ZaYa SS : The Fault In Our Stars : chap 5 pg 30 : 19 may - Page 8

wow great update..it was awesome loved it..wanna know abt zain too i hope u will clear all our confusion in next update..thanks for the pm..small request pls update soon😊

.nice update thanks 4 t pm do cntnue

Really nice update

nice update.loved it.plz PM me

Wow!!!👏 The very first update of your first Zaya venture is just awesome di!⭐️

How can you be so perfect in explaining someone's feelings! You know what di? You have improved... No.. no... improved is a wrong word... You are groomed up for good! If someone reads your very first work and reads your current works... they will be surprised to the change in your writing skills, which is obviously for the best! You are indeed one of the best writer di! Your concepts and way of writing is just fantastic...👏👏👏


Coming to the update, it was a very nice start but it was small. Aaliya left Zain just because he said something stupid and that too in a drunken state? That was not fair! If she took the decision of leaving him, she should have at least confronted Zain and should have left after informing him!

I guess she already signed the divorce papers and left it somewhere in the room as you didn't mention about it... What if Zain forgot what he said to Aaliya in a drunken state after waking up?😆 That would be too good😉

I'm also so curious to know Zain's ambitions or dreams... Aaliya being a school teacher in an orphanage is cool! Waiting for the story to unfold di!

Till then, Take care🤗

Love you loads❤️

P.S: Will comment Virman's DMG once I get time di and please don't be angry on me for not commenting... I'm just caught up with exams.. But please try to update that and this!😛

Superb update...! Sad but gud...thnks 4 d pm..!!!

nice story dear

Originally posted by: virmanvsVirika

nice story dear

the way yu expressd aliya's feelings were superb

continue soon and do pm me pls

thank u... i will pm u... 😊

Wow ! Dear it is so good !! 👏

Its awsm dear...
Love whole idea...amazing
Hey I didn't watch this serial but love ur story
Feel sad for aaliya..
Wt want to know the story of zain' s side...
And his journey of last two years...
Thanks dear for pm...
Great wrk...keep it up...