujhe gyan baantne.."

"Didi aap galat samajh rahi hain.. Saab toh mujhe hamesha apne saat baitne ko hi bolte hain.. Lekin mai hi nahi baittha..."

"Kyun..?"

"Apne ghar hum sab saat milkar zameen pe baitke hi khate the.. Toh bas mujhe wahi aadat hai..."

"Chalo aaj mai bhi tumhare saat yahin baitke khaungi.. Bait sakti hun na..?"

"Kaisi baat kar rahi ho aap.. Aap mere saat..."

"Bait gayi... Ab tum mujhe apne baare me thoda batao.. Tum padai karne ke bajaye, ye kaam kyun kar rahe ho..?"

"Padayi toh kar raha hun Didi.. Bas college se nahi.. Postal me.."

He then told her that he had another younger sibling who was in school. Their mom used to work as a helper at other homes but since the time his dad had got caught with a big gang and sent to prison, noone wanted her to work for them.

Malhar who had been dealing the case saw the family's condition and got him this job which would help them live decently and he was paying the fees for both Raghav and his sister.

"Thank you mere Papa ka itna acha khayal rakhne keliye..."

"Bhaiya ne hamareliye jo kiya uske aage ye toh kuch nahi hai.. Bas ek hi cheez maangi unhone ki mai unke Baba ka acha khayal rakhun...Aur Saab bhi bohot ache hain..Woh mujhe apne bete jaisa hi maante hai.. Cheh bhaje se pehle saara kaam khatam karke padayi pe lagne bolte hain.. Meri number kam aayi toh kaan keechenge mera... Bhaiya aur Saab donon keliye kuch bhi karunga mai..."

Kalyani smiled patted his shoulder as they finished their lunch.

Later she was attending some official meetings while her father was taking a nap. He had been hovering over Malhar like a mother hen, so she hadn't gone towards there. Now as she closed her call, she got up from the chair and went to his room. Opening the door noiselessly, she saw him sleeping.

Kalyani hesitated only a moment before she stepped in.

Raghav was sitting by his bedside and reading from his book. She put a finger on her lip signalling him to keep quiet. He nodded, got up from the chair and quietly left the room.

She sat on the chair looking at him. Little beads of tears gathered in the corner of her eyes. "Jaldi teekh ho jaiye...", she whispered more to herself.

He turned facing her and the fan's breeze caused his overgrown hair to fall over his face, almost covering his eye.

Kalyani brushed it aside gently but that tuft of hair was stubbornly back on his face even after her repeated trials.

"Uff... Ziddi kahin ka... Abhi teekh karti hun tujhe..", she murmured and removed a hairpin from her hair. Softly pushing his hair back, she fixed the hairpin there and left to get back to her work.

Malhar was stirring from his sleep, still lazy to open his eyes but his nose caught on to a fragrance which made him pop his eyes open. It smelled like perfume... Kalyani's perfume... Had she been here? Trying to tame his hair with his fingers, he got pricked and pulled out the hairpin stuck there, getting the answer.

The next day also passed with her father ignoring her attempts to do something. On the third day, he had outright refused her offer to go along with Malhar to the physiotherapist.

"Papa clinic bhi dur hai aur wahan der lag sakti hai.. Mai nahi chahti ki aapko jyada strain ho..."

"Maine tumse koi raai maangi..? Nahin na... Tum sirf apne kaam pe dhyan do... mere baare me fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi... "

"Kyun nahi..? Mai aapki beti hun.. Mai.."

"Toh kya...? Mai tumhara ghulam ban jaun...? Tumhari har baat maanun...?"

"Maine aisa kab kaha.. Mai sirf aapki health..."

"Mujhe pata hai apna khayal kaise rakhna hai..."

"Papa.. Physiotherapy koi ek session me khatam nahi hoti... Roz.. Roz aapka aise travel karna teekh nahi hai..."

Malhar hadn't wanted to butt in between the father and daughter but now he had to and spoke before Atul could retort back.

"Baba... Kalyani sahi keh rahi hai.. Itna sab travel aapke liye teekh nahi hai..."

"Toh kya tum akele jaoge..?"

"Mai jaungi inke saat..."

"Nahi...!!" Malhar put a fullstop there.

Atul and Kalyani both looked at him as he spoke, "Mere wajah se already tumhe bohot pareshani ho chuki hai...Mai khud jaa sakta hun.."

"Iss halat me tum gaadi chalaoge..?"

"Nahi Baba.. Maine taxi book kar li.. Aur aapki tasalli keliye mai Raghav ko apne saat le jaata hun..."

