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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Supervampire

superb update

rk is in full mood to face this ghost
but seriously who is doing this?
its a ghost or someone else?
thanx for pm Di

Thank you.Our rk is very brave na.. Will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: RijaMalik

Awesome update..

Madhu's entry is on the way..

Thank you.madhus entry in coming episodes. Will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Tinku16

😛hi thank u for the pm...lovely narration...the whole scene was running in view ...that fantastic...waiting for the next ...👏⭐️

Thank you . Will update soon with some more scenes.but not confident enough
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Thank you . Please keep reading.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Awesome part... is that madhu who is doing all the stuff to welcome rk n bittu!??

Its interesting to read this skoopy things. ..waiting for next part

Thank you.please keep reading.will update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Amazing part di. .
I feel like watching some horror movie. .
bittuji. .poor boy he is so scared. .
candles, rose petals, bouquets, black cats ,anklets sounds. .wow. .like horror movie. ..
and not forget. .door opens itself. ..
early waiting for next part. .
thanks for pm

Thank you.happy to hear it's working coz I was not confident enough.will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Here is the next update.but frnds I am really not confident about this story coz I don't know it's working or not in the way u expect.please suggest I have if there is any error

Marble Meadow

Part2


"chief...Did u hear the sound?"bittuji
"Yes.. Bittuji someoneis here.qe have to find ..Come let's search the house."rk
"No need chief..It will come to us when the clock strikes 12"bittuji
"Oh..Ho stop this nonsense..I am going to search.if you want to join you come with me otherwise go and sleep"rk
"It would be better to stay with chief .. Otherwise the ghost may come and write my end first."bittuji thought.he followed rk.they searched each and every corner of the house but found no one.
"What's it...Bittuji..."rk brushing his hands through his hair.
"Chief I told u...Let's go back please"bittuji
"No bittuji I don't believe in these supernatural type things.if there is something like that...I want to know about it."rk
"Oh god then I am going to die...If l had a little clue about it.i would have certainly got married to a pretty girl and had two or three children"bittuji thought and sighed.
"Why are you staring at me?"rk
"No...I were thinking about marriage..."bittuji
"Marriage..?"rk asked bewildered
"Yeah...Leave it chief.."bittuji sighed
"OK... Whatever clean the kitchen and sleep"rk
They went to kitchen and startled to see it perfectly cleaned .
"Bittuji...Who done this?"rk
"Ghost...Chief"bittuji said shivering
Rk looked tensed"someone is mocking us bittuji...Some human "rk
"But chief we were here and we didn't found anyone."bittuji
"We were upstairs searching that sound and meanwhile he can do this"rk
"It's not he chief...It's she...The ghosts are always females..."bittuji
"Yes of course and they will sing a beautiful song in the midnight...With chores by wolves..Woo... Anklet sounds ...White saree... Bittuji you are really filmy"rk laughed
"Chief..."bittuji
"Shut up and come let's sleep.i am damn tired by driving"rk

