zaya ss*kyun dard hai itna * part 4 page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiee... Friends ...here I come with me new os
Kuyu dard hai ittna ???
Will write in two parts ...


Prologue
She was sleeping on the couch ... Of the living room ...her hair all messed up ...he ...entered the room tiptoeing so that no one can hear him ...sat on the floor near the couch...his eyes...falling on her swollen face...wounded face...her hands had several blue...and red patches... He had again hit her ...he slowly ...caressed her face...the wound near lips ...tears rolled down hizcheeks... And . put back all the strands of fanning over her face...he slowly whispered..."aaliya"... She opened her eyes...still marks of tears..her eyes all hazed up the tears..."zain " and then closed her eyes in pain .. After a while she sat up ..."zain tum yaha ...please jao ...koi dekh lenga toh"...
Aaj usne phir tumhe maar ...phir haat uthaya tumpe ...aaj toh Maine "...getting up aaliya pulled him back ..."zain baitho...shhh "


Should I continue...???? Do reply


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Posted: 10 years ago
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yes pleaseee continue!! i wanna read whats next now :p
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Wow interesting! Do continue xx
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Yes continue dear!!
Love it!! 😊
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Yes plz continue ...
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Yes plzzz continue
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nice concept... please continue soon...
i am not sure i will be able to comment next time... but will surely try...
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yes plz continue
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Seems interesting...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
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interesting prologue...
plzzz continue soon ...
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