Malhar put his arm around Raghav's shoulder and limped slowly to the taxi.

Kalyani glared at her father, "Mai parayi ho gayi na aapkeliye...?"

"Aisa bolte hain ki ladkiyaan parayi hoti hai... Lekin..."

"Oh....!! Naya beta jo mil gaya hai... Sab wahi toh karta hai aapkeliye... Ab iss beti ki koi value nahi hai..."

Atul went near his daughter and held her hand, "Kalyani...tum sach me gusse se andhi ho chuki ho...meri baat khatam tak hone nahi diya tumne.. mai bol raha tha ki mai aisa nahi maanta...tum meri beti ho aur mai hamesha tumse utna hi pyar karunga...."

"Jab se aaye hain bas taane hi maar rahe hain...", she made a puppy face.

Atul patted her cheek, "Tumhari galti ka ehsaas dilana bhi mera farz hai beta...Ye jo saza tum de rahi ho Malhar ko, jo nafrat dikha rahi ho.. kya wakai woh uska haqdaar hai..? Socho Kalyani jo bhi hua kya uska zimmedaar Malhar hai...?"

Kalyani didn't tell her father that she had already begun realising it. She let her thoughts travel back to the day her father had finally convinced her to meet him.

It had taken a lot of talking by Atul to convince his daughter to atleast listen to the other side of the story. He had promised her that he wouldn't give away Dhruv blindly.

"Jaldi karo Kalyani...."

"Woh laad saab thodi der intezaar karenge toh kuch kam nahi ho jayenge..."

"Tumse baat karna matlab deewaar se sar takrana... Mai Dhruv ke saat gaadi me baita hun.. Jaldi aana.."

Half an hour later, they were seated at the reception area of the hotel Malhar was staying in.

"Mr Deshmukh, Ms Kalyani.. Namaste...", he greeted them.

"Agar aap comfortable hai toh hum mere room me baitkar baat kar sakte hain... Family matter ko public area me discuss karna teekh nahi lagta..."

Atul nodded and stood up leaving no room for Kalyani to say something. She took Dhruv in her arms and followed them.

Seated in the couch of his room she said, "Aapko jo kehna hai jaldi kahiye.. Hume aur bhi kaam hai..."

"Apni behen ke baare me jaanne se bhi jyada zaroori...?"

She looked at him with more impatience.

He looked at Atul calmly and said, "Mr Deshmukh, aapki beti Sampada ji aur mera bhai, yaani mere kaka ka beta, donon Pune me ek hi college me, ek hi class me padthe the, donon ache dost bane.. Aur phir ek dusre ko pasand karne lage... Aapko pata hai ki college ke baad, Sampada ji ne Aurangabad me hi naukri dund li..."

Atul nodded his head and Malhar continued saying that his brother and she still maintained their relationship and that he used to come regularly to meet her. They were discussing marriage and wanted their parents to meet. One day they had given in to their urges and progressed their relationship which had resulted in Sampada's pregnancy.

As soon as he had gotten the news, his brother had immediately spoken to his parents about his love. He hadn't revealed about the pregnancy to them yet. They had happily agreed to his wishes and wanted to meet the girl and her family but he had said, he would personally ask her father for her hand and bring them here.

Before starting on his journey, he had happily called Malhar who hadn't been able to attend his call at that time.

He had left a voice note which Malhar played for the two of them now, "Bhai... Itna acha news dene keliye phone kiya aur tumne utaya nahi... double promotion milne wali hai mujhe... Pati aur Papa donon ek saat banne wala hun... Sshh.... Ye Papa wali baat mai abhi keliye sirf tumhe bol raha hun...Donon ko lene jaa raha hun... Kis mission pe fase ho bhai...? Jaldi phone karo mujhe..."


Malhar's eyes teared up and his voice choked when he said that, "Mai jab apne meeting se nikalkar aaya aur ye message suna toh khud ko rok nahi paaya aur turant phone kar diya... Kaash woh phone not reachable ho gaya hota... Kaash....!!"

He stopped talking, staring at his hands, blinking his tears.

Atul laid his hand over his, "Aage bolo beta..."

Malhar spoke in a heavy voice, that his brother had been on the highway and had attended the call. "Hello bhai...."

The next thing Malhar had heard was the sound of tires screeching and collision of vehicles.

"Atharv....!!! Atharv...tum teekh ho na... !!!!" he had shouted into his phone but there had been no answer.

Malhar had immediately arranged to trace the location and called in for an ambulance to reach the spot as soon as possible and driven like a madman to reach his brother.

