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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Rach fantastic update loved it
Bittuji is one scared atma, RK made friendship with the ghost, is Madhu really a ghost or pretending to be one to take revenge from the Bhatia, maybe he harmed her family and took the property forcibly from her father.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Awesome update ka..
Bittuji is so nervous ..But RK is too brave..
He was talking with ghost just like friend..
I thought,anyone is acting like a ghost..
Who is that?
Waiting for truth.
update soon ka.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Nice update hilarious one.Bittuji's prayers n rk mocking the ghost.Interesting .
Thanks for pm n update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
😛beautiful update...n dont worry u r doing just an wonderful and amazing job...its perfect...so the mystery continues so is our dear panicking bittuji...anxious for the next update...👏⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Superb update,
poor Bittuji he is so scared,
Rk made friend with the ghost,is that person really a ghost,
continue soon,
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
awesome update di. .
bittuji scared lots. .
rk is so excited. .
Patel is caretaker ..
who cook food last night?
rk talk with ghost. .
early waiting for next part. .di
thanks for pm. .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Awesome part

Rk is crazy..he is talking to ghost as if it's his BF...but is the one he is talking to is really ghost or acting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Nice update dii..
Did i read it right..
There is ghpst in the banglow.. I mean Rk's life..
This ghpst thing reminded mee of my own story.. Where mmadhu is a ghost, & was haunting Rk as she thought rk desgraced her..
Fab update...
Currently liike isnt wprking dii..
Thanks fpr pm :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Thank you @niyu, priya, Sapna,aani,aishu,Manjeet, harini,tinku,rija, ananya, Bhanu .Sorry that I can't thank you individually.i am really busy . Please read and comment.As your comments are really encouraging.thank you.

Marble meadow

Part3

"bittuji I think our ghost is vegetarian.ahe didn't suck his blood."rk
"No chief.you heard the story of a witch who kidnap children and caged them.fed them good food till they get fatty and then take them.like that..."bittuji
"Bittuji how old are you"rk
"I am 40"bittuji
"Not 4 na..You are such an idiot bittuji"rk laughed
Patel bandaged his hand.
"Sir I will prepare lunch"he went to kitchen.
"Bittuji. I am going to write.you go with Patel or else if u need a company call our ghosty"rk
"Hey honey..Where are you.wanna have a company with bittuji"rk
"No...No Chief please I will go with Patel"bittuji went to kitchen.rk went to his room and closed the room
He took the paper and pad to write.he wrote few lines but his mind blocked.he throw the paper and again started writing
After one hour
"Bittuji"rk
"Yes...Chief you finished writing?"bittuji
"No...I am not getting anything in my mind.its just frozen"rk
"Are you saying this chief...Rishab kundra award winning author and script writer"bittuji
"Yes bittuji...I couldn't write ...It's blank... Sometimes I feel I should quit this script writer job.its over demanding ...I used to write for my own happiness...When it became a job I am forced to write..I committed this one...So I am doing this...I think Ihave to take a break"rk
"Yes sir...Radhadji was also complaining that you are not getting time to look for a girl to marry
.After this work think about marriage..Chief"Bittuji
"Yes bittuji... But a girl...I didn't see such a girl whom I felt like make her mine"rk
"When time comes everything will happen by it's own way chief"bittuji
"Yeah may be"rk
"Why did you call me?"bittuji
"Ask Patel ...There is any shops near by...I want to buy a new shoes...It's damaged"rk
"Yes chief"
Few minutes later bittuji returned and said."yes chief here is a small town .We have to go to the right side of the grass land. 3km from here."bittuji
"OK get ready ...Let's go"rk
"OK chief"bittuji
They get inside the car and drove to the right
"Chief now you believe in ghost na"bittuji
"Ghost. ...Bittuji r u mad",rk
"Then what is this whole thing.that laughter...Anklets,white dressed figure and e even witnessed her fury too"bittuji
"Bittuji...I strongly believe be it's a human. "Rk
"But we didn't found anyone ..."bittuji
"Bittuji the vaseffallen from upstairs na...We were Near dining table.so how could we see someone in the upstairs"rk
"But Patel could see na"bittuji
"Yes ...I don't believe this Patel guy too"rk
"But chief how could she hear what ever we tell"Bittuji
"Bittuji you heard the echo... Whatever BN we speak some resonance on that house.its specially made I think.we will check it when we go back."rk
"Chief...A girl"bittuji
A girl riding a cycle in the middle of the road.it seemed that she doesn't heard the car coming.rk blow the horn.but she didn't give the way.he again blow the horn.the girl was riding very slowly and she was enjoying the ride.rk blow the horn continuously..She didn't move ..
"Damn...What type of people are living here.. Strange"rk
He stopped the car and stepped out.hewent behind the cycle and caught i and stopped.the girl looked back astonished..Rk looked at the girl
Thier eyes met he felt something inside his heart .He heard his heart telling him ,"your soulmate"
Few seconds they went out of the reverie..He move to front to face her.
"What are you doing...Hell..Are you deaf..
I am blowing the horn from.15 minute sand you are enjoying your.tide
Are you the queen of this meadow?"rk ahouted
The girl looked at him and signalled she can't hear"what?"rk
Bittuji stepped out of the car and said"she is saying she is deaf"bittuji
"Oh..I am so sorry"rk
The girl signalled what.
Bittuji hold his both ears and bowed and said sorry
The girl smiled."wow... Beautiful "rk thought
He pointed on the car and signelled move.she smiled and nodded.she moved to the side of the road.
"Look chief she is really beautiful..But deaf and dumb.."bittuji
"Bittuji don't speak like this .If she knows lip reading ..She will be hurt"rk
"No way .She couldn't read yours na"bittuji
"Yes..Let's go"rk.He waved to the girl and get inside the car ..And drove away.girl looked at the car and smiled.
"Bittuji it's more than 10 kms we didn't find the town.."rk
"I think we lost the way"bittuji
"Yeah...We will ask someone"rk
They found a villager and asked him.finally they reached the town.it was a small town with some shops.
"Chief I don't think you will get shoes from here."bittuji
They saw decent looking shop.rk parked his car and went inside.
"I want a shoe"rk
"Hey...Madhu show him our collection"shopkeeper
A sweet sound came from the next room
"Yes I am coming kaka..."Madhu went and startled to see rk.
"You...Dumb and deaf"rk
"What are you saying sir...She is. Not. Dumb and deaf .Don't you heard her reply"shopkeeper
"No ...I am dumb and deaf"rk
Shopkeeper looked at them confused
"Come sir I will show you shoes"madhu
"No branded ones.."rk
"Here people very rarely people use shoes..So "Madhu
"Then why did u bought it?"rk
"For losers like you"Madhu
"What?"rk frowned
"No I mean visitors"Madhu
Rk selected one and paid for it."thank you DD.."
"What...?"Madhu
"Dumb and deaf"rk
Madhu glared at him...
"Any restaurants here..."rk
"Why your servant won't prepare any food for you"Madhu
"He will ...But we are hungry and it's a long distance to travel"rk
'"what ... Marble meadow it's just 3 km from here"Madhu
"What...How do you know we stay there"rk
"It's nota great deal.. it's a village and if someone came to stay there .. It's a miracle..So we all know about it Mr Rishab kundra"Madhu
"Oh so know my name too DD..Then y did u do that acting"rk
"Just I like to annoy people"Madhu
"Wow that's a great hobby...Keep it up till I get a slap from someone"rk
"No one here dare to slap madhubala"Madhu
"So DD you are the main goon of this village"rk
"No...I am the queen of this village"Madhu
"OK...I quit...Can u answer me.. Restaurant?"rk
"No go back and take the food made by Patel.dont waste food"Madhu
Rk get out of the shop and went to his car.
"What type of girl is she?"bittuji
"Jungli Billy.."rk smiled and looked back at her.madgu was looking at him.he wincked and gave her a flying kiss.madhu stared at him.

