Short Story - Painful Love ~ UPDATED Part 4 ~ PG 13 - Page 3

Anisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Poor Aaliya my heart goes out to her

totally loved this chappy dear 👍🏼 brilliantly penned down

waiting for the next part

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@WarriorGirl-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awesome Dear

Send me a pm when you update part 3

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

superb update
plz continue soon
and try for pm

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

It was super duper amazing...
Felt sad for aliya..
Wish truth comes out fast...
Update soon...

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Sanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Both of the parts were beautiful.
You write so well!!!
👏 👏
amazing job.
Update soon 😊

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LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

OMG this update was so amazing.

I love how you made Aaliya strong..where Aliya is hurt and in pain inside..suffering on her own with the idea of her death nearing and yet she manages to put a straight face in front of Zain.

And I'm glad that you showed that little change in her behavior that triggered Zain that something was wrong. I'm sure this all this would nicely fit together like a puzzle when Zain will find out in the end about her cancer.

after reading this I want more now😆

Please hurry and update the next part soon.

Oh and do pm if possible,

If not that's fine, I'll hunt for it.😉

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