ZaYa OS: A tear from your eye

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Posted: 10 years ago
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About the story:
This is a tragic story featuring Zain and Aliya.
This will be a similar concept to the show but the end will be tragic.
This is a very short story which will be wrapped up in 4-6 chapters.

About the updates:

PMs will be sent at once when updated.
Teasers will be given if it takes time to pen down a chapter.
According to likes and comment this thread will be updated.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue : Direct Link
Chapter 1 : Direct Link
Chapter 2 :Direct Link
Teaser : Direct Link
Chapter 3(A) : Direct Link
Chapter 3(B) : Direct Link
Chapter 4 : Direct Link
Chapter 5(A) : Direct Link
Chapter 5(B) : Direct Link
Chapter 6(A) : Direct Link
Chapter 6(B) : Direct Link
Chapter 7 : Direct Link
Surprise update : Direct Link
Glimpse of the next work : Direct Link


Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

As per the story starts...

Zain is forced to marry Aliya. He was angry on himself. He needed a vent to show his anger. The only thing in better words person he found was Aliya his very wife. He hated her as much as he can.


Aliya is facing a difficult situation now. She is in a state where she needs someone to explain her what is happening on her own life. She is facing a husbands hate, a MIL's anger and its like the whole world is standing against her.


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Thank you.
Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice prologue
waiting 4 d 1st part:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

Time: Night 11 (After the wedding rituals)
Place: Barkat Villas
At Zain and Aliya's room.


They both entered the room and there was a pin drop silence. Aliya sat on the safa beside and Zain on the edge of the bed. None talked. At lase few minutes later Aliya broke the silence.
Aliya : Sorry Zain. I couldnt make it. I know I promised you...
*Interrupted by Zain*
Zain : Stop your silly drama Aliya. It my mistake...all my mistake to believe you, trust you...You a 🤬
Aliya : *Shouts* Zain...Stop. I am talking polite and why are you using such words.
Zain : Wah, Aliya the queen is talking polite and we all must bow before her...
Aliya : I know I made a mistake and I am regretting it...I am begging your pardon and you are scolding me Zain?
Zain : Well I dont think you regret... And I wont forgive you forever in my life for ruining my life.
After a moment of silence Zain adds...
Zain : Should I believe you are regretting? Cheatercock ... Not even a tear from her eye.
Aliya : Why do you men have such a mean idea that women will cry on each and everything?
Zain : We tell what you guys do...
Aliya : You can never be a well-behaved man.
She got up and walks toward the bathroom.
Zain : Stop. Where are you going?
Aliya : I think Allah gave you two eyes. Try to use it often.
Aliya resumes walking
Zain : I too think Allah gave you a tongue to answer not to argue.
Aliya stops. She is few steps away from the door.
Aliya : Look who is taking Allah's name...
He walks towards her...
Zain : You own nothing Aliya nothing. Everything is mine here. The things you touch will go into ash. You are lost...lost in the word of Zain...Nah HELL..
Aliya is shattered. She never expected love from him just a humanity which he refuses to show. Still she resumed.
Aliya : Thank you for your invitation Zain Abdullah.
Zain is shocked and Aliya goes into the bathroom.


Precap:
Aliya : I will leave this house on that day when I cry.
Zain : Getting a tear from your eye is not much difficult for me.
Alya : Lets see...


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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
omg
really so nice yaar
too good
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was interesting...
Continue soon...
And do pm me when u update next part..
Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just love the strong Aliya here
Awesome update dear 👍🏼
precap seems interesting
do continue soon
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
its awesome
loved it
cont soon
thanx 4 d pm:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
awsum one..
cont soon and pm me plz
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