Marble meadow
Evening

Rk was lying on the bed and smiling.."why are you smiling chief"bittuji
"I was thinking about that girl.."rk
"Ghost?"bittuji
"No bittuji... Madhu.. Madhubala"rk
"Chief...She mocked us.and you are smiling for that"bittuji
"I feel like I want to see her again"rk
They heard a loud sound.rk went out of the house.and saw the books are fallen from the.shelf...
Patel came and look around
"Oh...Welcome honey u r back..I thought you left us "rk
They heard the sound of anklet
"There she is...I will call u honey..No problem na"rk
Sound of anklet
"I think she liked it...Honey"rk
Again sound of Anklet
"Chief...She is conversing with u"bittuji
"Yeah it's my charm bittuji...No girls even a ghost can't resist me"rk
They heard a vague laughter.

Night
Clock strikes 12.rk was trying to write but he couldn't.he heard a vague conversation..
"Who is that ?At this time?... honey?"rk
He walked to the hall and realized the sound is coming from Patel's room.he went there.
"Patel.."rk
He looked back startled...He was facing a huge potrait..
"What r u doing talking with a potrait at midnight?"rk
"No... Sir...I just..."Patel
Rk looked at him with a frown
"Sir...It's I was trying to talk with honey..."Patel
"Honey?"rk laughed
"Yes'patel
"Did she talk with you"rk
"No"Patel
"She won't talk with you Patel...She is mine.. hein na honey?"rk
They heard the sound of anklet.

Morning

"Chief where are you going..?"bittuji
"Just to the town"rk setting his hair
"Town...?Want to buy something?"Bittuji
"No just ...I want get a mood to write"rk
"May I come with u"Bittuji
"No bittuji you stay here"rk left
"I know chief where you are going"bittuji said to himself.

Town
"Hello DD ...I mean Madhu..."rk
"You...Any problem with your new shoes.you want to replace it?'Madhu
"No...I.just want to talk with you"rk
"With me..But y"madhu
"It's just about ..."rk
"About...?"madhu
"Dinosaur"rk smirked
"Rk..."Madhu rolled her eyes
"Where is your house madhu?"rk
"At the meadow s"madhu
"There are another houses in the meadow"rk
"No marble meadow and our house"Madhu
"Our house... ?"rk
"Yeah me and Patel bhai"Madhu
"Do you are Patel's sister"rk
"Yes..."madhu
"Did u come to ask me this?"Madhu
"No...I.want to tell you something"rk
"What?"Madhu
"It's...It's...I will tell you later.."rk left back
"What happened to him?"Madhu

Night at marble meadow

Rk come to his room after dinner.he took his writing pad and startled . Bittuji saw rk in trance
"What is it chief?"bittuji
Rk handed him the pad..
"Complete your story and go back...Honey"
Rk and bittuji looked at each other'


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Edited by magicalmirage - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Nice update chechi..
So rishbala met..
But that gost..rk is calling her honey lol..
Something is fishy about patel..
Waiting for next part..
Vegamakattea...
Thanks for the pm..
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