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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_ami

Interesting and eager to know her next deal.

thank you ami 😊
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Hai frnds back to track,
As massisa packs her things along vth palomi she looks sad,Massisa asks what going in ur mind she says Umasha,massisa asks what, she says what happened ydy night.Hearing this massisa says so this is reason behind Uma's tiredness.Then fine let me come back from this yatra after that i vl handle Kanak,let her enjoy for next 5 days.Palomi asks so really you are going out she says yes its about God so i cant postpone it.Then Palomi thinks to herself if massisa is not here so what i know how to deal with this poor kanak and get back Umasha vth evil look.
Then all are in living room all took Massisa's blessing she left biding bye and says Uma to tke care of whole family he nods somewhat sadly.
Then all left Kanak says Uma just massisa is going for temple why you feel this much bad.Uma says first time Massisa is going for 5 days away from home leaving us like this.Kanak says are you all kids??? Behaving like your mom is leaving you in school for frst time,on hearing this Uma doesnt know how to react becoz he cant scold kanak.So he says nothing like that and i have few wrk in ayurvedic centre and leaves.Kanak then goes to kitchen,there Palomi is making food for Uma with much more intrest,kanak asks what are you doing,she says food for Umasha without seeing kanak's face.Kanak says i am here to make food for my husband so you better stay in your limit and stop preparing your food i vl make food for my Uma.Palomi says only i know what Umasha likes till you get your rememberance back i vl serve Umasha.Kanak says just what he prefers is matter whatever i cook Uma loves to eat that so for that rememberance is not a matter.Palomi says its Umasha habit to have particular food on particular day today Umasha vl not prefer to have oily diet.Then Kanak says ok fine then i vl cook only oily foods like poori,halwa everything lets see what Uma have for lunch.Palomi with evil smile thinks today Kanak vl know her status as its Umasha's routine to have particular schedule for food for ages.Then in dinning table all sat for lunch Kanak brings plate for Uma saying i specially cooked for you Umaji,Uma asks i told you to take rest but you work in kitchen for long time,see you look too tired.Kanak says i am not tired at all Umaji. First you taste food na and say me how is it??? Uma says fine serve it.All are shocked to see the plate as its full of oily diet.Then Palomi says, i told Kanak before she starts her preparation that its not your menu for today's lunch but she didnt listen to me.Palomi further says kanak is behaving like kid and i had made food of your choice Umasha.Uma says stop it Palomi as she is my wife she have complete rights to make my food and with that respect i vl have this food.Kanak teasingly looks at Palomi,after tasting the food Uma says what a tastly food i am having today for this tastliest food i should gift you something kanak.Kanak smiles,Palomi sadly leaves that place.Uma ask Kanak to join for lunch she nods happily.After lunch in room,Kanak asks just for me you told na food is good and today you wont take oily food,Uma says sweety by holding Kanak's hand, for me whatever my wife makes i love that and remembers her how she makes her first halwa for him and how they shared that halwa.They both laughs.Then Uma teasingly says atleast this time you didnt add much salt or pepper.Kanak says so where is my gift, Uma asks do you really want a gift,she says yes,so just before everyone you made a fake words,Kanak says for sure i want my gift.Uma comes little bit closer so for sure you want gift,kanak moves little bit back and hesitantly says yes.Uma holds her near to him,kanak closes her eyes and Uma goes near Kanak's ear,she feels shy and tightly closes her eyes,Uma says by evening i vl take you to temple saying this he smiles.She too smiles.
Then suddenly Massa's bell rings,Kanak says Massa calling us they both rushes to massa and sees Massa not served with her food.Palomi and Payal apologise for forgetting this.Uma scolds them just not even one day massisa is away from home and there is no one to take care of massa for this you both should be punished then Uma himself feed Massa,Kanak stands near him. In living room, all are present,before Uma starts,Kanak says I feel guilty,as house's elder DIL I am responsible, so first I should get punishment before anyone.Uma says no no Kanak how can you be responsible as you dont remember any past.Kanak says this make me feel bad i forget past i understand i am new to this home so with this reason how can i escape from my duties,no i wont accept this from now on i vl take care of Massa and i am completely responsible.Uma asks how can you take care of her alone,Kanak says i can, do you have any doubt Umaji.Uma remembers the relation between Massa and Kanak that without thinking of her life how she saved Massa from fire.He says i dont have any doubt on you for sure you vl fullfill your duties.
Then in evening,Vansh calls Kanak she attends the call but its Bhabho,she in happy voice asks bhabho how is she,bhabho on hearing kanak's happy voice feels relieved,then kanak's enquires about all including Saras,Bhabho on seeing saras and vansh says all are fine.Then Vansh,Ved speaks to Kanak then finally Kanak asks to give phone to saras,same time Uma enters the room,Kanak holds the phone saying she have get ready to temple so plz continue Saras is in line says in husky voice.Uma vth no way holds the phone and asks how are you,Saras feels too happy and replies she is fine then he says we are going to temple i vl ring you later she says ji dhadusha.Then Uma gives the mobile to Kanak.She gets ready,Uma watches her from behind and they left to temple.Kanak ask Payal to take care of Massa she says yes.Shiv says he vl also accompany them.But Uma says some guy should be in home to take care of ladies in home,shiv says i vl take care dhadusha like a brave man.Kanak and Uma leaves to temple.
Then back from temple,at night time Kanak went to Massa's room with milk and feed her, as massa completed her milk.Kanak in her mind thinks now my mission starts and promises Massa now i vl fullfill my duties as your DIL...Kanak smiles seeing Massa and Massa to smiles back...
What's Kanak's new mission ??????? To be continued.
Friends if you like this track then i vl continue further becoz saras as Sara track is really good so i dont want to spoil any essence of original TSMSP track need your support to continue further friends.Please cmnt your views.



