MaNan SS-A Delicate Love Story POSTED TILL P31,REMAINING PARTS DELETED - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
So mukthi is manik's side.
let's see how they gonna make her agree...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update..
wow.. manik ne nandu ko Sameer ki behen bana diya. hahaha!!
and nandu took the gift again.. awww..
loved it..
waiting for the next eagerly..
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's really a cute n delicate love story
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome loved it
So finally manik n multi n bro n sis so now nandini will not be able to get away from manik n let them be together
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part-14

At night,

Nandini was testing all the bangles and admired herself in them.She smiled looking at her reflection in the mirror and then her phone rang flashing the name MANIK.Her smile disappeared and became serious all over again while attending the call.

Nan-Hello..

Ma-Ab tak gussa ho...??

Nan-Call kyun kiya..??

Ma-Hmm...Bangles kaisa hai...??

Nan-Wo toh aap ne khud dhekha hoga na...

She said in a firm tone.

Ma-Ha...par...uske baad kya hua..yeh mein ne nahi dhekha...kasam se...

He smirked while Nandini's words stuck in her throat when she understood what he meant.

Nan-Aap ka mathlab..??

She asked slowly.

Ma-Ignore...did u have ur milk...??

Nan-Wo..mein...

While she was stammering,she heard a knock at her door.

Nan-Manik jii...koi aaya hai...good night..

Ma-Ok good night...but have ur milk..

She hung the call and opened the door and as his daily routine,it was Harshad with milk glass.

Harshad left the room when Mukthi called him.

Har-Hey Mukthi...tum iss waqt..??

Muk-Haa..wo...mein...baath karni thi...

Har-Nandini se..??

Muk-Nahi...tum se...

Har-Acha..bolo na...

Muk-Nahi..phone pe nahi...Are u free tomorrow..??

Har-Yeah...

Muk-Ok...evening at coffee shop...I'll be waiting...

Har-ok...Good night...

Muk-Good night...

...

Next day morning,

Malhotra Mansion...

Manik woke up when his alarm started beeping.He was shocked to see the time.

"Oh my god...!!! It's 8...I missed my jog...but I have set the alarm for 6...who changed it..!!"He thought and looked around in his room.

"Might be alarm fault.."He thought and went to freshen up after taking his suit.

He came out of washroom and saw that the suit he has kept is changed.

"Mein toh yeh waali nahi rakha tha..."He thought and examined the suit.

"Hmm..shayad Mom has changed this.."He thought and wore it.

He came down and joined his Mom and Dad at dining table.

Nyo-Good morning beta...

Ma-Good morning Mom...Morning Dad...

Raj-Morning beta...aaj bahut handsome lag rahe ho...new suit huh...??

Manik smiled looking at Nyonika and said "Ha..wo Mom ne diya hai..."

Nyo-Mein...???nahi toh...!!!

Manik looked at her in confusion and said "But...I thought...it was u..."

He thought for a while and then Raj tapped his hand and asked "kya hua beta...??"

Ma-kuch nahi dad..

Raj-khao...

Manik looked at his plate and called the servant "Ramu kaka...mera omlet kaha hai.."

He came running and said "Baba..yahi toh rakha mein ne.."

Ma-yahi rakha toh ud gayi kya...??

He said in frustration and the servant said "Sorry Baba..mein abhi le kar atha hu.."

Manik got a call and excused himself and returned after a minute.He again saw that his omlet was missing and called the servant raising his voice.

Ma-Ramu kaka...kitne dher lagathe ho aap...??

Ramu kaka-Baba..par...mein toh phir se le kar aaya tha...

He said being confused while Manik looked at him angrily.

Nyo-Ha beta...Ramu ne toh le kar aaya tha...

She said and smiled mischievously.Manik sensed something and began thinking.

"Subah alarm..phir mera suit...aur ab dho baar mera omlet...kuch toh gadbad hai..." Manik thought and his eyes blinked after a minute indicating that he found the answer.

"Mom...!!!!! Mathlab...wo aa gaya...!!!!" He asked in excitement while Nyonika smiled widely saying yes.

Ma-Kaha hai wo..??

Nyo-wo toh tumhe hi patha hona chahiye na...

She smirked while Manik hugged her tightly and ran towards his room.He opened the door widely and searched the entire room.

