Ye Un Dino Ki Baat Hai

|| SAMaina FF || Deserve to be loved? *Part 3 - pg 16* (Note pg 21)

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    Deserve To Be Loved?

Hello everyone, 

This concept is also set in 90s but storyline is different from that of serial. Characters are same, though there are some changes which you would get to know as the story would proceed. 

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Index : - 

Part 1- page 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/149361044?tid=5057561

Part 2 - page 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150685036?tid=5057561

Part 3 - page 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150718756?tid=5057561

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                        PROLOGUE

"uncle.. Uncle please save me, meri family Zabardasti meri shaadi kara rahi hai, please muje bacha lijiye" she pleaded, panting for breath.

The man looked at the girl dressed in a traditional attire, which he assumed to be her bridal dress.

She was panting heavily and her face was stained with tears. He looked behind her to find a group of people, screaming a girl's name. Though they were far behind but he could see the colour fading from girl's face as she heard the voice.

Without wasting a second, he quickly guided her to his car and drove away.

"tum kahan ki rehne wali ho" he asked as he looked at the girl lost in her own thoughts, tears flowing from her eyes continuously. 

Though sobbing, she managed to reply in a shivering voice "vo mai..vo.. Ahemdabad ke paas ek gaav hai bakrana, vahan.." 

"acha acha theek hai..tum rona band karo.." and he passed his handkerchief to her, which she accepted with her trembling hands "shukriya" 

After a few minutes. 

"tumhe darr nahi laga ki aise ek anjaan par tumne bharosa kar liya" he asked curiously 

"iss samay par muje sirf uss shaadi se kisi bi tarah bachhna tha.. Mai ni janti ki yeh sahi tha ya galat. Lekin itna zaroor samj gy thi ki aap ek ache insaan hai."she replied, still trying to calm her shivering self. He nodded. 

The gate to Maheshwari residence opened and the watchman gave a salute. 

He opened both the gates and lead the girl towards entrance, who was quite shocked or rather surprised seeing the mansion which she had only adored in newspapers. 

As he rang the bell, he was welcomed by his better half "arey bobby aagye aap..." and she trailed off looking at the girl beside him. 

She looked at him with questioning eyes, to which he answered that he will let her know once inside. 

"aao beta andar aajao" he asked the girl politely, who just nodded and followed. Her head was still bent down. 

When they were seated in the living room, bobby started "vishakha, yeh ladki.. Kya naam hai tumhara?" he asked. 

"n.. Naina" she replied in a slow whisper. 

"han naina.. Mai phone par baat karne ke liye car se neeche ultra tha, tab yeh aay mere paas madad mangne. Iske parivar wale Zabardasti iski shaadi kara rahe the toh yeh unse bachna chahti thi. Ab aisi halat mei itni raat ko akele ni chor sakta tha toh saath le aya"he explained. 

Vishaka was proud of her husband and decided to look after the girl. She glanced at her face which was ruined due to tears and smudged makeup while the fringes were tied untidyly behind her ears. She was shivering and was trying to cover herself with the pallu. 

"naina.." she called softly

"ji.. Ji.." naina almost jumped

"arey... Daro matt.. Aao mere sath chalo.. Change karke thoda rest karlo, hum dekhte hai ki kaise tumhari madad kar sakte hai. Tum tension matt lo. " she said supporting naina by her shoulders. 

Naina nodded and quitely followed her. Not daring to look anywhere except for the floor. 

The room was upstairs,she climbed them with difficulty as her legs were frozen with fear and were paining due to the long run. 

Vishaka switched the lights onn to reveal the bedroom, which seemed to be rarely used. 

She then left the room and came back after a few minutes while naina was still standing at the threshold of the room. 

"arey bahar kyu khadi ho? Aao andar aao." 

As said she stepped inside, and Vishaka handed her a bag

"ismei mere college ke time ke kuch suit hai. Ho sakta h tumhe aajae. Yeh change karlo, mai tab tak kuch khane ke liye bhijwa deti hu" Naina's state of mind was completely blank at that moment. She obeyed like a doll who just followed instructions, and have no mind to act on own. Vishakha understood what she is going through and decided to give her some time. 

As she left, naina looked in the bathroom mirror, and tried to observe herself , yes she was not in a position to judge what's right and what's wrong. What she knew was that she has managed to escape that hell. 

 

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Vishaka and bobby were discussing about how to tackle this sensitive issue and were firm on not involving police in it as it would be a danger to the reputation of the girl. The servant entered who told that naina have refused to eat anything and wanted to sleep. Also she had asked not to turn off the lights. 

Vishaka thought about talking with her the other morning as till then she would be calm enough to tell everything. Maybe she could tell them what she want to do and accordingly they could take the decision. 

"sameer kahan hai?" bobby asked. 

A guy in a light blue shirt and black pants entered the dining area, whistling and playing with some keys. 

"itni late kahan se aa rahe ho?" he asked

"dad vo kal hi 12th ka result aya tha so party karne gya tha munna pandit ke saath" he replied, making himself comfortable opposite vishakha. 

"acha suno.. Vo.." vishakha started to tell him about the guest. 

"mom please abi muje college ki koi baat nahi karni.". 

"nahi sameer ek baar apni mom ki baat toh sunlo" said bobby

"dad, muje pta hai ki koi bi conversation ho.. Meri padhai par hi khatam hogi. So please..mai jaa rha hu sone.. Kal baat karenge bye" and he almost ran off from there. 

Vishakha started to go after him but bobby stopped her, and asked to talk about it tomorrow as its quite late now. 

As sameer proceeded to open his room, his eyes fell on the light coming from the adjacent room. 

"yeh lights kyu onn hai guest room ki" 

"zaroor koi servant safai karke band karna bhool gya hoga." and he went to the room to switch off the lights. 

When sameer's hand reached the switchboard, he noticed the sleeping form. Confused he took some steps not before clutching to a vase for protection. 

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Liked the idea...would love to read further
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Its a different concept.   Nice. Looking forward nd ty for pm dear
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Very beautiful Tanya.
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Thank god that in this story Visakha and Bobby looks like good characters. Quite eager to know the reaction of Sameer after seeing Naina. Pls update soon.
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Interesting start, please continue. Somehow Sameer needing a vase to protect himself that too from Naina is hilarious.
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Looking forward to read this.. Interesting...
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