ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Awsm update
Loved it
Hating this gauhar though
Continue soon
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Awesome Prologue. Continue soon. :)
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loved all the parts
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Chapter 6(B)


Place: ZaYa room.
Time : Around 6

Zain checked his phone.
His text message
"Zain I will get late. Dont worry I will come back tomorrow morning. Bye Take care
-Aliya."

Zain : What? She dosent even have friends in Mumbai. Where will she go? Where will she stay this night? Wait...Why dint she call me up...
She dint even inform me before going...
Oh God...Whats happening?

He ringed her up.

Place : Shopping mall.
Time : 6:10

If I should stay,
I would only be in your way.
So I'll go, but I know
I'll think of you ev'ry step of the way.

The song made everyone turn towards Gauhar.
Aliya's mobile was ringing.
She took the mobile and saw Zain's name on mobile.
She cut his call.

Zain : Pick up the phone Aliya...Pick up...

A engaged tone.

A moment of silence.

Gauhar deleted the call log.

Zain ran down the stairs. He went out of the house.
He saw the driver.

Zain : Do you know where Aliya is?

*Flashback*
Aliya : Driver...take the car.
Gauhar : No...
Aliya : Why? At least everyone at home will be tension free if we take car, if not they have ring up us and ask about our whereabouts...
Gauhar : Oh come on Aliya...Lets take an auto ... You know I want to explore Mumbai.
Aliya : (Laughing) Ok...Can we...?
Gauhar : With pleasure.

They both went out the main gate.

*Flashback*

Driver : Thats it sir...I dont even know if they took auto or not.

Zain : You should have informed me.(With fuming anger)...Leave it...I'll take the car. If someone asks something tell them that we three have gone for a movie.
Driver : Yes sir.


Place : Shopping mall
Time : 6:18

Aliya : Did Zain call me?
Gauhar : No... not at all...
Aliya : Give me my phone. I heard the song I am sure.

Aliya taking the mobile from her hand..

Gauhar : The song...!! It was played in this mall.
Aliya : Just that line??
Gauhar : I have no idea...Well nice song na...

She kept the mobile without checking.

Aliya : Yes, my fav one. Leave it can we get back home? Its getting late.
Gauhar : Yes, sure we can.

Zain is driving down the street. He is searching Aliya...
He called her up again.

Zain : Switched off???? Aliya where the hell you are?

He is so tensed and he longed to see her.

Place : Out the mall.
Time : 6:25

Gauhar and Aliya were out finally.
Gauhar took few steps aback. She searched something in her bag.
The reached the auto stand.

Gauhar : Aliya...
Aliya turned.

Gauhar kept a cloth in Aliya's nasal and Aliya fell Unconscious...
With a help of few girls she made Aliya sit onside the Auto.

Driver : Where to madam?
Gauhar : Barkat Villa.

Gauhar ringed up Rizwan.

Gauhar : Haa Rizwan...Where are u now?
Rizwan : Gauhar?? Hi, I am in a party.
Gauhar : Have Zain reached there?

Rizwan was distracted by a waiter.

Waiter : Excuse me sir...Water..?
Rizwan : Yes...

Gauhar : Thankh you so much Rizwaan.
She hanged up the call.
Rizwan : What Gauhar?? Zain...
Gauhar...? Are you there...? Weird.

He was enjoying the party.

The auto reached Barkat Villa.
Gauhar managed to take Aliya upstairs.

Gauhar took a T-Shirt and a trouser from her bag.
She took out a perfume bottle from her bag and she sprayed it on the dress.


Precap :
Gauhar entered the ZaYa's room.
Gauhar : Ahhh Aliya...? You were here?
Aliya : Yes why? (Yawning)
Aliya looked the room around and her face turned pale.
Aliya screamed and she cried out loud.


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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
If you dont need PM then reply me with "Stop PM"...
It really pains when visiting the outbox. You have opened the PM but not even a comment or a like.

Buddy this account for PMs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96


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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: CUTEZAYA

loved all the parts

n plz update soon n for pms i m sndg u a buddy rqst
plz pm me when u update
- anki


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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Awesome Prologue. Continue soon. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
omg
fabulous
plz update
I can't wait uff
suspense
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

omg
fabulous
plz update
I can't wait uff
suspense
thanks for pm


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