The paramedics were putting on oxygen mask and giving pressure to stop the bleeding of his head injury. He was taken to the hospital and Malhar had called his uncle to inform them.

Atharv had remained unconscious for months as the doctors did various tests and started course of treatment. He had multiple injuries which were being treated simultaneously but since his brain was not alert, the treatments were not giving fast results.

"Mr Rane...", the doctor had come up to his uncle.

"Ji doctor.."

"I'm very sorry to say this but your son has had severe injury to his spinal cord and..."

"Boliye doctor... Kya hua mere bete ko... Woh teekh ho jayega na...?", Anupriya had asked tearfully.

"Mrs Rane, aapka bete ko hosh me lane ki puri koshish kar rahe hain.. Par ek baat hai...Mr Rane please inhe sambhaliye.."

"Jaldi boliye doctor...kya hua hai mere bache ko...?"

"Spinal cord injury ke wajah se woh ab pehle jaisa nahi reh payega... chal nahi payega...Gardan ke neeche se he will be immobile Mr Rane..."

Sarthak's step had faltered and he staggered backwards. Malhar had held his uncle, words failing him and Anupriya had dropped to her knees crying inconsolably into her pallu.

Malhar once again looked up at Atul and said that Atharv had regained consciousness only after 5 months and even then he hadn't been able to speak

Even though Malhar had informed his uncle about Atharv's message, none of them had known any details about the girl he loved. Even Atharv's best friend had not been aware of anything except that he called her 'Sampu'. Atharv's phone had been of no use as it had been damaged along with the sim card.

"Iss wajah se hum chahkar bhi Sampada ji ko dund nahi paye..."

"Toh ab kaise pata chala...", Kalyani had asked sarcastically.

"Atharv ki speech therapy thodi si kaam karne lagi hai aur jaise taise thoda bol paa raha hai.. Jab se zubaan me jaan aayi hai usne sirf Sampada ka naam liya... Aur usne hume Sampada ke office address bataya. Wahin se maine aapke ghar ka pata lagaya.."

Atul was too stunned to speak.

There was a heavy silence for a few seconds which was broken by the little boy's gurgles.

Malhar had gotten up from his seat and come towards Kalyani. He kneeled and held his arms open to the child. Kalyani had instinctively held the child closer to herself but the smiling boy had other ideas and he had jumped into the waiting arms.

Malhar had kissed his nephew's little hands and carressed his cheeks.

"Tere papa besabri se tera intezaar kar rahe hain...tu chalega na apne papa ke paas.."

"Excuse me Mr Rane, Dhruv kahin nahi jaa raha... Aapne hume baat karne bulaya tha.. Woh ho gaya.. Ab hum chalte hain.. Chaliye Papa..."

She stood up and held her arms out to take the child.

Malhar gave the kid back, "Ms Kalyani... Mai aap donon se request karta hun ki aap mere saat Pune chalen aur ek baar Atharv se mil len.. Usne aapke behen ko dhoka nahi diya....Use abhi tak pata nahi hai ki uski Sampada ab iss duniya me nahi rahi... Apne pyaar ko toh kho diya usne..
...kya use apne bache se milne ka, ya use pyaar karne ka haq nahi hai...? Maana ki woh khud achi haalat me nahi hai... Lekin shayad apne bache ko dekhne ke baad use phirse jeene ki ummeed mile aur woh dheere dheere teekh ho jaye... "

"Mr Deshmukh aap sochiye... Aur ek acha faisla lijiye... Jo donon baap aur bete keliye teekh rahega.."

"Hum chalenge beta....." Atul had agreed.

"Kalyani...!!! Kalyani...!!"

"Unnh...!! Kya hua?"

"Kabse bulaye jaa raha hun... Kis soch me pad gayi..? Kuch samajh me aaya ki nahi...?"

"Hmm... H.. Haan...!! Sab samajh gayi.. "

Atul shook his head at her dazed look and went in to make some tea leaving Kalyani staring at the walls again.

Edited by rekha_crm - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Superb update didu 👏 👏


I don’t feel bad for kalyani, she getting a taste of her own medicine that too through her father..😆😆


Atul Malharji ka bond… 👍🏼

The way he is taking care of him just like his own son

It is so beautiful..

I’m liking this Atul..


Malharji did so much for Raghav n his family…


The little moment of kalma ❤️❤️❤️


Flashback is just awesome..

Feeling bad for Samtharv..


Loved it didu..



Waise I have a question where is Dhruv right now ??

Edited by Priyapriyu - 2 years ago
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