The Promise: A ZaYa ThreeShot (Part I, II, III up, Pg 1; Poem- Pg 7) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Radika! Amazingly written! You're one of 'The Best' over here!

It was so beautiful, the pain, the dilemma, everything is perfectly described, Amazing work! πŸ‘

BTW, i'm Avi, i'm of your age 😊 i'm a girl of course πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HI Radhika.. I'm Riya and i'm 21...not very active on IF either
read all three chapters in a go and it left me in tears😭
you writing is impeccableπŸ‘
i absolutely loved it...hope you write more beautiful storiesπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that was beautiful n emotional too!!!!! awesome work ...btw
HI Radhika m Aaliya...m 14 too !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Just read d other parts girl
It was amazing
Beautifully written
Emotions portrayed amazingly
It seriously left me in tears
Do write more often
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written!
Loved every word of it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely
No words
I am speechless
I had somehow stopped myself from crying but the last line broke the dam
The words r beautiful
Keep writing
My name is flower
Female
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iman_harshika

OMG it was so heart-touching dear!!

I m literally crying!! 😭

Bt u did a gr8 piece of work!! As hw much I appreciate u, ll be less!!
It was amazing n was written beyond excellence!!! πŸ‘

One thing is very impt frm dis fiction... TRUE LOVE NEVER DIES!! IT ALWAYS REMAIN ALIVE WHETHER DAT PERSON IS ALIVE OR NOT!!! this was gr8ly shown by u in this fiction!! Hats off to u dear!! πŸ‘πŸ˜Š



Thanks a lot Iman (I guess that's your name?)! :D.. I had never expected so much appreciation!
I just hope whatever I write next (If I ever write, that is :P) appeals to you guys as much as this did..
Once again, thanks a lot!
P.S. I've read your works as well!.. Love 'em.. you're an amazing writer! ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZayaILoveU

Hi Radhika!!!

I m Riya...
Going to be 15 this november!!!
Excited...? HELL YES!!!!
But jokes apart, i really loved ur writing...
U write really well...
You should definitely write often...
And welcome to the forum...



Hellow Riya! Wow, I'm really happy for you.. happy birthday in advance! Hope you have a wonderful year ahead! I'm glad you loved the piece ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: katmaan

I am crying my heart was wincing crying I still have tears ...pls I love your writing but next time pls write something fun ...it is so so awesome story but for me I know only zaya I can't see zaon with anyone and seriously the third part...god why does god do bad things to good ppl



Thanks a lot buddy! I guess your name's Khyati? Yeah, I guess I've seen people referring to you as Khyati! Please correct me if I'm wrong..
I'm really sorry that I had to pair up Zain with Sanam in the end, but whatever he did- he did it for Aliya and Zariya.. That's what true love is all about, right? :)
I'm glad you loved it! ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Hey Radika! Amazingly written! You're one of 'The Best' over here!

It was so beautiful, the pain, the dilemma, everything is perfectly described, Amazing work! πŸ‘

BTW, i'm Avi, i'm of your age 😊 i'm a girl of course πŸ˜†



Oh yeah, Hi Avi! I've seen you a lot here.. Chirpy bird? :D
I'm absolutely overwhelmed with your comment.. But I'm definitely not one of the best here, I mean.. the writers of our forum are phenomenal!.. But I'm really happy you loved it ^_^
Once again, thanks a lot!
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