Edited by rajiraji14 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hai friends this imaginary stry mainly based on how Kanak and Uma go forward in life in the path of dharam that Uma learnt wrongly and how he changes by understanding situations.But i didnt get enough support becoz lot of viewers but no cmnts.so i thought of stopping this stry line friends 😭
Edited by rajiraji14 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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No no no Raji don't do this. Really this ss bringing us a lot of happiness. Hope that you continue this story.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_ami

No no no Raji don't do this. Really this ss bringing us a lot of happiness. Hope that you continue this story.

Ami only you support me but i didnt get cmnts other than this dear so i dont know whether its ok to go ahead becoz i dnt want spoil the original stry track...But i am really thankful to you dear that daily you support me vth ur cmnts thank you so much😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajiraji14

Ami only you support me but i didnt get cmnts other than this dear so i dont know whether its ok to go ahead becoz i dnt want spoil the original stry track...But i am really thankful to you dear that daily you support me vth ur cmnts thank you so much 😊

Don't think like that Raji. Look at the number of viewers visited here. They might be enjoying it . Most of them might be enjoying their holidays that means they might be out of station as their children have vacation. This may be the reason not to reply. Pl give some more time if you not get any feed back then u can give up. Till then hope for the best.
You too have good writing skills. And also I don't want to force you too as far as I think support is also very much needed to increase our self confidence. I am reading both ss yours and lovely's too.Both deserves for 👏. Both can keep this as a passion. Hope you rethink regarding your decision.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_ami

Don't think like that Raji. Look at the number of viewers visited here. They might be enjoying it . Most of them might be enjoying their holidays that means they might be out of station as their children have vacation. This may be the reason not to reply. Pl give some more time if you not get any feed back then u can give up. Till then hope for the best.
You too have good writing skills. And also I don't want to force you too as far as I think support is also very much needed to increase our self confidence. I am reading both ss yours and lovely's too.Both deserves for 👏. Both can keep this as a passion. Hope you rethink regarding your decision.

