The Promise: A ZaYa ThreeShot (Part I, II, III up, Pg 1; Poem- Pg 7) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ZayaFever

HI Radhika.. I'm Riya and i'm 21...not very active on IF either
read all three chapters in a go and it left me in tears😭
you writing is impeccable👏
i absolutely loved it...hope you write more beautiful stories😉

Hellow Riya! Umm.. I don't really know what to say, should I be happy that this was touching enough, or should I be sad that I made you cry? :P
Even bigger dilemma than Zain's here :P
Jokes apart, I'm overwhelmed! Thanks a ton!.. I'm really glad you liked it! ^_^

Originally posted by: zaya...

that was beautiful n emotional too!!!!! awesome work ...btw

HI Radhika m Aaliya...m 14 too !!

Hellow Aaliya! I'm really glad you liked it! ^_^
P.S. That's a lovely name, maybe because I can picture Aaliya when I hear it?
Once again, thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Just read d other parts girl

It was amazing

Beautifully written

Emotions portrayed amazingly

It seriously left me in tears

Do write more often

Thanks a lot Anagha! I'll really try to write more! ^_^

Originally posted by: Radikx1705

Thanks a lot Anagha! I'll really try to write more! ^_^

😊

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Originally posted by: lailausa

Beautifully written!

Loved every word of it...😊

Thanks a ton once again Laila! I'm so glad you liked it!. ^_^

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower

Lovely

No words

I am speechless

I had somehow stopped myself from crying but the last line broke the dam

The words r beautiful

Keep writing

My name is flower

Female

Hello Flower! I'm really glad you loved it, but I'm sad to make you cry too! :(
Thanks a ton, I'll try to write more often!

Omg that was so damn emotional
So beautiful
So amazing
Loved it man
One of my favourite
I'm definitely gonna be crying for next few days now lol
Honestly this was magical
Hope u write more stuff on zaya
I will be looking forward to it

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Omg that was so damn emotional
So beautiful
So amazing
Loved it man
One of my favourite
I'm definitely gonna be crying for next few days now lol
Honestly this was magical
Hope u write more stuff on zaya
I will be looking forward to it

Thanks a ton Shiri! I'm super glad you guys liked it!.. Since I'm overwhelmed, I'll be updating a poem based on the story soon! Keep a watch for it.. :D
Even I hope I write more for ZaYa! <3

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They say that time heals all wounds

It takes away all the pain

Its been forever, since you left

But the ache is still the same..

I don't see you anymore, but your presence,

Lingers around, embracing me

Your tinkling laughter, those entrancing eyes

Have still not faded from my memory

I found in your arms, the solace..

Which cannot be expressed in a million of words

My soul calls out for you, even now

Long after we parted ways

They say that forever, is indeed a long time..

But I'm ready to face it

Because I know, that in the end

You'll be there, waiting on me

We'll meet again, in a world

More beautiful than we've ever seen

Let them say what they want to

Because in the end, nothing matters

It has always been a story of you and me

And it will always be..

I love u my multi talented friend