I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April - Page 18

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Thank you :)
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Originally posted by: babita..

Nice one Ekta👏👏

Loved to see Pari and Nandu so sweet, but felt sad that Nandu recalls the past and cries a lot.
Manik is so pure at heart and took the accidental lady to the hospital and did all the formalities⭐️⭐️
Hope Manik and nandu meet. Now going to meet Pari, will they meet Nandu too ??

Thanks for the dear and loves🤗



Thank you didi :)
Let's see what happen next :)
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Well narrated Eku...⭐️👏

Loved the cute Pari... n Manik's good state of mind...👏
Will be in wait to see what progress comes up...
BTW,, loved Nandu saying... I plomish... !!!😳
God bless you dear... !



Thank you bhaiya :))
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Originally posted by: navla


amazing update...


Both d kids r too cute...


Nandini cried so much remembering her
past...wht happen in their past...


Manik help that old lady...


Hope manan meet soon...


Loved d update...




Thanks a lot dear :)
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Lovely update Eku dear❤️🤗
More loved the progress in the story! Pari is too cute and Manik's sharp mind acting at the right time, awesome👏
Thanks dear and luv ya!



Thank you bhabhi :))
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Manik and Abhi reached Naina's home ...

Manik rang the bell ...

Shekhar, Pari and Janvi were playing ...no actually Pari and Janvi were doing make up of Shekhar. ..and Shekhar was sitting there all surrendered...

Just then they heard the door bell ringing ...

Naina who was laughing on Shekhar's condition ... somehow controlled her laugh and went to see who was on the door ...

Naina opened the door ...

She saw Manik and Abhi standing there ...she was lil surprised to see them there ..

Her talk with herself ," ye toh Manik h. ..hayo rabba. .agar isne Jaan ko dekha toh puchega koun h. ..main kya bolungi ..."

Manik snapped fingers in front of her as she was lost ...
Abhi giggled ...

Manik : Cutiepie khidhar kho gai???? Andar nai aane dogi??

Naina coming out of her trance , smiled nervously : arey aao na andar aao...

She picked up Abhi and kissed his cheeks. ...on which Abhi made faces and he don't like anyone kissing him ...

Naina and Manik laughed at his gesture ...

They moved inside ... While Naina was carrying Abhi...
Naina and Manik were talking about something and walking towards the hall ...when suddenly they heard Abhi's laugh and that distracted Naina and Manik and what they sawmade them laugh too ...

While both the dolls were standing their giving silly smile and Shekhar was sitting there making bad faces ...

Manik : God Shekhar !! Bro just look at your face ... you are looking like a cartoon !!

Naina seconded him ... Everyone present there were laughing except Shekhar who was making really bad face ...

Shekhar : guys ...stop it ...baht hua. ...

Everyone stopped but once again started ...

He started leaving from there ...when the two princess's stopped him by holding his hands from either sides...

They held their ears and told sorry to him with puppy faces which can melt anyone's heart ...

Shekhar smiled at them and sat on his knees : no problems my cute dolls ...I didn't mind ... :)

They instantly removed the hair clips from his hair and rubbed all the make ups from his face and hugged him ...He hugged them back ...

After breaking hug the Lil girls had look on the new members standing there ...
Pari immediately jumped on Manik : rockstar !!I missed you !!!

At which Manik replied with simple and a kiss on her cheeks ...

Abhi : Haa Haa mujhe kaha koi yaad karta h. ...meri toh yaad hi nai aati na kisiko. ..maine toh socha tha ki apni Pari se milne ko aau magar...koi mujhe ghar wapas le chalo...!!! He said with a grumpy face ...

Pari smiled at him and moved in front of him ...she held her ears and she was going to up and down ...when Abhi stopped her by holding ...

Abhi : oye pagli. ..kya kar rahi h tu?

Pari :apne bhaiya se maafi maang rahi hu. ..

Abhi : arey main mazak kar raha tha. ...

Pari : maine pata tha :P

Elders were smiling at them while Janvi stood there totally confused ...

Manik looked at her and asked : ap koun ho beta?

Janvi : main I am Janvi Mu...

Naina cut her and said : she is my friend's daughter Manik...

Manik found it lil weird while Shekhar through eyes asked Naina what's she upto? .. At which Naina blinked her eyes in an assuring way...

Pari : Didu. ..ap in dono se milo. ...ye hai mere rockstar ( indicating towards Manik) and he is Abhi bhaiya ( indicating towards Abhi)...maine ek baari bataya tha na. ..

