zaya ff Koi fariyaad.. chap 30 - pg 141 ; THREAD 2 link : pg 1 - Page 80

awsome update😊

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Yaaayyy Me first😆

Loved the update... as usual. I think i am gona like BaYaan more here 🤣 i love Ayaan in ur fic.

Zain deserves to be on teh outside, watching them ... n feeling the pain that aaliya felt for years..

and selfish person😡 doesnt he know that his DAD loves aaliya n wud want to know that she is alive😡😡 i am really not concerned about Asad.. but i guess he shud know too... not for him.. but for Zoya..

Waiting for Sammy to band bajao Daddy dearest😎

Originally posted by: candy...

Barkat took revenge from Ayaan.😃😆

❤️It.

👏

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Once again outstanding wrk dear. .
Love aaliya's action towards zain...
Her strong n brave attitude made it more interesting. ..
Love aayan part also...
The way aaliya handle zain...its fabulous. ..n zain deserve it. ..
Sooo now more difficulties for zain Abdullah. ...his own son mu him. .
SSo it's going more intrsting. ..
Continue soon ..
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Keep rocking

Originally posted by: ZainXAliya

I wonder what's going to happen in the next update, and wondering why Aaliya all of a sudden is at front of Zain's door.. 😕 I hope she doesn't apologize or anything or maybe her kids will want Mr. Stranger to apologize to their mother. 😉 But .. I think Aaliya is all by herself..? Hm.. New twists, loving your cliffhangers but they do shock me! 😲 Ayaan and Barqat scene was great too. 😊 Hope there will be loads of ZaYa moments tomorrow. 😳

Zain better think of a better way to introduce himself in front of Aaliya! 😆 Anyways, I was hoping if you could use some parts of what I say in your next update if your fine with it..? So thinking since Aaliya is at his door, she will diss him and lecture him not to come near her or her children and that they should get into a cute argument fighting for their kids. 😳 He should be saying how he atleast wants them to know him as their real father. I know it sounds lame but thought you could make something out of it. 😭

I know my long comments are boring you, so peace and lovely update! 😃

Outstanding update dear. ..loved it
So now the reason behind aaliya's sudden appearance on zain door was clear..
Love the way she think abt their children. .
Hey but wt happened when they little pies came to know it..that the stranger is their father ???
Bt I m 100 % sure its will tooo hard n complicated for zain...
In other hand sammy didn't like him..
Egrly waiting for next chapter. .
Its going to be more interesting. .
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Keep rocking

awesome part
so aaliya decided to tell the kids
loved ayaan and barqat part
continue soon
thanks for the pm

absolutely brilliant

Lol Ayaan was funny...:)))

woahhh!!! tat was fab man :D