Manan FF - 'The Aroma of Love'-Chapter 18 on page 141- 11th Feb 2016 - Page 86

prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#851

see as promised i am back on sunday

and completed reading the whole story😊

when my sister read your story and told me

it was superb i asked what is the story

she told me that nandini is pizza delivery boy and manik

treats her as a boy😆

i told her it is very boring but she forced me to read 2 parts and initially i felt bore a little as there was little manan😉
and now as i gave u promise i read the full chapters

and i should my sis was correct

it was amazing

and superb

loved it a lot😛

and moreover the pics u used in the last part were fab

coming to manan moments

they were superb😳

u penned them superbly

and plz jaldi se let manik know that

nandu is nandini

want to see manik reaction then😉

and it was fab

u have done a great job

beautifully written👏

continue soon thanks for the pm

love

prathyusha

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Ghatashah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#852

Nice one but pls next time big vali updet Dena...thabks for pm dear

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Anishvi Taylor {luv parth}

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Posted: 8 years ago

#853

Awsmmm update di

Ur my favourite writer

I just luv ur ff's so much

Plz continue soon

Feeling bad for nandu

Ye Manik se bhi na had h

WO abhi tk ni smjh paya that nandu

Boy ni h

Plz update the next chapi soon❤️

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: kimnana
fab update ..manik will buy pizza hut ...nandani surprised
they went to eat dosa ..she is hurt when she knows what type of girl he likes
ty for pm

Thanks a lot, my dear😃😳

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
Aww poor nandu.

achchha will you following coffee Prince storyline entirely?or you will add your own twists?

Thanks a lot, dear! No actually if U watch Coffee Prince storyline...the scenes have lot of variations..for eg: the scene in the hotel where Manik gets drunk and they play a game is not in the original series...its my creation😆 Similarly the scene where Manik gets a punch and the kind of girls they meet are different from the arranged date in 'Coffee Prince'. So variations are surely there..but basic outline I'll try to keep the same😛😉

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: Tishyy
Another awesome update
I really love this plot where the guy gets attracted without knowing she is a gal
And with you giving ur own touch.. Superb
Hahah atleast Nandu knws she is a gal and Manik a guy.. Im just imagining what you ( as a writer) will do with Maniks state.. Poor guy.. As per him he is falling for another guy lol
Give me posessive aggressive and jealous Manik..
Eagerly waiting how you will proceed this story
Take a bow gal

Thanks a lot, yaar😃 Yes...I mean the guy loving a girl misunderstanding her to be a guy..I feel somehow shows true love. Hmm..Manik is now confused as to why he doesn't want to let go of this boy. Possibly he thinks it is a friendly feeling towards Nandini. U know..sometimes we meet people whom we want to have in our lives and not let go so fast..we become friends and keep in touch continuously so that the person remains in our life. That sort of a feeling Manik is having for Nandini. Possessive..aggressive..there's a scope for that in this FF😆😆😆

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: uma88
Read all parts in a go.
Very very diff and unique story.
Waiting to see when manik will realise the truth that nandu is girl.
Continue soon.

Thanks a lottt, yaar😃😳 Manik will eventually get to know😛

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: A12609z
Awweeesssooommeee
sooo gooodd wala update

plzzz Manik ko kuch to hint dooo k wo Girl h

pooorr Nandu to rooo rahi h abb Manik kya karega??? Agee kya hoga??? Kese usse pata chalega k Nandu Nandini h??
Tooo much curious to know
plzzz update Next part jaldi jaldi plzzz

Thanks a lot, yaar😃😳

Hmm Manik ko hint ki zaroorat nahi hai..I mean he is himself assuming that Nandu is a boy. He is not even giving a second thought that perhaps this could be a girl😆😆

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: Vandyandy
Hi Priya
Thks for the PM

Update was fantastic.
Like srsly 😊 Manik actually going to buy Pizza Hut for Nandu ???
Wow like he is really concerned for him. ( her )
Awww !!!! He too has been thinking about the KISS. Hehheheeh

Manik discussing about girls qualities with Nandu not knowing he is a girl, Nandu was feeling awkward .😕
But with the talk she is knowing what type of girl he wants to be with his whole life.

Awww !!! Asking about Physical relation was too much for Nandu.
But boys talk about it that's natural , even girls talk about it .

Telling about his affairs, which Nandu somewhere didn't like it.
It was pinching her heart.
She was sad n food kept in front of her but she couldn't have it,
Tears were already out. Hmmm !!!!!

What nx ????
Will they meet again ?????
Waiting for the nx
Come soon

Thanks a lot yaar...actually Manik is opening up to Nandini thinking that Nandu is a boy. But if Nandini were to appear in front of Manik in the looks of a girl...would he have said so many things about himself? I don't think so. He would perhaps have admired her beauty..fallen in love with her or perhaps not. But this sort of boy to boy sharing wouldn't happen😛😉

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priakachan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: SP1208
Feeling sad for Nandini..
He going to whole pizza hut..
Really he is crazy..
He is telling about his affairs..
He wants a tall rich girl..
But our nandu is short poor girl..
Continue soon.. :)

Thanks a lottt, yaar😃😳 Yes I will😛

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