AkshAn SS: Adhoore ( Part - 5, Pg 4)

Posted: 4 years ago

I got this idea after Kanika Di's insta story & Rawat' s dead.

PART - 1

Jindal House

After lots of efforts finally Antara's truth came in front of the family.  Everyone was shocked & angry with her, especially Dadi & Akshat. Never in their imagination they thought for property Antara will stoop so low that she will fake her pregnancy & even kill her own brother. Due to her they even accused Guddan for lying when all this time she was saying the truth. Antara even tried to harm Guddan & his mother for her benefits.

AJ:Antara tumse Maine itna pyar kiya itna bharosa kiya.. tumhare liye Maine apni Guddan ka kitna dil dukhaya aur tumne.. chii.. layat hai mujhpe Maine tumjaisi aurat par bharosa kiya

An:Akshat meri baat suno

AJ: Bash ek aur shabd nehi

Just then police entered. Akshat handed  Antara to the police.

AJ: Le jayi ise.. Antara bohat pachtaogi tum

Police took Antara away. Guddan was standing silently & was looking at Akshat with a blank face. Dadi went towards Guddan holded her hand.

Da:Mujhe maaf karde Guddan pata nehi kitna bhala bura kahan tujhe.

Guddan didn't replied anything. Akshat went towards her holded her shoulder.

AJ(teary eyes):Pls Guddan maaf kardo mujhe jaane anjane bohat dil dukhaye hai tumhara maine.. wada karta hun ainda itni bari galti kabhi nehi hogi.. chalo Guddan apni zindagi phirse nayi sire se shuru karte hai

Akshat brought his hand in front of her. Guddan looked at the hand & then at Akshat. He was expecting her to place her hand in his hand. Guddan without saying a word went to her room. All were shocked at Guddan's behavior.

L:Yeh sasuma aise kyun chali gayi

After few minutes Guddan came out carrying her suitcase & wearing her old outfit before her marriage. She was not wearing her mangalsutra & her bangle. She came & stood in front of Akshat.

G:Sahi Kahan apne Jindal Saab hume phirse apni zindagi nayi sire se suru karni chahiye.. yeh lijiye Humne sign kardiya hai aap bhi kardijiye..

Saying this she handed some papers to Akshat. He opened it & was shocked to see it was divorce papers. He looked at Guddan.

AJ: Guddan yeh toh divorce papers hai..

All were shocked hearing this.

G:Sahi kahan apne divorce papers hai.. Hume apse talaq chahiye kyuki ab iss Guddan Gupta se Guddan Akshat Jindal bana na ho payega

Da: Beta tu yeh kya keh rahi hai.. tujhe talaq chahiye.. kyun beta.. tumdono ek dusre se pyar karta ho aisa kyu kar rahi ho beta

G: Pyar kaisa pyar Dadi jisme thoda sa bhi bharosa nehi hai.. humne aaj tak Jindal Saab pe iss parivar pe ankh band karke bharosa kiya hai aur uske badle hume kya mila? Sirf aur sirf bezaati aur  jhooti hone ka dosh mila.. Sirf Jindal Saab nehi hai aap mein se kisine hume thoda sa bhi bharosa nehi kiya.. ekbar bhi nehi socha jab Guddan itna bari baat bolrahi hai hosakta kahin na kahin  sach bolrahi hogi par nehi ulta mujhpe ilzaam lagaya ki mein yeh sab Antara ji ki jaga lene ki koshis kar rahi hun jab Maine kabhi bhi kisiki jaga lene ke baren mein socha hi nehi

AJ: Janta hun Guddan bohat badi galati huyi hi.. pls Guddan sirf ek mauka do iss bar koi sikayet ka mauka nehi dunga pls

D: Haan Guddan pls.. manti hu bohat galatiyan huyi hai.. bohat bura kiya hai Maine tumhara saath pls Guddan sirf ek mauka

Guddan stopped Durga by showing her hand. She looked at Akshat.

G: Bohat mauke diye the bash aur nehi.. Ab iss Guddan se Jindal ghar ki bahu,  issh ghar ki saas aur Akshat Jindal ki patni bana na ho payega

Akshat become shattered hearing all this.

G: Humne sign kardiya aap bhi kardijiye aur mujhe aur apne aap ko issh bin bharose ke rishtey se azad kardijiye.

Guddan handed a box to Dadi.

G: Isme humara mangalsutra, kangan aur issh ghar ki chabiyan hai.. ab yeh humari kisi kam ke nehi..

Saying this she took her suitcase & left the house. She doesn't even looked back. Akshat just looked Guddan leaving helplessly. After she left he looked at the divorce paper.

AJ(guilty): Galati meri hai ki maine ekbar bhi Guddan ko samaj neki koshis nehi kiyi aaj Guddan itni taqleef ki wajah mein hu.. maine use itni taqleef diyi hai ki usse issh rishtey bharosa hi uth gaya

A lone tear dropped from his eyes. Dadi kept her hand on his shoulder.

