ZaYa OS: Humari Paak Mohabbat!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Kya lgta hai tumhe Zain Abdullah? Tum mujh par esa gira hua ilzam lga doge aur mei kuch nhi krungi? Dil dhukta hai mera Zain. Yeh soch ke ese gire huye insaan ko kabhi meine apna pyaar maana. Par tum? Tmne mujhe kabhi apna maana hi kaha? Tumhari Ma, Tumhara Bhai, jo keh le. Magar mujhpar? Mujhpar tumhe kabhi bharosa nahi hai Zain Abdullah. Mere Maamu. Mere Maamu iss duniya ke sabse paak ru the. Yeh rishta! Yeh rishta unhone meri izzat banane ke liye bachaya tha. Aur tumne? Do minute nahi lge na tumhe iss rishte ko khatam kr dene mei? Btao Zain? Kya kiya tha meine? Kya kaam kr diya ki tumhe mei itni giri hui lgti hu ki mei apne Maamu ko- Mei apne Maamu ko marne-" "Bas Aaliya! Talaaq ho chuka hai. Ab tum aur Zain ka yeh rishta, Khatam! Tum ab is ghar mei kuch nahi. Nikal jao" Shazia screamed on my face. "Aap 'Bhabhi'? Haq paane ki chahat mei aap kitna gir gyi hai aapko andaza hai? Kya kru mei? Nafisa Bhabhi, meri sacchi behan, ko aapne itna gira diya ki woh iss mukam tak aa gyi hai" "Bas Aaliya! Aur ek lafz nahi sunana chahti mei tumhare gande mu se. Nikal jao! Nahi toh dhake maar ke dafa kr dungi!" "Zain" I walked to him holdin his hands "Yeh rishta paak hai Zain. Tum mujhe ese kese jaane de skte ho? Kya bhul gye ho tum? Iss rishte ki paakezgi ko? Kya tumhe koi darr nahi? Khafa ho mjhse? Kuch toh bolo Zain. Kuch bolo pls-" "AALIYA GHULAM HAIDER... MEI ZAIN OSMAN ABDULLAH AAJ TUMHE TEESRA TALAAQ DETA HU! AB TUM ISS RISHTE SE MUQT HO!" Do second nhi lge. Usse iss rishte ko khatam krne mei. Maamu. Soch rhi hu.. Aaj aapse hi mulakat kr lu! *last entry* ********* Sad. But nice na? -Tanu.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was really emotional..
loved it..
hate shazia...

Edited by iluvuzaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg tanu di
Tears in my eyes
Kitna emotional tha
But really well written
The emotions were beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was emotional...
Loved it
Edited by zaya.harshika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

it was really emotional..
loved it..
hate shazia...



Thank u so much!
I hv wrote another one.
Pls check in d index.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Omg tanu di

Tears in my eyes
Kitna emotional tha
But really well written
The emotions were beautifully written


Thank u so much Anagha!
Glad u liked it.
Thanks a lot!:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan


Thank u so much!
I hv wrote another one.
Pls check in d index.


u r wlcum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww... Its really vry nice tanu
so beautifully written
luved it ya !:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I fell sad for Aaliya 😭
Great OS Tanu 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written but Tanya u made me cry😭'
Hate shazia😡
Felt so bad for Aliya
It was very nice par plzz aise sad stories mat likha karo
I don't like sad endings😛
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