Janvi nodded and moved towards Manik and forwarded her hand for handshake...
Manik smiled at her and handshaked with her !

Then, she moved towards Abhi and did the same with him ...

Abhi : Ap toh merese badi ho na main apko didu bolu? He asked cutely

Janvi : Haa ap bol sakte ho... and smiled ...

And then all the children went for playing ...

Shekhar, Naina and Manik sat on the sofa over there ...

They were talking on random topics while Manik was lost ...

Naina called him 4th time ...then he listened her ...

Manik : umm..woh. .haa bolo Naina...

Naina got to know that her friend is not fine because he never calls her Naina...

Naina : Manik kya hua? Are you fine ? Why are you so lost ?

Manik said absentmindly : Sweetie. ...
( then realising what he said ) umm. ..I mean nothing ...I am fine ...

Now , Naina and Shekhar both understood the reason ...

Naina held his hand : Manik. ..

He looked her ...

Naina : See Manik. ...yu kudhko takleef mat do. ..woh thik h. ..I mean hogi. ...kuch chijo ko waqt par chod dena chahiye. ...aur phir rab jee kuch galat nai karenge...

Manik nodded as his eyes got wet ...

Shekhar who was sitting next to him side hugged him ...

Shekhar : don't worry Manik everything will be fine ...

Manik : I hope so ...

Then only Shekhar got a call ...
He excused himself...

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On call

Shekhar : Haa Nandu bolo. ...

Nandini : Shekhar ... tum Sugar ko ab drop kardo. ..I am on the way only ...

Shekhar : okay Nandu...don't worry ...main aata hu usse leke...

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While at the same time...

Naina :Manik... tum chinta mat karo...woh milegi tumse don't worry ...

Manik : cutiepie tumhe toh pata hoga na. woh kaha h toh kyu nai batati... don't I deserve to know ...plz Naina bata do na...

Naina : Manik...I am really sorry plz...mujhe kasam di h usne. ..na usne kisise se milane ko kaha h. ..na kisiko uske baare main batane ko...

Manik half- heartily nodded ...

Till then Shekhar came ...

Shekhar : Naina main Janvi ko chodne jara hu. ..

Naina nodded and called the kids ...

All came. ...


Janvi : kya hua masi?

Naina : beta apke ghar jane waqt hogya h...

Janvi : but mujhe khelna h na Abhi aur Pari ke sath! * She said with a pout*

Shekhar bent to her height : beta mamma ne bola h apko chodne ko na...

She nodded sadly ...

Manik saw that ...
He also didn't know why but he said : umm. ..Janvi agar hum ap teen ko ice cream party ke liye le chale toh?

Janvi jumped on place and hugged him : yes yes ...tab toh jarur. ..

Manik smiled at her ...

Both other kids too was jumping ...

But Naina being worried what if Manik met her said : no no. ...koi nai jayega. ..Manik Shekhar usse chod aayega. ...

Janvi again got sad which Manik couldn't see ..
Manik : arey cutiepie jane do. ..

Shekhar understanding the matter said : Naina ek kaam karte h hum sab Manik ke car se ice-cream parlour tak jate h...and phir waha se driver meri gadi le aayega toh main Janvi ko chod ghar dunga and Manik Abhi ko lekar ghar chala jayega. ...

All the kids looked at Naina with a hope ...

While Shekhar assured with eyes ...

The Naina nodded ...
All the kids jumped on her...


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Hello guys ...so sorry for the delay ..but my updates will be slow ..as I am Lil just with my studies ...

Sorry for errors ...
Take care ..
Lots of love ,
Ekta ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
lovely update...
naina is worried if manik meets nandini n janvi...
abhi is cutie pie n drama king...
abhi n pari bonding is too adorable...
manik is so much lost in nandu...feeling bad for him...
y nandu hiding from them...
want to c more scene btwn manik n janvi...
hope manan came face to face soon...
loved d update...
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Awesome update well done loved it
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Originally posted by: navla

lovely update...
naina is worried if manik meets nandini n janvi...
abhi is cutie pie n drama king...
abhi n pari bonding is too adorable...
manik is so much lost in nandu...feeling bad for him...
y nandu hiding from them...
want to c more scene btwn manik n janvi...
hope manan came face to face soon...
loved d update...



Thank you a lot dear :))
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Thank you :)
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