UPDATE Ch12 pg 31: My take on beintehaa mohobbat - - Page 11

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Aliya found herself looking directly into Zain's eyes as he took off his wayfarers, while parking the car. She held his gaze for quite some time...taking in all that they spoke to her. No... he hadn't changed, he was putting on an act. One look in those eyes, and they bared his heart to her...and she could see...Zain was still hurting...

But before she could say a word... he had parked, got off the car informing Sam they didn't have all night long.. "could we please hurry up...and lets eat"

But why was Zain letting Sam take the lead when she was here? Shouldn't it be Aliya first...As she thought about Zain and Sam's too close for her comfort friendship, she noticed even the kids had taken a liking to Sam...they hadn't spoken one word to Aliya all through their ride to the restaurant and were enjoying their company with their aunty, as she showed them the city...whatever little they could see from their seats.

Very surprising, as the kids weren't all that social, one of the main reasons why Rehan only trusted them with Aliya. They had lost their mum at a tender age and only spoke to a few folks, and spoke openly with even fewer. So far, it had been Aliya and Zain as long as he was in Mumbai other than family; and now evidently Sam..." what's so special about Sam?" Aliya thought, as Sam took the kids and Zain and walked ahead of her...She hurried up behind them, calling out to Zara and Kabir.

While they stood for the table to be ready, Aliya looked at Zain and Sam. They were goofing around with the kids and painted a perfect couple together. He was so good looking, this man Zain ...in a baby blue shirt with his sleeves rolled up and dark blue jeans ...Sam was almost as tall as Zain, beautiful brown eyes, translucent skin...had the laughter of a bird and the spirit of a child... Were they seeing each other? They seemed to have similar personalities, Sam didn't seem to hold back just like Zain...probably more like the Zain two or three years ago...

As they moved to the table, Zain sat down Aliya first and then Sam, which Aliya liked very much...she was observing every little thing Zain said and did. Then as the kids and Zain settled down to order, he asked..."Aliya, what would you like to eat...entre jo bhi ho yahaan bread pudding zaroor khana...yahaan ka chef, he's a rockstar , awesome with dessert" Aliya was so happy, it was about time Zain gave her the importance he must...and she smiled...as he sweetly smiled back at her.

She was just about to say something in response, when he turned to Samya sitting next to him, too close for Aliya's comfort, and asked her " why don't you pick a good wine for me... and something for the kids to eat..." He wouldn't eat anything for dinner "...too early yet Sam". Aliya's brief moment of joy dissolved the very same instant...Zain and Sam looked like they were actually together... Sam was going to decide for Zain? What he ate and drank? He was asking Sam everything...and she ordered a pinot noir...to which Zain gave her an approving nod with a smile and affectionately asked her "to get the salmon steak here...it goes well with the pinot noir." And as if that weren't enough...he even ate a piece off Sam's plate...when she said " great pick Z...here try some"...going..."mmm yum..." as Zain nodded his head again in approval with a little smile on his lips..

Aliya glared at Zain... in return got a bewildered, surprised look back...Zain quizzically asked "huh...Aliya...kuch hua hai?" he asked.

This time he wasn't putting on an act... he'd genuinely was feeling good...wanted a fabulous glass of wine; to celebrate ...with his girl...even if she didn't get it..."you never get the point Aliya...that is the whole bloody problem...isiliye to hum aise hain...pata nahin kab samjhogi" he thought...Sam instantly caught on to Zain's mood..."Z ...I have this weekend off...party at my home?... dinner, drinks and dancing?...c'mon say yes darling? Let's celebrate! "... Zain agreed instantly... Sam's houseguest was his favorite person in the entire world...he couldn't have asked for more.

Sam smiled mischievously ...she knew a little bit about Zain's love for Aliya... not much of the details of the divorce, as she was not the kind to intrude really, but she was super fond of Zain and she indulged her friends, always took good care of them ...

Zain finished more than a bottle of that pinot noir and enquired ..."who would drive them home now?" Aliya hadn't even made a dent in her pasta, completely lost in her jealous rage...forget ordering bread pudding...while the kids nibbled on their meat balls...Zain helped them finish up.

Sam offered to drive; she'd manage, as Zain was getting "rather happy after that whole bottle of wine...". By the time they reached home, it was late evening. Zain was still in his element...and in his pseudo drunken state, told Sam that he'd put away all the bags, and the kids and she could even keep the big car but in return ...

"Can I take Aliya to my home instead...?" He was not being facetious, just...baring his oh so lonely heart...

...and yet again Aliya had missed hearing Zain when he was reaching out to her...she was busy bringing the kids inside the house.

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Thanks for reading😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update...
Loving jealous aliya a lot...
Thanks for the pm...
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Purvaa🤗 amazing update asusual, ...
Brilliantly written dear,
Loving the story the way u r taking it,
Kids coming close to sam... is something good...idea
I loved it...
Thank u so much for pm dear...😳
Will be waiting for ur next take..
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Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

Really nice update...
Loving jealous aliya a lot...
Thanks for the pm...


thanks priya...😳
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