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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya

It was small but still good ๐Ÿ‘
So is ZaYa faceoff on the way ๐Ÿ˜‰
Update next part soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Vini Yes kid off face off๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
****unressing****
I love, love, love, love, love, loved it Madhu... it was amazing
When Zain was walking towards the kids... mere mind may full on hindi show style drums bajj rahay thay... lol, but I knew woh nhi dekhayga picture... I know u are planning for them to come face to face... and I can't wait for that to happen!
So the kids know about gem... but what exactly do they know? Of course they haven't seen his picture... that's a given... but I was wondering what else do they not know... or know, for that matter ๐Ÿ˜•
See... I guessed it right in the last part... Sarah is a very clever girl ๐Ÿ˜† she even compromised on the movie to skip school... aww... choo cute โค๏ธ
The flower arrangement part was hilarious... at least in my mind ๐Ÿ˜†
But I hope pehle Aaliya k baaray may sanam ko nhi pata chalay... that'd really sad... or na he sanam k saamnay dono milay
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Posted: 9 years ago
Now i do undrstnd ur pov madhu...
Yes zain shuld hv strong reasons to leave his first love sanam!
M waiting to noe d reasons ...
N even d full flashbak ...
N even d change in him afta aliya leaves him...
Ur pov us totally correct !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Agrata23

awesome ๐Ÿ‘excellent๐Ÿ‘amazing update ๐Ÿ‘thanks for entertaining us ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank u so much for lovely comment Agrata
Aww I entertained u thank u๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome & intersting chapter
Eagerly Waiting plz plz. Updated soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter-12 - Chapter 16 Awesome Awesome Awesome ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I m loving this story alot ๐Ÿ˜ƒโค๏ธ
Very Well Written ๐Ÿ‘

Aliya afraid of dog throwing stones at him ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
SR โค๏ธ Well it was needed to save Aliya's life ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aliya is crazy but mature too ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
I love this Aliya โค๏ธ
And then finally were saved phewww
island ka tata bye bye
parents ko hello hii ๐Ÿ˜›

Sanam is so annoying uff ok she loves him but agar live hai toh trust bhi karna seekho Zain could have told her all truth but this girl ๐Ÿ˜ต

Aliya revealed truth about their marriage wow inni jaldi
And they accepted too
Anyways it was much needed so that Zain could realise his true feelings for Aliya ๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ

Zain started missing her
Aliya loves him and crying awww my princess dont cry princess is yours and only yours

He went to meet her..
I am your husband so date pe chalo ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Then at party ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Zubbu ki entry ๐Ÿ˜›
Zubbu-Sanam best jodi ^_____^
Zain kissed her โค๏ธ
But he was unconscious
Aliya brokedown ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Next day he went to tell her sorry awww with white roses
love the reason Aliya gave for not accepting white roses ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Awww I so love Sarah and Saifu โค๏ธ
Their cute fights ๐Ÿ‘
Arm chair ๐Ÿ‘
Puzzle was hit miss
Rainbow bouquet ๐Ÿ˜†
I hope they ll meet in next part? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Super Duper Excited โญ๏ธ

PS: I read 2-3 chapps together so please keep updating ypur index too Madhu ๐Ÿ˜Š
And I love you for writing this ๐Ÿค—



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neenzz

Res

****unressing****
I love, love, love, love, love, loved it Madhu... it was amazing Awww really? Thank u thank u๐Ÿ˜›
When Zain was walking towards the kids... mere mind may full on hindi show style drums bajj rahay thay... lol, but I knew woh nhi dekhayga picture... I know u are planning for them to come face to face... and I can't wait for that to happen! Face to face๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†, u know me na I'm little pagal, but I assure it's gonna be entertaining... and little emotional... pakkaa
So the kids know about gem... but what exactly do they know? Of course they haven't seen his picture... that's a given... but I was wondering what else do they not know... or know, for that matter
๐Ÿ˜• Yeah they knew, why she said them and what she said them for that wait for updates๐Ÿ˜‰
See... I guessed it right in the last part... Sarah is a very clever girl ๐Ÿ˜† she even compromised on the movie to skip school... aww... choo cute โค๏ธ Sarah, I love baby girls a lot and here she is our michevious Aliya's daughter so she should be clever and michevious na๐Ÿ˜†, and u know me and my brother fight like that, even now, my bhabi too joined with me, we spoil game if we find sign of loosing๐Ÿ˜†, that's y my bro stopped playing with us
The flower arrangement part was hilarious... at least in my mind ๐Ÿ˜† that was seriously hilarious... bechari Aliya, but kids will like that only na they want all flashy flashy bright things, .. Aliya is patiently handling them bcz even she was quite michevious once
But I hope pehle Aaliya k baaray may sanam ko nhi pata chalay... that'd really sad... or na he sanam k saamnay dono milay chill yaar, ignore her, zain is no more phattu, dnt worry about her, bas he should meet his minnie that's all... Sanam will to bawadi

