MaNan SS-A Delicate Love Story POSTED TILL P31,REMAINING PARTS DELETED - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
Another amazing update what will Nandu tell Manik... I hope she doesn't ask him to back out n never meet her again... But I'm sure there will be somthing Intresting in it too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Uff... Nandu is letting him go... But not for long.. Manik will surely take out some way out
Lovly update
But it was very emotional
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Posted: 8 years ago
Make Nandini jealous.. Awesome plan...
But my fav part was Navya k murder plans... Bada wale patthar se sir phone do.. Sadat k beech me khada kr do.. Hehehe...

Loved the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update.. Cabir n Manik ka imitation was mast... Nandu bechari sach me jealous Ho gyi... She obviously has feeling for him.. N he will make her confess those felling
Will be eagerly waiting for the next update

Thank u for this lamba wala update and the PM

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part-13

Next morning,

Mukthi and Nandini were walking along the corridor to their class.

Muk-What...?? U called Manik...???

She asked in excitement.

Nan-Ha...wo...wrong dial tha...

She said to cover the matter.

Muk-Acha...toh correct dial konsa tha...??

She asked teasing her.

Nan-Wo...mein...tumhe call karne wali thi...

Muk-Ohh...Then why didn't u call me...??

Nan-Bhool gayi thi...

She tried her best to cover up.Mukthi understood this and smiled.

Muk-Acha...bhool gayi...!! Theek hai...waise...what have u guys talked...??

Nandini made a face and explained the last night's prank that Manik played on her.

Nan-Wo koi unka friend hai Cabir...

Muk-And u believed everything that he said...?? I think wo sach mein Soha hogi...

Nan-Nahi...wo aisa nahi karenge...

Nandini,unknowingly defended Manik.

Muk-But...he might be lying right...??

Nan-No...wo mujh se kabhi jhoot nahi bolenge...

Muk-oah...Itnaa trust...???

Nandini kept mum not knowing what to answer.Just then, she heard someone calling "Diii"

They turned around to see a guy of same age and their eyes popped out seeing him.

Muk-Sameer...!!!

But the guy turned to Nandini and handed over a card and gift box to her.

Nandini looked at him in confusing expression.Mukthi suppressed her smile all this while.

Nan-Sameer...tum...mujhe...Dii..??

Nandini was totally shocked with this because that guy proposed Nandini and even followed her for 1 year and at last gave up saying "U'll come to me.."

Obviously,a guy who can't make a girl fall for him will say this dialog.

Muk-Yeh kisne diya...?? She asked in between her laugh.

He stammered and said bending his head down "Wo...ji...jiju ne diya..."

Nandini too smiled a little and said "Ok...u can go...Thank u..."

He bent his head down all this while and ran immediately.Mukthi laughed pressing her stomach and said "Seriously...Manik...Manik toh kamaal kiya yaar...Sameer...the one who has followed u for one year...Manik ne uss se bhi tumhe Diii bulwaya...!!!!" She couldn't control her laughter and Nandini too suppressed her smile and said "Bas...chup ho jao...But...aisa kya kiya hoga usne...?? I just hope wo Sameer ko maara toh nahi na..."

Muk-Nandu...Manik ki words are enough...He won't allow any dirt touch his hands...Chalo..have a look at the card.

Nandini opened the card and her heart melted immediately seeing the most beautiful SORRY card.

Muk-Wow...

Then she opened the gift box which is a bangles set of all colors as Nandini won't miss wearing bangles.

Muk-Arey waah...They are beautiful...Nandu...aisa ladka kabhi nahi milega tumhe...jo tumhe itnaa pyaar kartha hai...maan jao yaar...Don't stop your heart...

While Mukthi was giving her love lecture,another guy of their college came to Mukthi and said "Dii...yeh aapke liye..." while handing over a card.

Muk-Mere liye...??kisne diya...??

Boy-Bhai ne...

Mukthi took that card and opened to see a THANK YOU card and was written "Thank you so much sister...Zara apne friend ko samjhaa dho aise hi..."

Mukthi smiled seeing it while Nandini was shocked.

"Mathlab...he might be here somewhere around..."Nandini thought and went towards the dustbin.

