I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April - Page 17

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Nandini reached Naina's home with Janvi...

She rang the bell ...
A little girl was standing on the door with a smile ...

Nandini smiled at her and picked her up and kissed on her cheeks...and the lil gulf reciprocated the by kissing her back on her cheeks...

Then Janvi spoke: yaha main bhi hu

While the lil girl asked Nandini to put her down ...
Nandini did as she asked...

The lil girl : sholly Janu didu ...I love the most ...

And kissed on her both cheeks ..

At which Janvi smiled and hugged her tightly : and I love my pari the most ...

While Nandini was adoring their bond ...
At so small age ...They were bestest of friends and sisters ...

Nandini : abhi andar chale ya Naina se daant sunna h. ..

Pari : nai nai. ..masi ...chalo na ab. ..ap log bhi na baatoh main laga dete ho
And pulled both of them inside ...

Here Naina shouted from the room : who's there Pari ???

Pari : Maa. ...masi and didu hai. ...
And she smiled widely ...

Nandini sat on sofa and closed her eyes ...While both the girls went in Pari's room...

Naina came : Nandu...

Nandini hmmed still with closed eyes ...

Naina : thank god ..tu aai yaar kab tak kudh ko saja degi... tune toh bas apne ap ko kaid hi kar liya h...

Nandini didn't reply ...just kept her head on her lap ... and fresh tears formed in her eyes ...

Naina caresses her hair ...

Naina : Nandu...plz. ..come out ..kyu itna badal liya kudhko tune...woh tujhe aise dekh kar kitna bura feel kar rahe honge...

Nandini still didn't say anything... just hugged her tightly on her waist ...and tears were continuously from her eyes ...

Naina was continuously caressing her ...she was also in tears...
After whole 8 years ...This was the first time Nandini was listening her in this matter ...or else she always had ignored about it ...

Naina : dekh nandu main ye nai kah rahi ki tu unhe bhul ja magar apne apko dard degi toh unhe bhi dard hoga...woh bhi royenge...woh bhi khush nai honge...unhe toh yahi lagega na ki unki princess unhi ki wajah se ro rahi hai. ...
Nandu...tu khush rahegi toh hi woh bhi khush rahenge na...tujhe unki yaadon main smile karna chahiye naki rona ya upset hona chahiye...

Nandu got up and saw her with tears filled eyes...
Naina rubbed her tears...and nodded in no ...

Naina : nandu ...tu yu rahegi toh uss bachi ka kya hoga...usse jarurat h teri...plz come back ...8 saal hogai h uss baat ko...plz mujhe meri bahen wapis karde...

Nandini hugged her tightly ...continuously crying like a baby ...

Nandini finally spoke : mai rahungi khush. ...I will try my best...I plomish!
Unke liye. ...sugar ke liye and tere liye. ...sab ke liye...

Naina smiled ...

Naina rubbed her tears

Naina : good ...ab kya tu yu hi roti rahegi ...teri beti kya sochegi ki uski mamma kaisi h hamesha roti rahti h...

Nandini laughed a little at her statement...

Just then both the lil girls came ...

Naina : janu kaisi ho beta. ..idhar aao masi ke pas. ..

While Pari went to her masi. ..

Both the girls were telling them ..something...something. ..
On which they were nodding ...
Just then ... A man in 20's entered ...

Man : hello ladies ... !!

All smiled at him ...

While both the lil girls ran to him ...





Introducing Avinash Sachdev as Shekhar Mehra... [ husband of Naina ]

Shekhar sat on his knees and both the girl kissed on the either side of his cheeks and hugged him ...

Both the ladies smiled seeing them ...

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Just then Nandini cell rang !!!!

Nandini picked up the call ...

Nandini : hello !

The person at the other end : hello ! Is Nandini speaking ?

Nandini : yes..

The person :mam...I am talking from city hospital... an old woman had met an accident...we have found that you are the owner of the Janvi old age home ..where she lives ... so I have called you to inform that her condition is critical ...If possible come over here soon ...

Nandini : okay...I am coming ...plz start her treatment ..

And the call ended up ...

Nandini hurriedly got up...

Naina seeing her worried face : what happened Nandu...

Nandini : Naina. ..its emergency I am needed to go ...and Shekhar can you plz drop Janvi home once I will msg you ... ?

Shekhar :yeah sure...

Nandini : sugar. ..I have a important ...ap Shekhar masu ke sath aajana plz...

Janvi nodded and smiled..

She asked her to come lil down by her action..

Nandini did as she said ...

She peeked her cheek and pari on the other side ...

Nandini smiled at both kids ...and the kids smiled back at her ...

Nandini left from there ...

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Nandini reached hospital...

She went to the receptionist and asked her about the call ...

The receptionist told her about the room her ...

And Nandini went there...

She had tears seeing her like this ...

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She was the one who can't see anyone in a little pain too ...and the lady was the person whom she respected a lot. ...she was one of the member of the old age home...

She went to the reception for knowing who has left the lady there...

Nandini : umm...can you plz tell me unhe yaha koun lekar aaye?

Receptionist : Mam... he hadn't told his name ... he just left the lady here ...payed ...and left ...

Nandini : ohh thanks!

Nandini in her thought ," who can be he?ab I don't toh know but I am very thankful to him ...

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Manik's point of view !

After telling Navya ...

I left with Abhi for Pari's home ...

We were on the way , when I saw some people were surroundings one thing on the middle of the road...

I asked Abhi to stay in car only whereas I got down to see what happened ...

I somehow cleared the crowd and got to see that a lady was unconsciously lying on the floor ...

I immediately went to her and checked if she is breathing or not ...Thank god she was breathing ...
I with the help of someone put the lady in my car's back seat ...

I drove the car to the hospital. ...admitted her there ...filled form and payed...
I asked the receptionist to inform her family or friend a or anyone...

She nodded ..

I saw Abhi watching me ...

Abhi :mamu woh koun thi and unko kya hua ?hum unhe yaha kyu laye?

Me : champ ...unka accident hogaya tha. ..so we brought her to the hospital for the treatment ...

He nodded as trying to understand everything ...

Abhi : mamu hum Pari ye yaha nai jayenge?

Oh shit! In all these I toh forgot that we were going ...

I nodded and we started for our destination...

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I hope you all liked it !!???
Sorry for grammatical errors ...



-QueenlyChitra- thumbnail
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Nice update well done loved it
thanks for pm
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Great update
Loved it
Cont soon
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Nice one Ekta πŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved to see Pari and Nandu so sweet, but felt sad that Nandu recalls the past and cries a lot.
Manik is so pure at heart and took the accidental lady to the hospital and did all the formalities ⭐️⭐️
Hope Manik and nandu meet. Now going to meet Pari, will they meet Nandu too ??

Thanks for the dear and loves πŸ€—
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Well narrated Eku... β­οΈπŸ‘
Loved the cute Pari... n Manik's good state of mind... πŸ‘
Will be in wait to see what progress comes up...
BTW,, loved Nandu saying... I plomish... !!! 😳
God bless you dear... !
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Posted: 7 years ago

amazing update...

Both d kids r too cute...

Nandini cried so much remembering her past...wht happen in their past...

Manik help that old lady...

Hope manan meet soon...

Loved d update...

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Lovely update Eku dear β€οΈπŸ€—
More loved the progress in the story! Pari is too cute and Manik's sharp mind acting at the right time, awesomeπŸ‘
Thanks dear and luv ya!
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Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Nice update well done loved it
thanks for pm



Thank you :)
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Originally posted by: rockstarlover

Great update
Loved it
Cont soon



Thank you :)
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Thank you :)
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