Congo on Zaya reunion, I'm not getting sleep too u know๐Ÿ˜†
Thanks for lovely lovely comment, Love u loads๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBeintehaa

Awesome & intersting chapter
Eagerly Waiting plz plz. Updated soon

Thank u dear๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Chapter-12 - Chapter 16 Awesome Awesome Awesome ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘thank u Vishi...
I m loving this story alot ๐Ÿ˜ƒโค๏ธAwww I'm glad
Very Well Written ๐Ÿ‘Awww once again thank u

Aliya afraid of dog throwing stones at him ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃlol I just thought of making fun๐Ÿ˜†
SR โค๏ธ Well it was needed to save Aliya's life ๐Ÿ˜ณyes ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
Aliya is crazy but mature too . Yes that is creating problems
I love this Aliya โค๏ธ mee too
And then finally were saved phewww yes finally after so much torture I sent them๐Ÿ˜†
island ka tata bye bye
parents ko hello hii ๐Ÿ˜›lovely parents they are...

Sanam is so annoying uff ok she loves him but agar live hai toh trust bhi karna seekho Zain could have told her all truth but this girl ๐Ÿ˜ตyes she is over possessive actually about zain, no trust at all on him

Aliya revealed truth about their marriage wow inni jaldi yeah she revealed soon bcz she scared, she doesn't have control.on her, when zain.is.around so she said๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
And they accepted too
Anyways it was much needed so that Zain could realise his true feelings for Aliya ๐Ÿ˜ณโค๏ธ

Zain started missing her he is missing her, but not realising it...phattu..
Aliya loves him and crying awww my princess dont cry princess is yours and only yours yes zain.is only Aliya's prince๐Ÿ˜ณ

He went to meet her..
I am your husband so date pe chalo ๐Ÿ˜Ždate lol๐Ÿคฃ

Then at party ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Zubbu ki entry ๐Ÿ˜›
Zubbu-Sanam best jodi ^_____^ lol super jodi๐Ÿคฃ
Zain kissed her โค๏ธ
But he was unconscious he kissed her phattu๐Ÿ˜†, he kissed her and didn't realise that he enjoyed that kiss๐Ÿ˜ณ and he started regretting๐Ÿ˜†
Aliya brokedown ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Next day he went to tell her sorry awww with white roses
love the reason Aliya gave for not accepting white roses ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ thank u, yeah I oved her reasoning too
Awww I so love Sarah and Saifu
Their cute fights ๐Ÿ‘
Arm chair ๐Ÿ‘
Puzzle was hit miss
Rainbow bouquet ๐Ÿ˜†they are super cute, I'm glad u loved their fights
I hope they ll meet in next part? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Super Duper Excited โญ๏ธ

PS: I read 2-3 chapps together so please keep updating ypur index too Madhu ๐Ÿ˜Š
And I love you for writing this ๐Ÿค—
I live u too for reading this Vishi and commenting on it and yeah I will it date index regularly๐Ÿ˜›

Thank u for lovely lovely comment๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Now i do undrstnd ur pov madhu...
Yes zain shuld hv strong reasons to leave his first love sanam!
M waiting to noe d reasons ...
N even d full flashbak ...
N even d change in him afta aliya leaves him...
Ur pov us totally correct !!


No much reasons, his realisations are reasons... thing he should realise and whe he ll realise
And how he is gonna handle Sanam.. and what he is gonna do to win Aliya back๐Ÿ˜ณ
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