Tu Hi Tu (FF){Part2OnPg.2}

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So guys I AM BACK!!!!!!!!! (after a long period of time)
With a new FF...
This one gonna be interesting...JEALOUSY...Gonna be an important aspect...
Her is the prologue...

PROLOGUE:
Hey!Zain...How are you?Looking hot!! said Sanam hugging Zain.
Zain:Sanam!Tum bhi kaafi hot lag rahi ho.
Sanam and zain were bestfriend but sanam went abroad for higher study.
Now she is back! While here Aaliya hearing all the conversation between them and is feeling jealousy...BUT..
What??
Someone is having a bad eye on Aaliya Zain Abdullah...Who??
BILAL son of Zarine.,sister of Surraiya.
Bilal is always after aaliya
Following her,helping her.
And now Aaliya is good friend with him.
But Zain is not at all happy with her friendship with Bilal.
What's gonna happen next??
Will Aaliya come to know truth about Bilar?
Will Zain realise him love for Aaliya,Once again??

Abhi toh yeh mohobbat ki dastan sirf shuru hui hai...
Aage kya hoga??

To know more stay tuned with me!!

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"Ek baar jo maine commitment kar di...
Uske baad toh mai apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti..."
Index:
Part 1 on Page 2
Part 2 on Page 2
(Plz comment or i'll not upload)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc i really like the os being written on current tracks..continue soon.n buddy n pm me.thnx a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next Part coming up soon...
But their is one request to all plz plz
COMMENT
Or i'll kill u!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Ek baar jo maine commitment kardi...
Uske baad toh mai apne app ki bhi nahi sunti"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tu Hi Tu (FF)

Chapter 1:

A bright sun was up in the sky making the day bright for all of us...

But their was one who was feeling the darkest and loneliest...

Her body was almost dead which was still breathing...Who??

She was none other than Aaliya...

She cried the whole night when Zain gave her the third and final talaq...

Aaliya:Why??Kyu???Mere saath hi aisa kyu??Maamu aap ke bte ne aaj mera dil toda hai...

Aapka promise toda hai...mai abh is duniya mei sirf aap ke liye app ki dream ke liye jee rahe hoon...

She said all this clinging the photogrsph of her maamu in her hand...

Here zain...

Zain remembering all the moment...

Zain: aaj maine aaliya se saare rishte tod diye...maine uska saath hod diya...

Dad maine aapka aada tod diya...maine kyun kia aisa????

He cried out loud in his room

While Sanam entered keepinh her hand on his shoulder...

Sanam:Zain...

Zain quickly wiped his tears...

Zain:Sanam tum...

Sanam:Zain mujhe pata hai kit um abhi bhi aaliya se pyaar karte ho...

Zain:Naam mat lo uska...uski wajah se aaj mere pass mere dad nahi hai...

Sanam:Zain...Kya tumne use ek baar bhi bolna ka mauka diya...

Zain:Bas...Sanam meri aur tumhari shaadi honiwaali hai...abh mai kya karunga uski baat sunkar??

Sanam:Zain abhi bhi aakhri 30 din bache hai...aaliya ka iddah period...

Tum abhi bhi galti sudhar sakte ho...

Zain:Bas...Sanam jao...

She can't do anything excepting leaving zain...

Rehan enter with his type recorder...

Rehan:zain mujhe tumhare aur aaliya ke bare mei baat karni hai

Zain:Chale jao yahan se...Who aaliya mar mere liye...NIKLO!!!

Rehan:mai jaa raha hoon par yeh clip ek barr sun lena...

Zain heard the clip...

And Shouted AALIYA...

Nafeesa babhi bahar aye...

Zain:Aapne yeh sab kyun kia..,...??

She narrates the whole story...

Surraiya comes forward and slaps her...

Surraiya:Nilko mere ghar se...bahar...

Zain:Bhai mai kya karu...??

Aaliya patani mujhe maaf karega bhi ki nahi

Surraiya:Zain bhul jao us ladki ko...tumhari shaadi agle mahine hai ...SANAM ke saath...

Zain:MOM!!!
Surraiya:Tumhe tumhara wada yaa nahi??

Zain couldn't utter a single word...

But his true friend understood

Sanam came to his room

Sanam:Main tumhe aaliya ke paas laungi...tumhari aaliya tumhare pas hogi...

Zain:sachi??

Sanam:haan...

But what is happening with aaliya there??Will Zain able to clarify himself infront Aaliya??

Will once again love win??What will happen next ??

To know more stay tuned...

"Ek baar jo maine commitment kar di uske baad toh main apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti..."

So guys Part 1 is up...

Next chapter mei tum logo ko samajh aayega ki prologue yeh part aisa kyu??

Just wait n watch

Till then do whatever u want to do man!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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First! And tht brought alot of positivity hopefully something lyk dis will happen in the show
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Tu Hi Tu

Chapter 2

A new sun came in the life of Aaliya...

Who was he??

None other than...Bilal,the son of Zarine.

He has a crush on her...

Actually a bad eye on her.

Next day in office...Aaliya entered the office.

Zain came to her.

Zain: Aaliya mujhe maaf kardo...Plz...plz...

