Zain!!!!Meri Zindigi barbaad hogayi!!!(FF)(Pt.4 on Page8) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess5253



Mein toh chorne se rahi nahi kia toh teri khair nahiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Next part is dedicated to you...❀️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

I AM BACK!!!!

This time with the 4th part...

Hope u guys like it...

ENJOY

Zain:Yaar yeh to bahut zyaada gussa hai!!!*Whispers to himself*

Kuch toh karna padega...

Aaliya seeks permission to go somewhere from her ammi

Aaliya:Ammi main chital bagh jao mujhe kuch kitaabe leni hai...

Shabana:Aaliya beta...woh...tum Zain ko leke jao...woh jagah tumhare liye theek nahi hai...

Zain:Main tayar hoon!!!!!!!!!!*He exclaimed*

Aaliya:Tum chup raho...plz ammi...

Shabana:Nahi beta tum zain ko leke jao varna...

Zain:Sun liya??

Aaliya:Theek hai...aur tum itna itrao mat...agar mera exam nahi hota toh mai nahi chalti...

Zain:Hogaya??Ab chale??

Aaliya:Chalo...

They reach chital bagh...it is a crowded place...

Aaliya:Zain tum apne le kuch dekho main apni kitaab leke aati hoon...

Zain:Kyun??Main chalta hoon...tum meri biwi hoon...

Aaliya:Par tumne to mujhe talaaq dena chahte the...ab kya hua...??

Zain hold her from the waist...

Zain:Main manta hoon ki who meri ga;tit hi...par mujhe meri galti ki saza mil chuki hai...tumhare saath job hi hua mujhe maaf kardo...

Aaliya:Itni asaani se maaf nahi karungi...

She leaves...

She is searching for her books while some gunda/mawali come there...

Aaliya:Bhayiya yeh kitaab de do...

Mawaali:Humme lelo...*Smirks*

Aaliya:Aap kya keh rahe hai...door hatiye...

Mawali:door hatne keliye thodi aye hai...comes close to her and starts touching her making her uncomfortable...

Aaliya:Door hatiye...ZAIN ...ZAIN...she shouted

Zain looks at her comes rushing...there...hits the mawali and the second mawaali over comes aaliya and keeps his knife on her neck...

Mawaali:Oh use chod varna...*Shows him the wife*

The knife was so sharp that only keeping of knife neck made a cut...blood was coming out...

Zain kicks him out and takes the knife and hits him...

Aaliya comes and hugs him...He too tightly hugs her

Aaliya:Zain...tumne mujhe bacha liya varna...woh mere saath kya krte??

Zain:Shhh...main hoon na...*Hugs her tightly*

Shopkeeper:Ma'am aapki book...

Aaliya:Thank u bhayiya

They left in the car...aaliya was just remembering the previous moment...

They reached home...

Shabana:Aagaye tum dono...nashta karlo...

Aaliya:Jee ammi main abhi kapde leke aati hoon...

She went upstairs and zain was following her...

She picked out al the clothes...and was about to leave but Zain hold her tight from her waist...

Aaliya:Yeh kya kar rahe ho zain???Koi aa jayega...

Zain:Aane do...tum meri biwi ho...*Pulls her closer*

Aaliya:Zain ...

Zain:Hmmm

Aaliya:Ab to tum mujhe kabhi nahi chodoge...main tumse pyaar karti hoon...I LOVE YOU

Zain:Nahi chodunga...main bhi tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon...I LOVE YOU TOO*Hugs her tightly*

Shabana:Yeh aaliya abhi tak nahi aayi...she goes upstairs and sees zain and aaliya so close...

Shabana:Ummm...shayad aap dono ko maine nashta karne ke liye bulaya tha...

They quickly comeback to their normal position...

Zain:Phoops hum aa rahe the...

Shabana:Mujhe mat baata ...sab janti hon...

Zain and aaliya both are embarresed...

They leave for the sham ka nashta...

What's gonna happen next???

To know more...

Stay tuned...

Done...

Hope u like it...

Plz COMMENT...if I don't get atleast 20

COMMENTS then I'll discontinue...

Lots of Love...

#Mission 650

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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
So cute!!
U wrote it very nicely!!
I love it!
Update soon dear! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Wow dedicated to me how sweet...nd tht was cute!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
wow so romantic
waiting 4 d next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
awesome update!!
very well written
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Wow awsm updates
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Amazing parts !!
Vry nyc :)
Do continue pls !!
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