UPDATE Ch12 pg 31: My take on beintehaa mohobbat - - Page 18

Originally posted by: anku94

Ive been follwoing this story and its really going amazing. Youre a damn good writer. The story gets better with each chapter, and you write the Zaya romantic and intimate scenes really well! Looking forward to reading more of that! Absolutely loved this chapter! Update soon! :)

fab story and writing...I have been reading this right from chp1...excellent...chp10 aliya crying her heart out ... nicely written ...I could visualise the scene...👏...wanted this kind of scene in the serial but I think cvs just don't like this kind of scene ...where leads cry their heart out in each others presence and one consoles other...😃...looking forward for more...

Omg omg omg. . I love it...I love it like hell u wrote the scene so beautifully

awesome chapter purva..
loved it..
thanks for pm

Woah Go gurl

Awww lovely zaya
Well written 👏
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Originally posted by: suchijoshi

fab story and writing...I have been reading this right from chp1...excellent...chp10 aliya crying her heart out... nicely written ...I could visualise the scene...👏...wanted this kind of scene in the serial but I think cvs just don't like this kind of scene ...where leads cry their heart out in each others presence and one consoles other...😃...looking forward for more...

Thanks suchi 😳 ..yeah I think there are some people who open up only in very private moments with that one person...baring your heart can be very personal to some and easy for others..for Aliya I envisioned she only opens up to Zain especially given her moral dilemma as he won't ever judge her or question her..so ...I'm glad u concur

Originally posted by: katmaan

Omg omg omg. . I love it...I love it like hell u wrote the scene so beautifully

Thanks 😆 glad you thought it was so good yaar. Appreciate the lovely enthusiastic re🤗

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

awesome chapter purva..
loved it..
thanks for pm

Thank you glad u liked it 😳

Originally posted by: Priyakna

Woah Go gurl

Nice to see Zaya coming close n thanks for the pm

I am really luving this❤️

Thanks priya..keep letting me know ur feedbAck as and when u can 😳 🤗