Thank you dear.You are really supporting me a lot really i feel happy😊.I vl continue my stryline dear.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Raji please definitely continue this!! I'm sorry I read and replied late for the past few times, I've been busy, but I always for time when I am free to read ur ss in peace... its truly bringing joy into my life, I'm realising in every update how lovely it would be onscreen... dont stop it, I am always here for it!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Frnds back vth new hope,that you all love my stry track ...
After kanak feeding milk to massa,she leaves the room.
So same routine is followed for next two days,in absence of massisa all are little happy.
Then day passes its 6th day,all are awaiting for massisa's arrival,all arangements are made in home for her arrival,Uma is eagerly waiting and roaming in living room.Then Massisa arrives vth full of happiness and all took her blessings she gave prasad to all then when Uma fwd to take her blessing she asks for Kanak if you and Kanak get blessing together then i feel happy soon Kanak vl get back her memory and to move forward in life.Massisa asks for Kanak,even Uma asks same,Shiv says she went to your ayurvedic centre.This shocks Uma,he asks when she went,shiv says before sometime.Uma rushes there vthout replying to anyone,Palomi understands and feels little bit happy if Kanak sees Divorce papers then all vl b fine.Uma opens the door sees Kanak searching something,e feels relieved that she doesnt find anything and asks what are you searching she shows some medicine bottle that she took from massa room and search for same medicine as this bottle is empty but she couldnt find that and ask Uma to help her,he says fine and sees the cupboard where he kept the divorce papers it seems closed and feels much more relieved.He then checks medicine and says really do you get this med bottle from massa's room, she says yes,he then smells that but feels something fissy and says later i vl give this medicine she says ok.Then Uma says let us go and meet Massisa,they went to Massisa and thy take her blessings and she offered prasad but Uma looks confused.Massisa asks what happened he nods nothing,then he asks massisa to rest for sometime as she travelled long and asks others to prepare massisa's fav food.Kanak says i vl prepare but Massisa says you forget everything so i give responsibility to Palomi to tke care of my food,Palomi feels happy as Kanak got insulted,kanak feels sad,Uma cheers saying like that day she can prepare his food.Kanak looks at Palomi with teasing smile.Saying this Uma leaves and Massisa feels within 5 days Uma changed a lot after my decision Uma speaks up for that Kanak.Then Massisa in her room thinks how to throw Kanak out of Uma's life.Palomi enters vth some soup for massisa saying now everything is in Kanak's hand,Umasha supports her in everything he never sees anyone before Kanak,he can spare anything for her even You massisa.Hearing this Massisa shout Palomi,within few days i vl throw kanak out of home and forever from Uma.Palomi feels now Massisa vl throw kanak out,my job is only to get place in Umasha's heart and gain his trust.In ayurvedic centre Uma thinks what kind medicine do Massa given daily,as its neither prescribed by me nor prepared by me,he looks too confused but he couldnt confront Massisa too as it feels like doubting her for yrs together she serves Massa.He feels too restless.Massa says now its time to give medicine to jiji when she enters Massa's room,she sees Kanak there who fed Massa and she sleeps too.Seeing this massisa fumes saying so you took my place too in my absence,now ur lifetime in this house is too short enjoy as much as you can.
Next day morning,usuall routine is going in house.At 10a.m,Dr.who treated Kanak arrives at Uma's home.Uma greets him and asks we are happy vth your presence, I vl call Kanak,he says i didnt come for Kanak i come to check your Mom,this shocks all and Massisa who asked for this,he says Kanak,this further shocks Uma.Then Kanak arrives,she greats the Dr.and thanks him for coming in his busy schedule.He says its okay come let me see the patient,Kanak agress and take him to Massa's room.He completely checks Massa and all previous reports and then says to all family members,its better Massa shoyld be followed with new set of English medicine and much more needed is physiotherapy exercises daily so that she vl be get vl soon.He prescribes some medicine and give a physiotherapist mobile no.and if needed he can be contacted at anytime regarding treatment aspects saying this he leaves.Kanak says eagerly to Uma so now after following this we can get back Massa.But Massisa shouts its enough Kanak,You done lot but i kept quiet for Uma,You broke all the house rules,you didnt follow any dharam,now you are not respecting elders too,she says nothing like that massisa,even Uma