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Bas ek problem hain main romantice manan scene nehi likh sakti.

Mere story me 9th chapter hogaya par ek bhi romantice scene nehi hain.10th chapter main likh diya romance aur manik ki jelousy.11th me unki dosti

Originally posted by: AKHIAWAL

Aasha mene kal raat apni 5th manan story imagine karli.

which are the other four stories?i only read tere mere pyar main

Originally posted by: AKHIAWAL

Bas ek problem hain main romantice manan scene nehi likh sakti.

kyu?hum itni manan scene dekhte hain.par itna to tum likhrahe hoona.uske liye talent chahiya.story to chodo mujhe ek question ki essay answer bhi ache se likhna nahi aati.

u can seek help from neha for romantic scene?agar mere dimag kuch idea aya to mein tum pm karungi(chnces r just 5 %.its my brain na 😕)

do try akhi?may be first time it will not come gud.but later it will improve.tum to other ff bhi padti huna

@akhi mujhe aaj cls hain.i will come evening.par tab tak tumhari mb khatam hogi na?

akhi u will come evening na😕

Abhi tak likhi nehi 4 story.Sirf socha hain.

Comment itna kam aata hain,likhne ka man hi nehi karta.Par main jo karti hoon apne aur manan ke liye karti hoon.Cont karungi.