"Beta..kaha ho tum...??? Come out na..."He said while searching under the bed.

"I know u r somewhere here...come out na beta...I wanna see u..."He called while searching everywhere.

Finally he gave up and turned to leave saying "Acha..ok...math aana..I'm leaving.." and stopped when someone hugged him tightly.He smiled and hugged him back "Dhruv...meri jaan..."

Dhruv came back after completing his MBA in US.

D-Bhai...I missed u so much...

He broke the hug and kissed his cheeks.Manik cupped his face and said "I missed u too beta...ab batha...kaisa hai thu...?? How are ur studies...??"

D-Uff...Studies...math pooch bhai...I got bored of my college...

Ma-Acha...par kyun...??

D-Ek bhi ladki achi nahi hai...aur beautiful ladki hamare taraf dhekhthi bhi nahi..

He complained making a sad face.

Ma-Acha bachchu...I was asking about studies and u were talking about girls...

He said and twisted Dhruv's ear and hugged him.

D-Bhai..nice perfume...mein le loo..??

Ma-anything for u..take it beta...

D-Bhai...I'm 23...don't call me beta...

He said like a child.Manik pinched his cheeks and said "Tum chaho jitna bhi bada ho jao...mere liye toh u r still 1 year baby...mera pehla bacha ho tum..."

Dhruv smiled and asked "Acha...toh dhoosra kab ayega..???"

Manik too smiled and answered "Wo toh tum apni bhabhi se poochna..."

Dhruv was shocked.

D-Bhai...are u serious...??bhabhi...??Manik Malhotra ready for marriage...???

Manik started blushing.

D-Wait...one second...Bhai...tell me one thing...aap ladki toh nahi doond liya na..??

Manik smiled seeing him and Dhruv opened his mouth widely and hugged him.

D-Bhai...I'm so happy...It means aap ko apni dream girl mil gayi...

Ma-Haa mere bhai...mil gayi...

He said slowly.

D-Kya hua Bhai...?? Kuch pareshaani hai...??

Manik nodded and explained the complicated situation.Dhruv carefully listened him and said "Wow Bhai...iss generation mein bhi aisi ladki...!!! Amazing...family ko itnaa importance...Bhai..mujhe unhe dhekhna hai..."

Ma-No Dhruv...not today..urgent kaam hai..

D-Bhai..plz...mujhe bhabhi ko dhekhna hai...plzzz...

He pleaded and Manik couldn't say no to Dhruv.

Ma-Acha..chalo...ready ho jao..but Dhruv...promise me...waha koi shaithani nahi..samjha..??

D-Jii bhai..I won't do anything...pakka promise..

Ma-Good...that's like my good boy...

He said and Dhruv went to change.

...

At college bus stop,Navya was about to cross the road and then came Cabir with the same plan which worked out for Manik.So,he extended his hand in front of Navya and asked "May I help u..??"

She gave deadly glare at him and said "Do I know u...??"

Cabir nodded in a no.

"Then get lost.."She said in a firm tone and crossed road easily.

Cabir scratched his head and thought "Yaar...It worked for Manik..then why not for me..??Hmm...saari ladkiyan Nandini jaisi thodi na hothe hai..."

He thought and left for office.

...

Soon,Manik drove Dhruv to Nandini's college and shown Nandini and her friends who were walking.

Ma-Wo...white chudidhar wali...Nandini..

Dhurv was mesmerized seeing the beauty of Nandini.

D-Woww...beautiful...

He said in slow motion.

Ma-Hai na..??

Manik asked proudly.

D-Haa Bhai...she is no less than any angel...Simply superb Bhai...Aap ka choice...the bessstt...perfect Jodi...

He said and hugged Manik.

Ma-Ab chale..??

D-arey aise kaise..??baath toh karne dhijiye apne bhabhi se...

Ma-No Dhruv..plz let's go...

D-Bhai..plz...I'll behave myself..I won't trouble anyone...plzz Bhai...bas introduce karke aa jaunga...plzzz...

Again,Manik has fallen for his trap.

Ma-Ok...tum chalo..mein car park karke aatha hoo...but Dhruv..don't mess up the things..

D-ok Bhai..Don't worry..

He stepped out and headed towards girls who were seated in the canteen by then.He took a seat opposite to Nandini.

