|ZaYa OS ~ The Wedding Night| (23/10/14) - Page 4

Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Amazing os !!
It was rele cute :)

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zaya.harshika

@zaya.harshika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Awesome...

Amazing

Beautifully written

Loved it!

Thanks for the PM

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Bsvalentna

@Bsvalentna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

First Happy Diwali Ramya

Super cute,funny n amazing

power pck os- kitkit,romance...Mr n Mrs Abdullah's argument 'I missed u mor...mor...reminds me of my nautanki bro haha😆

I really love it..👍🏼

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Abi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

well first thanks for PM
&
yeah OS was Awsome and I love it.
😉

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Sruthi

@musicxolover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Omg this is so cute! 😆 Very well written, and I can totally imagine ZaYa acting like this <3

My favorite part was this line:

"I'm never gonna let you go this time, Mallika-e-Zain." "You better not, Zain Abdullah." "I won't. Wherever we are, I'll be holding your hand till the end of eternity and beyond. And that's a promise."

Such a Zain thing to say! You write really well, and I can't wait to read more of your stories. 😳

(PS: Sorry for the short comment, but I'm super lazy right now. 😆 Oh, and thanks for the PM!)

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Ramya, it was Amazing...

Too funny and cute..

Loved their conversation abt films😆 lol our Phattu...

On seeing title, I thought it's going to be guttery😛, I Still didn't forget ur first OS in this forum😳😆

Thank u so much for lovely lovely OS, enjoyed every bit of it

Thank u so much for PM dear...loved it

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Me too...I can never write anything GUTTERY...😆
I loved it...first night and so much KITKIT...imagine the rest...😆
It was ZAIN...sorry...got confused...😕

Btw...HAPPY DIWALI dude...

I think when i was 12 i managed to write 1st level gutter 😆, actually it wasn't gutter, it's just I get embarrassed when i read it now, coz I know it was stupid 😆

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Revelio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
It was cute 😳
enjoyed reading every bit of it

Thank u so much! Glad u liked it! :)

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Revelio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -TheInstigator-
Ayeeiii!! Awesome OS
I really loved it ..It was cute as well as funny..
Haye Zain kitna darta apni Al- Malika-e-Zain se 😆

Hi ridz! Long time!

Thank u so much! Glad u liked it! :)

If there was an award for phattu shauhar i would give it to zain.😆

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Revelio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ...Renu...
Finally ..me the Most famous lazy bug read some thing after ages..😆😆and That was really cute one ramya dear..😳😳very beautifully penned down..great job dear..hoping to reading more of your works in the future ..Thanks for the Pm..!!😊😊
And Haan i forget ..a very Happi Diwali to you ..!!🤗🤗

😆 I myself am currently in the same zone, i'm only reading madhu's ff now, but glad this oos got u out 😆

Thank u so much Renu! Glad u liked the os! :)Oh I've wrote few stuff on zaya before as well, don't know if u've read them though

Thank u, same 2 u! :)

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