seems to be in angry and asks why without consulting me You ask Dr.to check Massa,kanak replies i thought of saying you but you were busy in ayurvedic centre last night so i didnt disturb you.He says whatever may be but you didnt utter a word about this even too massisa by this way you insulted her who take care of massa for long time.She says nothing like that Umaji,just for massa's sake i did this nothing intentionally or nothing to hurt massisa.How i vl think to insult someone who take care entire family for years just to reduce her burden i did this as i took Massa's responsibilities.Massisa shouts saying you already lost your memories so better you can luxiousness of this house as Uma's wife,decision making is house elders work so better be one of member in home who obeys to elder dont act smart that is not for anyone says sll these with teary eyes and leaves.Uma looks sad seeing massisa.He looks angrily at kanak and leaves.Kanak too cries.In massisa room she thinks its better situation to throw Kanak out,planning this she packs her bag,Uma comes to massisa's room feels bad for happening and thought of apologising to massisa but after seeing her packing,he asks what are you doing Massisa,she says i am leaving this house for your sake Uma,just for all's sake i stayed in this home but now situation turns up and down,you all can take care of yourself so my presence vl disturb you so i am leaving now.Uma says massisa you always showed me love equall to my mom even more then that,for me nothing is important than you massisa,you tolerated everything about Kanak for me but now i have to decide,he says if say yes to her i know very well its against dharam and doubting your heartly service to massa,if i say no to her,i cant fullfill my promise that keeping Kanak happy here.So i thought of sending kanak back to Pushkar forever,Massisa on hearing this feels happy and relieved,but looks sad.Uma further adds i took one more decision, Massisa thinks it might be related to divorce as he thought of sending Kanak forever,Uma says i thoght of closing my ayurvedic centre forever because i cant save my mom and wife then what's use being a Doctor.When i cant protect my house members there is no use being a Doctor,i thought of leaving this profession forever,this wildly shocks Massisa,she says but your patients in Ladnu and your long term aim of inventing that new medicine,he says i didnt do this profession for income ,I did this whole heartly but with that i couldnt save my mom and wife,so no use of being good to others,first a courage man should be able to balance his family then only world,so my decision is final Massisa.You always support me vth my decision,now support me wth this too.While sending Kanak, i vl end my profession and dream too what i chased for years.Massisa is in complete shock,before she says something,suman comes there and says Kanak bhabhisha in scared voice.Uma asks what happened to Kanak,saying this he rushes to Kanak's room followed by Suman and Massisa.
In room,Kanak herself packing all her stuff's.Payal is trying to stop her.Palomi just for name shake standing there.Uma comes and asks what are you doing Kanak?????she didnt reply him,she roams here and there and packs things.Finally,Uma holds Kanak's hand and asks what is going on???,kanak asks her medical reports,Uma says its vth me but first reply me where are you going???,why are u packing all things???, Kanak replies to Pushkar..All are shocked except Palomi,she feels happy, so now Kanak herself doing my work.Uma in shock asks but why to Pushkar all of sudden,Kanak starts to cry,she says i know i lost my memory is it my mistake??? Uma says no why you think like that.Kanak says then why you all treat me as stranger,just i lost my memory but here it seems you all lost your mind.Whenever i ask for anything,all saying you lost your memory so keep quiet,to keep quiet like a doll why should i live in this house for that i can be in same hospital,even i dont know how i vl b in pushkar so better its good to leave from this world in that accident itself, now not knowing past incidents i am suffering more than that accident.Hearing this Uma got too much hurt,Kanak cryingly says when i met you all i feel happy that my family vl take care of me but now i realise that i am burden to you all becoz whatever i do that's against house rules or dharam,so its better to leave from here.Uma says nothing like that,Kanak says yes its like that,after ved bhaiya and vansh bhaiya even bhabho makes lot of effort to take me to Pushkar,but i came here just trusting you Umaji,I dont remember anything but that day in hospital i felt some kind of sweet relationship between us and i see love in ur eyes for me,now same eyes speak vth me today vth anger so if i be here some more days then that love vl entirely get destroyed vth my actions,so its better to leave and take her hands from Uma's hand.She cries,Uma