Main jaanta hoon ki maine tumhara vishwas nahi kiya...tumhara dil toda hai...tum mujhe jo saza den chahti ho do...par mujhse door mat jaao ...main tum se pyaar karta hoon.

Aaliya:Maine kaha tha na Zain jab tumhe sachayi ka pata chalege tab tum mujhse maafi mangoge...par der hojayegi...

Der hogayi Zain...Main tumhe maaf to kar sakti hoon par...

Par main abh tumhare pas nahi aa sakti...mera aur tumhara talaaq hochuka hai...aur jo yeh 30 din mujhe iddah me mile hain...

Main tumse vapas pyaar nahi karsaakti...aaj maamu mare to tumne mujh chod diya...lekin kal agar koi aur marega toh tabhi kyat um mujhe chod dogo...Bolo Zain??

Zain just couldn't say anything and then surraiya entered.

Surraiya:chodega Zain tumhe...Uski aur Sanam ki shaadi agle ek mahine baad hai.Is hi tareekh par...woh bhi SANAM ke saath.

She drags in Sanam

Aaliya wipes her tears.

Aaliya: aree wah! Yeh toh badi achi baat hai.

Badhai ho Zain.Main chahti hoon kit um hamesha kush raho.

Aur hain Sanam...Tum Zain ka khayal rakhna...

Tumne Zaroor koi ache kaam kiye honge Zain jaisa pati mila tumhe.

Khuda Hafiz!!

Sanam understood that Aaliya also loved Zain but couldn't do anything.

She came to know that Aaliya just want her husband to be happy.

Surraiya took Sanam's hand and kept her hand on Zain's

Surraiya:Sanam Zain sirf tumhara hai...bus ek aur mahina...

Zain just had the option to accept her decision because he made a promise to his mother.

Later sanam in his cabin

Sanam: Zain mujhe pata hai ki tum use pyaar karte ho...who bhi tumse karti hai par...tumne uska vishwas tod diya hai...toh abh tumhe uska vishwas wapas jeetna padega...

Zain: par kaise who mere pass plan hai!! N winks...

She tells her that he has to act that he is ready for this marriage and Aaliya doesn't matters to him anymore.

Here in Aaliya's cabin

Bilal: Oh aaliya ji! Aap roh kyu rahi hai?

Us Zain ke liye...who dekhiye who to itne maze le raha hai us sanam ke saath...

*Points towards Zain and Sanam*

Abh aap bhi Zain ko bhul jayeyi

CHaliye hume meeting ke liye chalna hai.

*Hold her hand and drags her to the lift*

Aaliya is thinking...

Kya who mujhe itni jaldi bhul gaya?? Kya main uske liye thodi bhi manaye nahi rakhti?? USne mujhe chod diya?? Abh mera kya hogaya??

While aaliya was thinking aal about this...

To more men came inside the lift...she moved a lil towards Bilal...

And then he put his hand around her waist...

Bilal: app chinta mat kijiye

He said this smirking.

On the next floor Zain and Sanam enter.

Sanam gives him a wink.

Zain holds her and starts acting.

Zain: Sanam tum har baar itni hot kaise dikhti ho??

Dekho toh inh janaab ko...mujhe toh kabhi hot nahi kaha use keh rahe hai...

Chii Zain

Sanam: Kya keh rahe ho zain?? Main paida hi hot huyi thi!!

Aaha main paida hi hot huyi thi...haan jaise hum toh kudedaan see nikle hai.

While here Bilal was making his grip more tight on her...

Aaliya: Yeh kya kar raho tum BILAL??

Zain heard her and looked towards her.

Bilal:Main...main toh kuch nahi kar rha...

He again tried to touch her...but this time zain came in between and twisted his hand

Zain: Bilal tumhe apna haath apne paas rakhna nahi aata...

Main sikhao kya?Woh tumhari bhai ki wife hai...

Bilal: Bhai who aapki wife thi...aur waise bhi agar main use pyaar kata hoon toh aapko kya problem hain??

Aaliya slaps him hard on his face.

Aaliya: tumne mujhe samajh kya rakha hai...mai aise waisi ladki nahi hoon.

She leaves from there.

Zain to bilal

Zain: Aaj ke baad agar tu uske paas bhi dhika to main teri hadi pasli ek kardunga...who abhi bhi meri biwi hai...samjha??

Bilal: Je bhai...

One week passed but...now...WHAT??

Now Sanam started falling for Zain.

She made a masterplan of killing aaliya.

But how will she doi it?? Will Aaliya be saved by Zain??

Or she gonna die??Will Zain able to find this fact about Sanam??

Or would he have to marry her??What will happen next??

#Aage kya hoga iss mahobbat ki daastan mein...

Jaane ke liye dekhte rahe aur padhte rahe...

To know more stay tuned

Till then do whatever u want to do man!

"Ek baar jo maine commitment kardi...

Uske baad toh main apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti..."

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Posted: 10 years ago
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First! Ha toh Sanam is a grey charaster love the way the story developed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
very well written
pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
both parts r superb
really loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
awesome update...!!!!!!!!!!!!
very well written..
waiting for d next part..
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