HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 23

priota

@priota

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

update soon plzz badawala update plzz

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jai18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

First of all, thank you for the pm :)

Coming to the update, it was spectacular... Loved to see nandini having a disturbed background as its always with manik only! Only thing is that I'm a bit confused with the daughter of nyo - harshad! Have u mentioned abt it earlier? If yes, then I must have missed it! I

Wonderful update, again :)

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Wow nice update...very vey intresting

Twist pe twist 😆

V different story

Superb job👏👏

Thanks for the pm😊

Update soon

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sunset17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Ur story is unique... And Dats d best part...

Plz update soon

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86MISHA

@86MISHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

ur story s different unique i loved it

update soon

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pihu

@epshitatabassum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Is nandu hate manik

Don't fall in love with him

Happy

U fullfill u r promise

Rock

Gr8

Mind blowing

Outstanding

Wonderful

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Anushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

I'm sorry I could not comment on the last chapter.
I really like it!!
Cause, we got yo know why Manik is obsessed with Nandini since a very long long time...
Yet, I really like this 'very mature side' of Manik.
He knows what he wants and will do anything to have it- and it is Nandini...

Coming to this chapter: so Nandu does not act really like a kiddo :)
This one detail (beer), forecast how her behavior can be with Manik.

Thank you for introducing Cabir :)
When Manik said that she is my right, and she can't step away like everyone else... I can also see a broken Manik, who is looking at Nandini as his redeemer.

And you add suspense to this story.
Really can't wait for further update.

Thanks for the pm

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Zoha Sadaqat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

please update longer next time!

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Diksha Anand

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Posted: 9 years ago

#229

I am really liking ur story...
Good job
The first thing I did in the morning was read ur update
I went college after that so commenting late
Update soon

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vaishnavi911

@vaishnavi911

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Posted: 9 years ago

#230

you story is just awesome

i really liked your update very much

cont soon

looking forward to read more

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