~|Zain Aur Aaliya Ki Yeh Ajab Dastan|~ Episode 1 on Pg-4 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really interesting Eagerly waiting... When u gonna update part 1... Plz cont. Soon
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awesome concept !!..sounds very interesting...waiting for d update😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tanu🤗
first episode amazing😃
waiting 4 the next part
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I am really sorry for the delay guys. Recently I am so buckled up with my exams, that I am not having enough time to write this. And of course, Bio got me stuck into it. So without wasting time, here you go! :)

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After The Nikaah
Zain (And Aaliya's) Room
Narrator's POV

"Tumhe kya lga Maamu Ki Bhanji? Tum meri reputation share kr paogi mujhse nikaah kr ke. Aur mei tumhare iss excuse ko maan lunga ki tumne yeh sab phupa ke liye kra hai? You know the sad truth Maamu Ki Bhanji? Humne Nikaah toh kr liya hai. Par hum KABHI ek nahi ho skte. Toh tum apne honeymoon ke sapne bunana shuru mat kr dena. Kyunki hum kabhi dost nahi ban skte!" A certain Zain Osman Abdullah told his not-wanting-to-be wife, Aaliya Ghulam Haider. Well now, Aaliya Zain Abdullah.

"Ho gya tumhara?" Aaliya said turning him over. "Tumhe kya lga? Ki yeh dara dhamka ke tum mujhe dara skte ho? Tum mujhe jaante nhi ho Zain Abdullah. Meine kese kese laundo ko theek kiya hai, tumhe uska koi bhi andaza bhi nahi hai! Aur yahi baat rhi tumhara rappo share krne ki, toh tumse accha toh mera hai. Maamu ki saari daulat apni so-not-smart girlfriends pe kharch krte ho. Esa reputation share krungi mei, tumhare saath? No thanks!"

"Whatever!" He said walking to his closet getting the clothes out and walking to the washroom. Aaliya was about to cry, but she held herself in. You can't cry Aaliya, if he sees that you are so easily hurt by his words, he will tease you more, she thought. She took out her clothes and thought of changing in the room as she heard the shower turn on. She took out the pallu of her saree and begun changing.

A good 20 minutes later, Zain walked out of the washroom and saw Aaliya fidgeting with the dori of her blouse. "Yeh ghatiya blouse! Itna tight hone ki kya zarurat thi? Crap!" This was the first time when Zain noticed her milky white baby skin. Her smooth curves. He shook out of his thoughts and finally decided to make his presence felt.

"Blouse mei koi kharabi nhi hai MKB, moti toh tum ho!" Zain said throwing his towel on the bed and laying down on the other side facing her.

"Allah tauba, tum yahan kya kr rhe ho Zain?"

"Kamra mera hai MKB, mei yahi rahunga. Aur rhi baat tumhare change krne ki, Mumbai mei log bathroom mei ya band kamre mei change krte hai. Tumhari tarah ese khulle aam- Chi!" Zain said making a disgusted face. Aaliya frowned and walked off with her night wear to the washroom.

After 10 minutes, she walked out and wiped her make-up off. Zain didn't want to get his eyes off her. She had turned out to be quite cute than what she was earlier. That doesn't mean she wasn't earlier. Ughh.. Shut up Zain! he thought.

"Ghurna band kro nhi toh tumhari ego ki dhajiya udh jayegi!" Aaliya said smirking. Aaliya: 1 Zain: 0.

"Oh hello MKB-"

"Ab yeh MKB kya hai?" She asked totally pissed. Zain: 1 Aaliya: 1.

"MKB hai Maamu Ki Bhanji. Aur waise bhi tumhe kon ghure. Kisi bandar ki shakal ko ghurna zyaada pasand krunga!" Zain: 2 Aaliya: 1

"Jaake apni shakal aine (mirror) mei dekh lo. Same baat hai!" Aaliya: 2 Zain: 2.

"Whatever! Good-" Zain stopped. Was he really going to wish her? Nah!


After a while he felt someone place pillow against his body. He raise his head to see Aaliya settling the pillow on the other side of the bed.

"Oh hello MKB, jaake couch pe so!"

"Zain Abdullah, nikaah kiya hai tumse. Kamra toh mera hi hai. Koi problem hai toh jaake couch pe so jao tum. Mujhe toh koi problem nahi!"

"God! This girl!" Zain muttered under his breath as he slept back on the pillow covering himself with the blanket. First 'awkward night'! But there will be many more.

Next Morning
Breakfast Table

"Aslam Valekum Maamu, Maami" Aaliya said as she helped Chand Bi with serving the food.

"Arre tum rhne do Aaliya, Chandjaan kr dengi!" A manly voice came from behind as he ravishing looking Zain Abdullah came and sat. "Aao bheto!" He added patting the seat beside him. Aaliya made a face as he sat beside him. She was totally confused. And was looking at Zain's smiling face. What has happened to him? She wondered.

"Zain Miya. Ek din hua nhi tumhare nikaah ko ki tumne kaafi khayal rkhne lg gye ho apni begum ka. Wah!" Osman Abdullah, owner of Barkat Company, and Zain's dad, said.

"Ab nikaah kiya hai Dad. Aur aapki bhaanji hai. Khayal toh rkhna ki padega. Kyun Aaliya?" Aaliya looked at him totally confused.

"Wah! Toh phir ab bas Honeymoon ki planning krni hai!"

"WHAT????" Zain and Aaliya shouted together.

Precap: Aaliya and Zain totally bugged with each other while on the way to their honeymoon spot, Shimla. What will it be like? Will they be able to? You know.

To know, stay tuned.

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Toh ab no updates from tomorrow. Maybe 1 short one tomorrow. Or day after tomorrow two of them. Sorry for that. My first exam this Friday. So yeah, kinda busy.

No pm's! :)
Thanks for reading.
-Tanu.

Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Please continue soon...
It was really awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Such a cute n lovely update!!!
Its awesome
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Yayyy! Finally you updated!
Hey take ur time and update exam's more important!
And dahling you and your bio haha
So the tashanbazi between zaya was really fun to read!
Awesome update!
Honeymoonn? gosh i'm excited now!
Cont soon if possible!
Hugss 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Awesome update
Excited for d next update
Continue if possible
all d best for ur exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice one.
Looking forward for the upcoming tracks.
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#30
beyond awesome
superb
very well written
damn interesting
continue ASAP
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS
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