says nothing like that i just asked Why you didnt inform me about Dr's arrival to check Massa.She says i didnt inform but What's wrong in that,i thought of not burdening Massisa further, just now she arrived after 5 days,she may be tired and you are busy wth ur work.So as this house's elder bahu,i took Massa's health as my responsibility and duty to get her back.Uma says following English medicine is not good for her,Kanak only that medicine saved me Umaji.Okay if its with medicine then Why not physiotherapy its just a therapy to cure her What's wrong with that.Think Umaji if i didnt get my memory back for yrs then you vl leave me like that or you vl try some other methods to cure me,Uma doesnt know what to reply.If any of my suggestion is not acceptable,then i cant be like doll here,so i am leaving from here Umaji forever.I vl call vansh bhaiya he vl pick me from here.She starts dialling but massisa pick her phone and says i agree for Massa's treatment wth physiotheraphy and adds there is no need of Kanak to go to Pushkar as it is her house.She has full rights to decide but vth elder's opinion,Kanak nods.All are happy,but Uma looks confused then he thinks massisa might take this decision just for his and Kanak's sake,he smiles and higs Massisa saying i know you vl understand me and for my happiness you vl accept anything.Massisa bless them and leaves.Palomi fumes in anger and leaves.Suman and Payal hugs Kanak.
In night,Uma stands infront of shivji's idol and recalls all past incidents how Kanak met vth accident and today Massisa's and Kanak'swords and feel upset thinking his inability of not keeping anyone happy whom he loves most.Kanak comes there and stands near him,but Uma didnt notice her,she calls Umaji are you still angry wth me,he says nothing like that but i cant see you crying so plz dont cry anymore.She nods and says i am sorry,he says why are you asking sry,i am the one who should ask sry becoz i behaved rudely with you i am sry,Kanak says no no i should inform you before itself so i am sry, Uma says no no Kanak,you did it vth good intension so i am sry,Kanak says its ok let us forgive each other but not in this way,Uma asks the how,she says by hugging each other,Uma smiles and hugs Kanak.They both seem too happy,then Kanak asks Umaji always i want see you like this happily,if i do something unknowingly plz dont mind that and forgive me,he says before our love nothing will come between.
In Massisa room,she thinks however i stopped Uma from closing his ayurvedic centre,now i should make Uma to start his wrk vth new medicine for that i should bare vth this Kanak.Palomi enters vth milk to Massisa and sees Massisa is in deep thinking,she says milk,massisa asks her to keep it on table,she says now you to started to support Kanak,Massisa replies nothinf like that,if i didnt stop her today then in that guilt we vl lose Uma.So its better to keep quiet in this situation and find a better way.Palomi says if we keep quiet for long then Kanak vl take over everything,Massisa says that happens only after my death.Palomi thinks its no use of believing massisa,now i have to try something to get back Umasha.
In room,Kanak and Uma sits in bed,Uma says Kanak to sleep as lot happened and she cried lot so if she takes rest it would bd better.Dhe says she dont feel slpy,lets us talk about our past,Uma asks about past,she says Dr.ask me to remember about past so that she can remember anything.Uma too remembers that,then he nods.Then Uma lies on Kanak's lap,she surprisingly asks Umaji what are you doing???? Uma says try to remember this incident(that happens during dassi dharam) and narrates it how he sleeps in her lap for whole night,Kanak says so by making me awake whole night You slpt happily,Uma ge ts up and says if i say onething you are understanding it in different way,its better let us sleep,Kanak say yes i am.going to sleep but not you,Uma surprsingly asks what??,Kanak lies in Uma's lap and ask him to caresses her hair so that she can sleep peacefully and its his punishment for making her cry today.Uma says what's this kind of kiddishness,kanak say yes kiddishness,but come on Umaji let us recreate that happy day again,Uma nods nd sweetly says anything for my lovable wife.Kanak lies on Uma's lap and he start to caresses her hair both feels happy and Uma sees Kanak's face she feels shy.To be conrinued friend...



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasleen-tsmsp

Raji please definitely continue this!! I'm sorry I read and replied late for the past few times, I've been busy, but I always for time when I am free to read ur ss in peace... its truly bringing joy into my life, I'm realising in every update how lovely it would be onscreen... dont stop it, I am always here for it!!

Thank you so much jasleen dear you are also my big support really happy and thankful to you 😊.

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