Da: Lalla sambhal apne aap ko

Akshat wipes his tear & looks determined.

AJ: Haan maa apne sahi kahan.. mein kisibhi haal mein Guddan ko manaunga aur issh ghar mein pure dhoom dham se aur poore maan saman ke saath wapas layunga.

Gupta House

Guddan entered the house. Bhushan, Kaushalaya & Revati went towards her.

R: Di aap yahan sab toh thik hogaya tha na

G:Maine Jindal Saab se divorce lene kai faisla kiya hai

They were shocked hearing this.

B:Par beta jald baji mein faisla maat le jo hua woh sab halat ka kasoor tha tu aur damadji ek dusre pyar karte ho aisa maat kar

G: Nehi papa jab bharosa hi nehi hai toh kaisa pyar kaisa rishta..

She took Revati's hand & looked at Kaushalaya.

G: Mummy hume Chutki aur Angad ji ke rishtey se koi problem nehi hai par hum uss ghar aur wapas nehi jayenge aur pls iskeliye koi hume majboor maat kijiye.. aap unlogo se baat kar lijiye aur Chutki ki shaadi ki tayari suru kardijiye

Saying this Guddan went to her room & locked her door. As soon as she laid on bed she started crying silently.

G(in mind):Hum Jindal Saab se bohat pyar karte hai lekin unhe hum pe bharosa nehi hai.. aisa kuch agar phir kabhi hua woh phir hume galat thrayenge.. itni himaat nehi hai aur ki hum aur taqleef utha sake.. isilye hume Jindal Saab ko chodna hi padega ismein hum dono ki bhalai hai..

Sorry for grammatical mistakes. Hope you guys like it 

Posted: 4 years ago

Wow...it was nice..

I so want k Aisa kuch ho show main...

Anyway continue soon ..

Posted: 4 years ago

Awsome 

Now its Aj's turn to win her trust back 

Continue asap

Posted: 4 years ago

superb 

plz continue soon 

Posted: 4 years ago

I so wanted this to happen in show 

I really like it, i was planning to something like and i m glad you did the honors

Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome start

Love it

Cont soon

Posted: 4 years ago

Guddan did the right thing 

Aj has to realise his mistake

Now he has to work hard 

Continue soon 

Posted: 4 years ago

Part - 2

Next Day

Jindal House

All where present at hall except the three daughter-in-law. Akshat was pacing back & forth.

K:Papa baith jahiye

Akshat just gave him a look.

V: Papa aise idhaar se udhaar chalne se woh log jaldi wapas nehi avenge

An: Haan bhai sirf der ghante huya hai

AJ(irritated): Exactly Angad pure der ghante hua hai bahuya wahan gayi hai.. na koi call na message.. kitna time lagta hai..

Da:Laala shannt hoja ajayegi.. lo agayi

Just then the three daughter-in-law's entered the house with gloomy faces.

All went towards them.

AJ: Kuch kaam hua?

Three of them looked at each other & nodded their head in negative. Akshat took a long breath.

Da:Kam se aur kaam bigda toh nehi

S: Dadi sayad aur thoda sa aur bigad gaya hai

All turned their heads towards them.

An:Kya matlab saraswati ji

L: Woh..

AJ: Saaf Saaf batayi kya hua hai wahan

Three of them looked at each other & started telling what happened.

FLASHBACK

Gupta House

The three daughter-in-law's took Shagun for their to be sasuma. Gupta family members were waiting for them at hall when they came. Durga went to Kaushalaya gave Shagun plate to her & indicated towards Guddan. Kaushalaya realized their plan & nodded her in agreement & took the plate.

D: Yeh Shagun humari hone wali saas ke liye

K: Guddan yeh pakad

G: Par maa yeh toh Chutki ke liye hai

K: Haan toh mein sirf pakadne ke liye bol rahi hun

Guddan unwillingly took the shagun. Saraswati came with a dupatta which was supposed to be placed on bride. Guddan & Revati were sitting together, as she went towards them just before Guddan she acted like she was falling & the dupatta falls on Guddan.

S(acting): Sorry sasuma pair phisal gaya.. abb jab yeh dupatta Guddan ji par gir gaya hai koi baat nehi Revati sasuma ko hum dusra dupatta apko baad mein denge

Revati realized what was going on she nodded her head smiling. Guddan looked at them & started doubting on them. Laxmi came forward with mehendi & like Saraswati just in front of Guddan she dropped the bowl of mehendi on Guddan's hands. Guddan was shocked. All the ladies were trying not to laugh & Bhushan just shaked his head as only he knew this is only the calmness before the storm.

L(acting): Sorry galti se.. lekin apko nehi lagta yeh bhagwan ishara hai.. sayad bhagawan bhi yehi chahte hai ki aap bhi humari badi saas ban kar wapas chale.

Guddan looked at them curiously.

K: Haan Guddan dekh bhagwan ke marzi ke age hum kon hote hai.. wapas chali jaa Guddan..

Guddan got up from her seat & went near the house temple.

