Humari Adhoori Kahaani - A ZaYa OS

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"Bas ek baar keh deti Aaliya. Hazar baar tumhe kaha ki agar kuch dil mei ho toh bolo. Tumhe zaleel kiya. Tumhe tarpaya. Kyun Aaliya? Kya mei itna bura hu ki tum mere saath kuch share nhi kr skti. Woh insaan jisko mei itne saalo se apni maa aur apne dad ki patni ka darja deta rha, unhone ne tumhe kya kya nhi kaha. Aur kal? Kyun kiya esa Aaliya?" A teary-eyed Zain asked Aaliya. "Nahi Zain, tum bahaut acche ho. Bas mei tumhare layak nhi. Maami ko bhi yahi lgta hai. Woh tmhari Maa hai Zain, Maa ke baare mei ese nhi bolte. Aage se ese mt bolna. Mei- uhhh.. AHHH!" Aaliya let out a scream in pain as she tried to get up but fall down. She had an accident. A suicide case. Which in India for girls, is really common. "Aaliya tumne suicide krne ki koshish ki? Ek baar bhi mera khayal nhi aaya? Bolo Aaliya." "Mei theek hu Zain. Woh bas thoda sa stress mei aake-" "Stress? Pagal ho? Stress mei aake log rude hote hai, cheeze todhte hai.. TUMHARI TARAH SUICIDE NHI KR LETE!" Zain said. "Zain! Tumhe kya farak padhta hai, mei jiyu ya maru" Aaliya said. Zain gave her an angry glimpse and was about to walk out of d room when Aaliya held his hand. "Zain mjhe kuch chahiye! Doge?" Aaliya asked. "Kya?" To this she replied.. "EK HUG!"


5 Minutes Later

Aaliya Zain Abdullah. Time of death: 2:00 a.m.

Her last words were.. I ALWAYS LOVED YOU ZAIN! APNA KHAYAL RKHNA.


Sad na? Sorry but no pm's also.
-Tanu.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg tanu di
Really emotional
Rula diya mujhe
Fabulous job
Beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What the??yeh kya tha?? 😲 😲 😲
I didnt expect this lol 😆
But very beautifully written tannu...
Very emotional...
My ZaYa 😭 😭
Amazing work! 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Omg tanu di

Really emotional
Rula diya mujhe
Fabulous job
Beautifully written


Tumhe rula diya? Mei khud ro rhi thi. LOL
Srsly kuch emotional likhne ka mann tha.
Toh here it is. Glad u lyk it.
Thanks a lot..! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful os...
Loved it Tanya...
Emotional one
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Such a beautiful os...
Loved it Tanya...
Emotional one


Thnx Priya. And yeah, gr8 os (mujhe haq hai)
Didnt get tym to comment. So its amazing!:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jaldi unress kro!
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan


Thnx Priya. And yeah, gr8 os (mujhe haq hai)
Didnt get tym to comment. So its amazing!:-)

u r wlcum...
Aww that's so sweet of u...
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional but beautiful os di
loved this work..
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Emotional OS
very well written 👏
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