The Promise: A ZaYa ThreeShot (Part I, II, III up, Pg 1; Poem- Pg 7) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
wow that was so emotional man
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
btw im shiri and aged 17 ..from uk
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I am anmol,female and 16
Even I am a newbie 😊
Coming in to your story, it was really beautifully and continue soon.
Edited by asaps - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
OMG radhika is this really ur first time ???
I totally loved it
It was really well written
Do u want my introduction as well ???
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Aww! That was so sad, yet so sweet. If only there was a chance of Aliyah being alive!
Beautifully written. You seem like a natural!😆
The words are simply written, which keeps your reader interested. You really got me absorbed in the work, I was looking for more to read after I finished Part 1!
Do pm me! Will be waiting for the update!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Radhika,
Phenomenal job!!! Loved the story!

I'm Laila (my penname).
I'm in the process of writing my own series so I understand ur anxiety. You did a wonderful job!
Welcome to the forum. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello radhika first of all welcome to d forum once agn n u r 14 bt d way u wrote it its amazing so emotional yet so pure .keepi it up n u cn call me shippu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

Hi! I'm Vini 😊
Female 😆 Just turned 17 😉

It was really a nice piece of work 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon 😳


Thanks a lot Vini! Nice meeting ya! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Anisha.

That was beautifully penned down 👏

waiting for the next part... continue soon



Thanks a ton Anisha! (I guess that's your name?), Lovely meeting ya!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zayalove

Hey i m alina
And u write really well



Thanks a ton Alina! Wonderful meeting you! :D
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