Sooper worth w8ng chapter dr......πππ
Sooper worth w8ng chapter dr......πππ
This was so captivating and gripping that I could almost visualise the two actors. Loved the part to bits and I know that I will be reading this again and again.
now I canβt wait for jalal to talk to her again and find out what actually happened to her. But the way he expressed his pain was absolutely mind blowing.
so did jalal leave her there with almost no senior person to look after her?π±
It was worth waiting for this part .
It was an amazing part.
Loved the way you wrote about their feelings after knowing the truth. Loved their encounter.
Waiting to read next part.
It was worth waiting for this part .
It was an amazing part.
Loved the way you wrote about their feelings after knowing the truth. Loved their encounter.
Waiting to read next part.
Thank u dearπ
Originally posted by: pari0706
This was so captivating and gripping that I could almost visualise the two actors. Loved the part to bits and I know that I will be reading this again and again.
now I canβt wait for jalal to talk to her again and find out what actually happened to her. But the way he expressed his pain was absolutely mind blowing.
so did jalal leave her there with almost no senior person to look after her?π±
Thank you so much dear. So glad that you liked it.π
I guess jalal already figured somehow what she has gone through. Now it is the time they both forget about the past agonies and step ahead to future...
Arre Jalal must have more senior persons in the caravan and enough soldiers for security.π π
Amazing update.
I have to read many times until you us the next update. I am eagerly waiting Jalal jodha mann
Interaction personal political and as warrior .
Thank you so much please dont end beautiful story .
Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
Yes they would get a happy ending, but should I end the story so quickly? π
Well darling.. It was just a suggestion since you are finding hard to get content... Becoz instead of abundoning this story without a proper end it would disappoint the readers.. The least u could give is a proper happy ending... Everyone will be happy including jodha n jalal ππ
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