#9MaNan FF: Dheere Dheere Chapter 40/Pg118/28th-January-17 - Page 23

Mao itne bade update pe mein kya comment Karun...
It a Bata sakti Hun tht I loved it...
Everything abt it...
Finally jack k liye ladki a gayi...
Manan were awesome...
Luved every bit of it...
Ab mein kya Kahun..
So Isi se kaam Chalale pls...
Waiting for next...
Update soon...
Love u Mao...
Ur the best...

Lovely update no words awesome..you're really amazing writer...everything was awesome Manan romance and fab 5 bonding too good ...new entry for jack...eagerly waiting for update ... Thank you so much for longest update 👏

Wow wat a beautiful sexy update
Manan nd der amazing bonding
Manik's care for nandu
Nd his last ve is beyond the bonds...//
Manan love for each other... Is totally pure ...

Twinkle ki entry ab aayegi jack ki lyf m koi...

Plzzz update new part soon

This update was like a journey. There was every element needed in the story. Romance, Fights, Action, Love.
Loved Twinkle's entry. She looks like someone who will give Jack a run for his life. Manik & Twinkle, their bonding is new & loved the way how they connected on the level of brother-sister.
Nandini was trapped & Manik has his life in her. If anything happened to her he would have never forgiven himself. Tiger's anger towards Manik.
But the most sweetest thing was Nandini wanting only Manik. He is her comfort.
The fight sequence with the boys. And Manik's anger when he spoke about Nandini & the last scene of MaNan was bliss :)

Mindblowing update...

Nandini got stuck...manik is feeling guilty that he was not their...he was so much scared for nandu...

Tiger n jack so much angry on manik...tiger was right on his place...

Twinkle ...wow jack will not crible now for gf...

Fab5 fight was superb...u amazingly describe...

jack online joke during fighting...was too gud...

tiger n manik sort out their differences...

Jack n twinkle fight is too funny...

Manik telling nandu bedtime stories...n he happily telling her...

Loved d update...

MAWARA ...muaahhh



AWWWYYY ... MANAN KA LOVE SCENE ...AWESOME...LOVELY...

Mawara... swthrt... whta an update dear...

loved the morning romance of manan... nandu knows manik very well...without opening her eyes she knows what he would be doing...

he stares her...she comes to know...
he wants his jogging shoes...she knows where she is pointing... so cute...


when manik asked for lending his help...twinkle thought he is some flirt...heheee...she doesn't knows him...he only knows how to flirt with his baby only...

ohhh manik got his sister...Twinkle...

"Kbhi kbhi aik pal me paraye apny ho jatay aur
kbhi kbhi apno ko praya hony main aik pal nahi
lagta!" She said lowly and I stared at her sad face. ...HER WORDS TELLS US HER OWN FAMILY HAD ABANDONED HER...OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT..

"Ap ny mjy bigaar diya hai! Ap kay bina nend he
ni ati! So I woke up!"

"Let me guess! The name of that doctor is Manik
Malhotra is it?
..loved these dialogues n phn convo...

manik got so scared on not finding nandu anywhere but when he found her...her condition took away his heart...

Jack n tiger was so furious on manik...n was blaming him for nanduz condition... but he wasn't at fault... but at that tym nobody's mind was working properly...

loved nanduz baby ness... she wants to hear more n more stories... n manik also gets affected from her puppy face...awww... i wonder how their babies would b... they are gonna b super cute n naughty...

nandu misunderstood Twinkle... n was ready to pounce on her like hungry lioness... but when manik told her about his new sis she welcomed her openheartedly...

"It's okay Uncle! Badtmeez tou main bhi bohat
hoon!"
"Main kam dangerous hoon kya Aunty?" ...manik n his self praising n self boosting... loved it


"Yaar me kesy andar jany ko boloon? Meri tou koi
girlfriend ni hai!" Jack whispered in my ear and I
glared at his bad timing of lame jokes. ... ...DONT WORRY MR tumhare liye bhi hamari writer ne dhondli h gf... then from next time say it to the Twinkle...

akhiyan ruhani ...HAYEEE LOVED THE SONG...AAJ KAL YEH HI CHADA HUA H JUBAAN PE...



nandu once again fell in love with her man...

twinkle n jack face off was good...poor him...he had to adjust himself on couch... heheee

n there romance was superb...

Don't separate manan