S(whispering): Sayad thoda sa kaam hua hai

Guddan returned with ganga jal started pouring on her mehendi hands & removed the mehendi. All were shocked with her actions. Guddan then put the dupatta on Revati's head & took the mehendi & put on Revati's hand. She turned towards the daughter-in-law's.

G: Lord Krishna kuch ishara karna chahte ya na aap log kya karna chahte sab samaj araha hai

All ladies became embarrassed as they were caught red-handed.

G:Aap logo ka laga aap log aisi betuki harqat karenge aur hum maan jayenge

K: Guddan beta

G: Bash mummy.. agar aap ya Chutki ya Chutki ki bahuyon aise betuke harqat phir karegi toh hum yeh ghar aur seher chod ke chale jayenge

Saying this she went to her room & closed the door strongly.

FLASHBACK ENDS

AJ: Mana kiya tha maine par nehi kisiko  meri sunni kahan hai

Da: Arey lalla toh humlogo kya pata tha Guddan aise ghar chodnegi baat karegi

An: Bhai main yeh shaadi nehi karunga jab tak bhabhi wapas nehi rahegi

AJ: Haan tu yeh shaadi se mana karega aur Guddan jitna bhi issh ghar mein aati teri wajah se aana chodegi.. shaadi toh hogi teri

K: Par papa abb

AJ: Ab jo karna hoga mujhei karna hoga

Gupta House

Guddan was standing in her balcony & was thinking about today's event. Suddenly someone knocked on her door.

G: Chutki Hume akela chod de

The door was knocked continuously. Irritated she went & opened the door & was shocked to see the person in front of her. It was Akshat. He was carrying a packet.

G: Aap yahan

AJ: Andar asakta hun? Zaroori baat karni hai

Guddan went inside the room & Akshat followed her. She turned towards him.

G:Jo bolna hai zaldi boliye

AJ: Main janta hu tumhe mujhse baat nehi karni par yeh Angad aur Revati ke shaadi se related matter hai

G: Kya hua hai

AJ: Buaji arahi hai aaj sham ko

G(shocked): Kya kyun

AJ: Angad aur Revati ke shaadi ke liye.. unhe humare ghar kuch din jo kuch bhi hua hai kuch nehi pata aur nahi koi batana chahta hai.. unhe yeh bhi nehi pata ki hum dono.. hum dono alag horahe.. unhe acha nehi lagega aur shayad tumne jo soch unki badlane mein madat kiyi hai sayad phir woh waisi hojaye

Guddan started thinking about it. Akshat kept the packet on her bed.

AJ: Tumhe agar thik laga toh jab tak woh ahan hai tab tak tum uss ghar mein wapas ajao

Guddan looked at Akshat shocked.

AJ: Issh packet mein tumhara saman hai jo tumhe chahiye.. Mujhe yakeen hai tum buaji ka bharosa nehi todugi

Saying this he left from there. Guddan opened the packet it was a box, she opened it, her mangalsutra & bangle was present. She started thinking.

Evening

Jindal House

All are waiting for Buaji & Guddan.

Da: Tujhe kya lagta hai Guddan ayegi?

AJ: Jitna mein Guddan ko janta hun woh zaroor ayegi..

Just then Buaji entered the house. All took her blessings.

Bu: Arey lalla humari favorite bahu kahan hai.. india ki youngest saas

AJ: Woh buaji woh..

G: Hum yahan hai buaji..

All turned towards main door. Guddan was standing wearing saree, her mangalsutra & her bangle. All were happy seeing Guddan. She went towards buaji & took her blessings.

Bu:Kahan se arahi hai

G: Woh buaji hum apne mayke gaye the ab issh ghar ke saas ke saath saath ek behen bhi toh isliye

Bu: Woh toh hai chal saath mein sandhaya arati karte hai

All went towards temple & started doing arati. When it was Guddan & Akshat they came forward & was about to do arati, buaji stopped them.

G: Kya hua buaji

Bu:Guddan itni laa parwa kaisi hosakta ho bina mang mein sindoor lagaye aarti karne jaa rahi thi

Guddan touched her maang & realized in a hurry she forgot to put sindoor.

G:Woh buaji

Bu:Koi baat nehi lalla tu Guddan ki mang bhar de phir dono aarti karo

Guddan was shocked & Akshat was happy. They both looked at each other. Akshat took some sindoor & put on Guddan's mang. Guddan closed her eyes when he was putting sindoor. They looked at each other for a while.

Bu:Ab aarti karo

Both started doing aarti.

G(in mind): Jitna hum Jindal Saab se dur jaane ki koshis kar rahe hai kuch na kuch aisa horaha hai ki yeh mumkin nehi horaha hai.. nehi shaadi ke baat hum yeh seher humesha humesha ke liye chod dege

AJ(in mind): Aaj bhalei Guddan issh ghar mein majboori se ayi hai par bohat jald woh khushi khushi mere saath iss ghar mein wapas ayegi yeh mera wada hai


Sorry for grammatical mistakes.

Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing👍🏼

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