ZaYa SS : The Fault In Our Stars : chap 5 pg 30 : 19 may - Page 19

Originally posted by: -Lila-

Res

EDITED*

I'm sorry for being so late, was really busy. its okk...

Okay firstly, thankyou sooo much for the dedication, and that too Zain's POV chapter. ohh ur welcome...

I've been wanting to read Zain's Pov from the start of the story because I wanted to know what exactly was going in his mind when he hurt Aliya. now you know it... 😳

And I must say I'm very impressed by it. I love how you've made Zain so human, someone who makes mistakes. thank u and u will keep on seeing this thing... bcos i try to make the story as realistic as possible... with reactions which are so humane...

He had an ambition in life and that he has achieved but the thing that borthers him is that the success, fame and money he was after for so long somehow doesn't give him the happiness he thought it would. Aliya would(But he isn't aware of that yet) yeah he is unaware of it... but someday may be he will...

And about him afraid of fallling in love again, that was my favorite. its so very natural, i mean the fear; isnt it...??? 😳

Loved it.

Thank you for the PM! ur welcome...

Originally posted by: virmanxyz

nice update story is geting would love to knew zain side of story continue sn

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Originally posted by: autumn.03

Bookmarked.

Originally posted by: babydolll

Nice one... feeling bad fr aaliya...

waiting fr face off...

Update soon

pm me if possible

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

naina another interesting one 👍🏼
sorry par cant comment regularly par jab bhi time milega i will surely do it ...doing great job as alwayz 😃

Originally posted by: aashiqua

i jst lyk it...and d title attracted me..its a book i love...update and pm me plz

Originally posted by: -Lila-

Naina, lovely update!

thanks... 😊

I loved the contrast of aaliya falling in love and Zain gradually detesting her.

Can't help feel bad for Aaliya cause, here's a girl who is slowly and gradually giving is heart to a man who's irritated by her very presence, he blaims her for his failures. This could easily break anyone's heart! yeah... u are right...

Though I have a feeling that someone has instigated him to feel that way for Aaliya, but let's see. yeah lets see...

Btw, loved the Parents and child scene😃 thanks...

Thanks for the PM!😳

And can't wait for more

Originally posted by: vijayarvi

wow excellent loved it.omg felt sad for aliya..thanks for a wonderful update and pm😊

Originally posted by: ZaYaVeeBa

awesoem update plz PM me when u write the next part u write awesomely😃

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Awesome update di!👏⭐️👏

You cleared all my doubts!😃

Will give long comments later😉

Take care🤗

Love you❤️