Muk-Excuse me...Who are u...??

D-Oh Hai...tum...Mukthi...???

Muk-Haa par...tum koun..??

D-It's ok...

Nav-oh hello...koun ho tum..??

D-Oh yeah...Navya..right...??

He said and extended his hand and then Aliya interrupted "Who the hell are u...??"

Dhruv looked at her from top to bottom and said "Miss Aliya...the fashion freak...Am I right..??"

Irritated Mukthi held his collar and asked "Zyada hoshiyaari math dhikha...koun ho tum..??"

Nandini stood up and said "Mukthi..leave him...(She looked at Dhruv)aap koun...??"

D-Aap...!!!Wow...u r Miss Nandini Murthy right..??

Nandini sensed something and asked "Aap...Manik jii se related ho..??"

D-Smart guess huh...How do u know..??

Nandini thought "Saying details like him...and asking me how do I know.."

D-Acha...I'm Dhruv...

Ma-Dhruv Malhotra...

Manik corrected.Mukthi smiled seeing him while Nandini took back her serious face.Navya was about to run and Aliya calmed her down.They seated and Manik sat beside Dhruv.

Muk-Manik...koun hai yeh..??

Ma-Kyun Mukthi...??kuch shaithani kiya kya isne...??

Muk-Arey nahi...

Mukthi and Dhruv exchanged smiles and Dhruv stole glances at Aliya.

Ma-Well..This is Dhruv Malhotra...mera beta...

Girls-Betaa...????

They shouted in surprise including Nandini.Manik and Dhruv were taken aback with this reaction.

Ma-Mera mathlab...chota bhai hai mera...He is like my son...in fact bete se bad kar hai..

Nandini relieved and Manik introduced everyone to Dhruv.

When it came to Nandini,

Ma-She is Nandu...I mean Nandini..

As a formality,Nandini shook hands with Dhruv and he said "Nice to meet u Bhabhi maa.."

Girls-Bhabhi maa...??

They again shouted in unison while Nandini looked at Manik.Manik mentally tapped his head not knowing what to do.

D-Jii ha...Bhabhi maa...my brother just loves me more than my dad does...aur love of his life toh mujhe Maa hi hogi...and bhai ki hone wali biwi toh Bhabhi hi hogi na...so Bhabhi maa...

Dhruv smiled sheepishly looking at everyone and then he saw Manik gritting his teeth.Nandini stood up to leave and said "mein aapki bhabhi nahi hoo..."

D-haa ab tak bani nahi hai...but I'm sure...ban jayenge...

Nandini took a deep breath and said "Manik jii..zara apne bhai ko samjhaayiye ga...Bye Dhruv..."

D-Waah Bhabhi maa...kitna respect hai mere bhai se...I just love it...

Manik thought to handle the situation before it goes out of his hand and so he dragged Dhruv with him immediately.

Done...

Hope u like it...

And one more thing...my 2 stories are now available on wattpad which are published by ashiroy on behalf of me...whoever is missing Revenge story,have a look at LOVE BLOSSOMED FROM A MISUNDERSTANDING on wattpad...and this Delicate story as LOVE IS PURE...

Thank you all the supporters and commenters..

Keep supporting...

Edited by keerthupranu - 8 years ago
indrani21dec thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
just super update.
god bless you
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww...manik and dhruv bonding is so beautiful...and bhabhi maa vow...dhruv rocked and bichara cabir kaha phas gaya...navya is very rude ha...Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update... loved it..well written...gift part was mindblowing... nandini took it... mukti saw her... mukti and manik's convo was amazing.. especially Bhai part was phenomenal. Dhruv's intro was superb... manik and Dhruv's bon d was adorable...way nandini guessed dhruv correctly as manik's bro was fabulous..girls reaction to beta ...bhabhi maa were superb...bhabhi maa part was awesome.. super excited to read further... interesting... thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed 😊
Edited by archu_asok - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww amazingg...suprrbbb update
Dhruv ki entry...shaitaan dhruv...aawww bhabhi maa...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Excellent update...
Manan's convo was sweet...
Manruv's bond is amazing...
Dhruv's convo wid nandini & her frnds was awesome...
& d "Bhabhi ma" thing was hilarious...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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