Short Story - Painful Love ~ UPDATED Part 4 ~ PG 13 - Page 7

Preeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: funpanie
Awesome
Continue soon
Do PM me😊

Thank you for liking. Means a lot.

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Sunidhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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You and your ss both r amazing...
Plz pm me when u write the next chapter...
Keep up the amazing work...

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Preeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ramita94
I've just started reading your FF infact in the last few minutes I've caught up. And I have to say I've never read an FF like this before. It's not so much that's it's a different story on the same couple we all love. But the structure and style with what you write.
I particularly love your quotes at the end, they are so apt to the story. Infact mujhe lagta hain I will have to go and read Alice in Wonderland now.

I loved your banner aswell. Your storytelling is great and I'm happy that your not rushing it. I always feel that I only read FF's mostly when the serial is not satisfying me in terms of the story so I can fulfil that through fiction. But here it's not the case.

I'm going to send you a buddy request because I can't wait for the next update! And I love also how you wait for people to unres their comments and feedback for you. Nice that you care about your readers opinions!

One last thing I really like how Zain is calling Aaliya Aaliya. Not Mamu ki bhanji he doesn't think she deserves to call her that. And mostly 'Yeh ladki' which he keeps calling her nowadays in the show which really annoys me Suri is doing excellent brainwashing of him. I think he loves to hate Aaliya!

I don't know your name but I keep thinking of Anushka looking at your DP but mera naam toh woh hi hain joh likha hain
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Thank you so much for liking my work so much. It's just one of those days when you feel bored and have nothing better to do lol. Glad you liked how the story has taken off. It's mostly true in cases when you don't like howsomething is going and you just want it to happen the way you you want it to.

I hope you continue to like the story as it goes and yes! Go ahead and read Alice in wonderland, it's brilliant and I love the quote I have included with the update. It's simple but effective. This is the actual love story of these two and it's gonna be great fun to pen it down.

And ... my name is Preeti, I just realised I hadn't said what my name was and most people don't know 😆

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