Muk-Nandu...yeh kya kar rahi ho...??

Mukthi shouted on top of her voice but it was too late.Nandini threw her card and gift in the dustbin while Mukthi stood there in shock.

Muk-Yeh kya kiya tumne...??pagal ho gayi ho...??

Nan-Mukthi...Mujhe unn pe koi interest nahi hai...ab It's time...chalo...Let's go...

She walked leaving behind a shocked Mukthi and devastated Manik,who was hiding all this while.He immediately went to office and sat silently being sad.

...

In the evening,

Cabir entered Manik's cabin and saw him sitting sadly.

C-Kya hua...??

Manik saw him and leaned back on his chair.

C-Bolo...Is everything ok..??

Ma-No...It can never be ok...

C-What...?? What do u mean..??

Ma-Usne mera gift dustbin mein phek diya...She threw her favorite bangles in dustbin just because I have sent them...

He said sadly while they heard a voice saying "Aur wapas bhi le liya usne..."

Both lifted their heads to see Mukthi standing at the door.

Ma-Mukthi...!!

Muk-May I come in..??

Ma-Yeah...of course..please come in...

She came and sat in the chair next to Cabir.

Ma-Cabir...She is Mukthi...and Mukthi,this is my best friend Cabir...

They both shook hands and smiled.

Muk-So..wo tum ho...jiski wajah se meri friend itniii upset ho gayi hai...

She said in a complaining tone while Cabir smiled.

Muk-Manik...tum ne sirf half scene dhekha hai...

Ma-Mathlab..??

Muk-Mathlab...She went back and took the gift again...

Ma-Really...??

He can't believe that.

Muk-Haa...

She said happily seeing him.

C-How do u know...??

Muk-wo...While we are going to class,she said that she forgot her mobile in my bike and ran back...I thought of following her and saw that she took the gift box from there and kept in my bike...and while I dropped her home,she sent me in and took the box...Mein bhi kuch nahi kaha uss se...She don't know that I have seen this...But Manik...I have never seen Nandu like this...She neglected every guy who proposed her..but tumhe...avoid hi nahi kar paa rahi hai...May be she saw true love in u...

She said in a go while Manik's inner soul literally danced listening her.

C-That was something Manik...what to do now..??

He looked at him who was smiling imagining her in that bangles.Mukthi tapped his hand and then came Manik into his senses.

Ma-Mukthi...Thank u so much...really...patha nahi mein kya kya soch raha tha...I thought it's over...

Muk-No...Don't give up...A girl can never go against her heart...and Nandu ke matter mein I'll help u Bhai...

C-What...?? Bhai...??

Cabir asked in shock while Manik smiled listening Bhai for the first time.

Muk-Ha...Kyun Manik...?? Tum ne toh sister bola mujhe...card mein...mein tumhe Bhai nahi bol sakthi...??

Ma-Arey of course bol sakthi ho...

Muk-Chalo...Bhai and Cabir...I'll take a leave...

She stood and hugged Manik and was about to leave.

Ma-Waise...Harshad ke matter mein help chahiye toh bol sakthi ho...

Shocked Muk-tumhe kaise patha...??

Manik smirked and said "Bas patha hai..."

Muk-Oh...Mr.Manik Malhotra has his own ways..right..??I'll definitely ask for help if needed...

She smiled and left.Immediately Manik crushed Cabir's bones in his hug with happiness.

Done...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Superrr


Sooo cute that gift and mukthi bhai scene

Lovelyyy...

When he said harsh and mukti sooo sweeet...

Waiting eagerly

Coun sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Excellent update...
Manik send a sorry card & gift 4 nandini...
She threw it... but later took it...
Manik & mukti's bond is cute...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its really a delicate love story with delicate nandu..she is so cute and innocent and manik is irrevocably madly in love with nandu...manik is so sweet how he is making efforts for nandu..hope nandu confess her feelings...now mukti is also ter to help manik..it wld b exciting now...waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
waiting for next
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Heyyaa... Amazing amazing update... It was extremely cute..bechari Nandu ko smjh nHi a thank woh Kya Kare Kiske against jae...
But this was so beautifully written .. Cutest update of all times

Loved it

Thank u for the amazing update and the PM

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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