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I've just started reading your FF infact in the last few minutes I've caught up. And I have to say I've never read an FF like this before. It's not so much that's it's a different story on the same couple we all love. But the structure and style with what you write.
One last thing I really like how Zain is calling Aaliya Aaliya. Not Mamu ki bhanji he doesn't think she deserves to call her that. And mostly 'Yeh ladki' which he keeps calling her nowadays in the show which really annoys me Suri is doing excellent brainwashing of him. I think he loves to hate Aaliya!
I particularly love your quotes at the end, they are so apt to the story. Infact mujhe lagta hain I will have to go and read Alice in Wonderland now.
I loved your banner aswell. Your storytelling is great and I'm happy that your not rushing it. I always feel that I only read FF's mostly when the serial is not satisfying me in terms of the story so I can fulfil that through fiction. But here it's not the case.
I'm going to send you a buddy request because I can't wait for the next update! And I love also how you wait for people to unres their comments and feedback for you. Nice that you care about your readers opinions!
One last thing I really like how Zain is calling Aaliya Aaliya. Not Mamu ki bhanji he doesn't think she deserves to call her that. And mostly 'Yeh ladki' which he keeps calling her nowadays in the show which really annoys me Suri is doing excellent brainwashing of him. I think he loves to hate Aaliya!
I don't know your name but I keep thinking of Anushka looking at your DP but mera naam toh woh hi hain joh likha hain
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