ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye - Page 12

VolimTeManik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Thank you for liking the story so far.

Thank you all for reading the story patiently.

Thank you for all your comments and likes...

Finally the last part is updated.

Hope you all enjoyed it.

PMs sent.

Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago

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priya arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

it was amazing
bt y u made aaliya die??
U should cont...
Pls pls

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: anaghazaya
Lovely update
U literally made me cry!!!

Thank you...

Sorry if it was too emotional.

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan
it was amazing
bt y u made aaliya die??
U should cont...
Pls pls

This was the story I had in mind.

As I have already mentioned first this story has a tragic end.

But I will be back soon with a new concept soon.

Thank you very much for your comments.

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Buddy this account for PMs.

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Fero

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

what u did
plz continue
make ending happier
plz plz I am crying
it's amazing
but plz make happy ending
I beg u plz

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Fero

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

plz yaar
I don't know y I am sad
plz
don't make aliya to die
plz I plead u
continue

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Anisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Aaliya died
emotional update
brilliantly penned down
thanks for this wonderful story dear
looking forward to reading more from you
thanks for the PM

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deepika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

its amazing
last part made me cry
nicely written
thanx for pm

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Sunidhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Ahh main ro rahi hoon!!

Kitna achaa tha yeh!!You r super!!

BABA BI ke anusar aapko aage aur kahaniya likhni chahyie!!

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"Main dil main aati hoon...

Samajh mein nahi..."

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