Originally posted by: Ilovezaya
It was small but still good ๐
So is ZaYa faceoff on the way ๐
Update next part soon ๐ณ
Originally posted by: Ilovezaya
It was small but still good ๐
So is ZaYa faceoff on the way ๐
Update next part soon ๐ณ
Originally posted by: Agrata23
awesome ๐excellent๐amazing update ๐thanks for entertaining us ๐
Res
****unressing****I love, love, love, love, love, loved it Madhu... it was amazing Awww really? Thank u thank u๐When Zain was walking towards the kids... mere mind may full on hindi show style drums bajj rahay thay... lol, but I knew woh nhi dekhayga picture... I know u are planning for them to come face to face... and I can't wait for that to happen! Face to face๐๐, u know me na I'm little pagal, but I assure it's gonna be entertaining... and little emotional... pakkaaSo the kids know about gem... but what exactly do they know? Of course they haven't seen his picture... that's a given... but I was wondering what else do they not know... or know, for that matter๐ Yeah they knew, why she said them and what she said them for that wait for updates๐See... I guessed it right in the last part... Sarah is a very clever girl ๐ she even compromised on the movie to skip school... aww... choo cute โค๏ธ Sarah, I love baby girls a lot and here she is our michevious Aliya's daughter so she should be clever and michevious na๐, and u know me and my brother fight like that, even now, my bhabi too joined with me, we spoil game if we find sign of loosing๐, that's y my bro stopped playing with usThe flower arrangement part was hilarious... at least in my mind ๐ that was seriously hilarious... bechari Aliya, but kids will like that only na they want all flashy flashy bright things, .. Aliya is patiently handling them bcz even she was quite michevious onceBut I hope pehle Aaliya k baaray may sanam ko nhi pata chalay... that'd really sad... or na he sanam k saamnay dono milay chill yaar, ignore her, zain is no more phattu, dnt worry about her, bas he should meet his minnie that's all... Sanam will to bawadi
Originally posted by: LoveBeintehaa
Awesome & intersting chapter
Eagerly Waiting plz plz. Updated soon
Originally posted by: Barbievishi20
Chapter-12 - Chapter 16 Awesome Awesome Awesome ๐๐thank u Vishi...
I m loving this story alot ๐โค๏ธAwww I'm glad
Very Well Written ๐Awww once again thank u
Aliya afraid of dog throwing stones at him ๐คฃ๐คฃlol I just thought of making fun๐
SR โค๏ธ Well it was needed to save Aliya's life ๐ณyes ๐๐
Aliya is crazy but mature too . Yes that is creating problems
I love this Aliya โค๏ธ mee too
And then finally were saved phewww yes finally after so much torture I sent them๐
island ka tata bye bye
parents ko hello hii ๐lovely parents they are...
Sanam is so annoying uff ok she loves him but agar live hai toh trust bhi karna seekho Zain could have told her all truth but this girl ๐ตyes she is over possessive actually about zain, no trust at all on him
Aliya revealed truth about their marriage wow inni jaldi yeah she revealed soon bcz she scared, she doesn't have control.on her, when zain.is.around so she said๐๐
And they accepted too
Anyways it was much needed so that Zain could realise his true feelings for Aliya ๐ณโค๏ธ
Zain started missing her he is missing her, but not realising it...phattu..
Aliya loves him and crying awww my princess dont cry princess is yours and only yours yes zain.is only Aliya's prince๐ณ
He went to meet her..
I am your husband so date pe chalo ๐date lol๐คฃ
Then at party ๐ฒ
Zubbu ki entry ๐
Zubbu-Sanam best jodi ^_____^ lol super jodi๐คฃ
Zain kissed her โค๏ธ
But he was unconscious he kissed her phattu๐, he kissed her and didn't realise that he enjoyed that kiss๐ณ and he started regretting๐
Aliya brokedown ๐ญ
Next day he went to tell her sorry awww with white roses
love the reason Aliya gave for not accepting white roses ๐๐ผ thank u, yeah I oved her reasoning too
Awww I so love Sarah and Saifu
Their cute fights ๐
Arm chair ๐
Puzzle was hit miss
Rainbow bouquet ๐they are super cute, I'm glad u loved their fights
I hope they ll meet in next part? ๐
Super Duper Excited โญ๏ธ
PS: I read 2-3 chapps together so please keep updating ypur index too Madhu ๐
And I love you for writing this ๐คI live u too for reading this Vishi and commenting on it and yeah I will it date index regularly๐Thank u for lovely lovely comment๐ค
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Now i do undrstnd ur pov madhu...
Yes zain shuld hv strong reasons to leave his first love sanam!
M waiting to noe d reasons ...
N even d full flashbak ...
N even d change in him afta aliya leaves him...
Ur pov us totally correct !!
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