Midnight

The wolf's were howling.bittuji crawled himself under his duvet and covered his head.
Someone touched him and he screamed aloud.
"Bittuji ...Y r u screaming I just checked whether you have fever...You were shivering like nothing..."rk
"Chief you made my life out of me..That wolves..."bittuji
The sound of anklet heard... "It's coming"bittuji
Rk looked out opening the window."chief close it please..."bittuji.
"Shhh..."rk signalled
They saw a figure wearing white dress in the courtyard yard.it was moving towards the gate.it opened the gate and disappeared in the grass field.
"Bittuji...Look it's gone"rk
He looked at bittuji not getting any answer.he searched for bittuji and found him on the floor passed out...Rk springled water on his face.he wake up and looked around."chief...Chief...I told u .Ghost is here,I think it went to fetch it's friends.so that they have a party with two virgin blood."bittuji
"Bittuji you r a virgin...At this age?"rk
"Why not I am not married and I am not that old...Mind it Han"bittuji
"OK...OK"rk snaked his hand over bitujis shoulder."oh bittuji...You r wrong..Look it's coming alone...No friends"rk
"It's coming back...Chief please help me do you have a holy Cross or any holy water.."bittuji said terrified.
"Relax bittuji ...It's going to the other side.its holding something."rk
"May be someone's body..It may have stocked it's food for some days .That's y it spared us."bittuji
"Yes..It may be keeping busy the food in a huge fridge outside the grassland.may be went there to take it"rk said sarcastically.
It again disappeared in the grass.
"Bittuji I going to search..."rk
"No way chief...I won't allow you...I have a responsibility on you.thats y radhaji sent me with you"bittuji
"OK...Then let's sleep"rk
Rk heard a wispher.he looked around and saw bittuji sitting on the bed and whispering.
"Bittuji...What are you doing?"rk
"I am saying some prayers"bittuji
"Just stop it and sleep"rk
Again after some time rk heard whispering.he looked at bittuji whispering under the duvet
"Bittuji stop it and let me sleep...And pray in your mind.tomorrow morning you will be goings
back."rk
"Really ...Thank you chief"bittuji

Morning
Rk wake up and saw bittuji packing Thier bags.
"What are you doing"rk
"Packing ...We are leaving na.."bittuji
Rk crawled out of the bed."not we..It's only you"rk
"Chief...But..."bittuji
"I can't bear you any more bittuji...So go back"rk
They heard the knock at the door.
"Chief don't open...It's the ghost...It may be it's breakfast time"bittuji hold rks hand
Rk swatted bittuji s hand and opened the door.a man was looking at them astonished.
"Sir ...I am Patel...Care taker of this house"
"Oh...where was you last night"rk
"Sir...But they said that you will only reach today by morning..So I thought..."Patel
"OK...Come inside"rk
"Sir...But last night you two were here...Are you planning to go back?"Patel
"Why...?"rk
"It's...No one dare to stay here at night...Even I won't come here after six..This is a haunted place"Patel
"Did you have any such experience"rk
"Yes ...Sir...After that I won't stay here at night"Patel
"Sir I will make the breakfast ...You were starving from last night"Patel
"No we had dinner...Our ghost friend made it for us."rk
"What..?"Patel looked astonished.
"Sir...U are leaving today before 6na?"Patel
"No...I won't I want to know my ghost friend "rk
They heard a thud and sound of anklet.patel looked around in fear.
"Don't worry it's just her warning..She is welcoming u and Don't worry she is harmless and a good cook too."rk
They heard a vague laughter."there she is...I think she liked my comment.r u my dear ghost?...Oops sorry I don't know your name..."rk
His sound echoed.there was no reply.
"Patil go and make breakfast..."rk
"Yes sir..."Patel
Rk and bittuji were taking breakfast.
"Patel...How many years you have been here"rk
"Five years...Before that my father.when he got I'll.i took in charge."Patel
"Who owns this place"rk
"Some one named sikkandher Bhatia...ihe never visited here."Patel
"Actually the owner was shamsher Malik?"rk
He heard a loud voice and a flower vase fly from nowhere and ended on the floor trashing into pieces ...
"Chief..."bittuji jumped out of the chair .Patel look startled.
"Sorry...Frnd I didn't know about your problem with the owner...OK I am stopping this Convo"rk said loudly.
Silence prevail..
"Patel clean it...I think she is OK.."rk
Patel cleaned the shattered pieces .his finger got cut and the blood oozed out"ouch"
"What's it...Blood...Oh god that ghost will come out now to suck your blood"bittuji


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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Amazing update
Oh my god bittuji I loved it n rk made friend with ghost n started to understand her
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Superb update
I think this ghost has became frmd of rk
I m loving this story very much
Loved last part most it was funny
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
amazing update chechi..
is really there is a ghost..?
is it madhu..?
ghost-human love..it seems intresting..
plz..plz continue soon..
cant wait for our madhu.. thanks for the pm..
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