The Promise: A ZaYa ThreeShot (Part I, II, III up, Pg 1; Poem- Pg 7) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

wow that was so emotional man

loved it

continue soon

Thanks a lot Shiri! Looking forward to interacting with you more!

Originally posted by: asaps

Hi I am anmol,female and 16
Even I am a newbie 😊
Coming in to your story, it was really beautifully and continue soon.

Hello Anmol! Glad you loved it.. Yeah I'll update soon!

Originally posted by: preeharsharora

hello radhika first of all welcome to d forum once agn n u r 14 bt d way u wrote it its amazing so emotional yet so pure .keepi it up n u cn call me shippu

Thanks a ton Shippu! :D

Originally posted by: katmaan

Beautiful and lovely

Thanks a ton! May I know your name please? :)

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

OMG radhika is this really ur first time ???

I totally loved it

It was really well written

Do u want my introduction as well ???

Continue soon

Thanks Anagha! Lol, No need.. I know you really well! :P
Hope you like the other parts too! ^_^

Originally posted by: beauty14

Aww! That was so sad, yet so sweet. If only there was a chance of Aliyah being alive!

Beautifully written. You seem like a natural!😆

The words are simply written, which keeps your reader interested. You really got me absorbed in the work, I was looking for more to read after I finished Part 1!

Do pm me! Will be waiting for the update!😃

Aww! Thanks sweets! Sorry, no PMs for this one! But I'm really glad you loved it.. Hope you like the other parts too! ^_^
P.S. Your name please? ^_^

Originally posted by: lailausa

Hi Radhika,

Phenomenal job!!! Loved the story!

I'm Laila (my penname).

I'm in the process of writing my own series so I understand ur anxiety. You did a wonderful job!

Welcome to the forum. ❤️

Thanks Laila! Glad you loved it!.. Hope you like the other parts as well!
Eagerly waiting for your series.. Update 'em soon! ^_^

OMG it was so heart-touching dear!!

Hi Radhika!!!

I am crying my heart was wincing crying I still have tears ...pls I love your writing but next time pls write something fun ...it is so so awesome story but for me I know only zaya I can't see zaon with anyone and seriously the third part...god why does god do bad things to good ppl