ZaYa SS : The Fault In Our Stars : chap 5 pg 30 : 19 may - Page 10

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: DMG2010
Wow!!!!! Youre simply great 👏 thank u soo much...

I really love your writing, you have an amazing talent. You have me hooked, I'm eagerly waiting for your next update. means a lot...!!!!

I love how you've described Aaliya's feelings for Zain. How she can sacrifice her own happiness for his. dats true love you see... 😳

Just one question, are you going to have Zain's POV too? will surely add...

Can't wait until your next update.

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
Lovely start
thanks for the pm

do continue

thank u dear 😊

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend
Wow!!!👏 The very first update of your first Zaya venture is just awesome di!⭐️ thank u soo much aaru...

How can you be so perfect in explaining someone's feelings! just feel the charcter's emotions and thats it... 😳 You know what di? You have improved... i know... i myself noticed it but u r the only one to say it to me... No.. no... improved is a wrong word... You are groomed up for good! If someone reads your very first work and reads your current works... they will be surprised to the change in your writing skills, which is obviously for the best! You are indeed one of the best writer di! Your concepts and way of writing is just fantastic... thanks a ton sweetheart... you are making me emotional now... 👏👏👏

Coming to the update, it was a very nice start but it was small. Aaliya left Zain just because he said something stupid and that too in a drunken state? That was not fair! If she took the decision of leaving him, she should have at least confronted Zain and should have left after informing him! u will get your answer in the next update...

I guess she already signed the divorce papers and left it somewhere in the room as you didn't mention about it... What if Zain forgot what he said to Aaliya in a drunken state after waking up?😆 That would be too good😉 lets see... 2nd part will be something u are talking abt ryt now... 😉

I'm also so curious to know Zain's ambitions or dreams... Aaliya being a school teacher in an orphanage is cool! Waiting for the story to unfold di!

Till then, Take care🤗

Love you loads❤️ love u too...

P.S: Will comment Virman's DMG once I get time di and please don't be angry on me for not commenting... I'm just caught up with exams.. But please try to update that and this!😛 its okk... take ur time...

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

OMG !!! Naina.. its awsm dear. 👏👏👏 thank u lara...

A drunk zain saying those heart sickening things

aaliya who was going to propose her that night !!

Alcohoal is very bad for health and worst for

your love life, when will these kinds understand that ??? its not about thinking n understanding all the times u know... ppl dont think while drinking

Loved the concept, thank u so aaliya is now in simla

and two... two damn long years have passed...😭😭 yeah...

Hope zain finds her soon, hope he gets some

kick in his ass for making aaliya cry like this... 😡😡

for making her suffer like this. lets see... do stay tuned n suggestions are welcomed 😉

Cont soon...

And thanks thannks thanks so much for

sending me pm... your most welcome...

I have always been a fan of your writing naina...

You have really magic in you.. you know that ?? you are no less... im your fan, u know that...?? 😉

And

Mujhe bhi eik updt dedicate kar dena sweetu pweetu...

😳😳 pakka karungi... 😃 😃

Take care... tada...

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sara..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

hey its awesome...

zain asked for divorce😲

Aliya loved zain...

so sad she decorated n stufff n he announced divorce...

Cont soon😊

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: pinky06

hey its awesome...
zain asked for divorce😲
Aliya loved zain...
so sad she decorated n stufff n he announced divorce...
Cont soon😊

thank u...
glad u liked it...
will updt tmrw 😊

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

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aaru aka Angelic_Friend

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3 DEDICATIONS because i couldnt decide on one amongst these three... 😳 😳

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Chapter 2

because of LOVE

today in the morning a couple came to the orphanage as they wanted to adopt a child. for them its just adoption, a simple legal procedure but for us... for us its like giving our precious possession to a stranger hoping they would also treasure it, the way we did. i always loved children and knew they were fragile but now i know them as the most beautiful creation of god. children are nothing but the blessing of god showered on few. the couple i met this morning really seemed nice, sweet and lovable. they are well settled, from a good family background and have everything in life except a baby. i looked into their hopeful eyes and immediately knew that they badly crave for a baby. they wanted to adopt a new born and today they saw that baby for the first time. i cant tell what that moment was like. it seemed MAGICAL. the lady picked up angel (thats what we named her) and her face at that moment reflected nothing but selfless love... love that a mother feels for her child... and her husband seemed too excited to catch a glimpse of the new member of their family, so he hugged his wife sideways; his one hand his wife and the other around his beautiful daughter. they were now a PERFECT FAMILY. now they were COMPLETE. i smiled on seeing them and wished i ever got a chance to life such a moment with zain. if everything went smooth between me n zain, i would have also started dreaming of such a moment... dream of our baby... may be a junior zain in my arms... but who am i fooling... i dreamnt of something like this and still sometimes i dream of it though i know my dream will NEVER come true.

i was kind of a daydreamer n i think im still one. thanks to this dreaming past time of mine that i never noticed zain's changing behaviour towards me. i failed to notice that he started getting irritating on small small things also. i was so lost in that feeling of being in love that i failed to notice the changes taking place around me. at that time zain was trying hard to adjust in office and earn a name for himself. he wanted to become like usmaan uncle; his dad but hated to be only known as usmaan abdullah's younger son. i dont know why his individuality mattered to him that much... i loved being called as usmaan abdullah's daughter-in-law but zain was clearly not happy. the sad part is that i realised it now but i swear, if i realised it back that time, i would have supported him and helped him achieve his dreams.

it was just another day of my life... my life as aliya zain abdulla. i was waiting for zain in our bedroom. it was 12:30am but still there was no sign of him. i called zain but was unable to reach him. after an hour, zain returned and i smiled at him and went to the kitchen to bring food for him. i returned and saw him reading some file, so i asked him to have food but in reply i got nothing. i again asked him and yelled at me saying that i do nothing and sit at home idle all day and now i have started irritating him. his words hurted me but i chose to ignore it. i thought he is tired and i should not argue with him right now, so i went to my side of the bed and slept. this used to happen often but my love for zain, used to name this attitude of his as tiredness and stress. but now i know the real reason; he wasnt finding me enough for him. he used to feel that im nothing but a useless housewife but poor he... he doesnt know that a housewife is never useless, she is a HOUSEMAKER.

days passed by and the distance between zain and me grew. now he didnt use to sit with me or talk to me, he was someone else whom i didnt know. i donno what went wrong and how my life turned upside down. i should have found the answer to my questions but i dont what to. honestly i cant... i cant confront zain and ask him to answer my questions. i cant look at him. the more i look at him, the more my love will grow for him. i still love him. after what he did to me, i am still unable to hate him. i am still in love with my husband and i cant do anything about him but that doesnt mean i can blindly trust him now. my love is no longer blind.

on valentines night, when zain returned home drunk and said those hurtful words; i was broken and shattered. when he was about to pass out, i led zain to bed and took off his blazer. i kept the blazer on the nearby couch when something fell from it. they were some papers and out of curiousity i took those papers and opened them. they were DIVORCE papers... zain and mine divorce papers which werr already signed by zain... was he too eager to get rid off me was the first thought that crossed my mind... but next moment everything around faded off and the realisation sinked in that it was the end of our marriage, of our relationship. tears were flowing from my eyes and i got flashbacks from these ten months of our marriage. i recalled almost every moment... happy moments... sad moments... before i could absorb this shock, zain started murmuring something. i couldnt understand what is he saying, so i went close to him n sat beside him but he on the bed and me on the floor. he was saying something like he hates me, i disgust him, i am the root of failures in his life, i brought badluck for him, i am nothing for him... this was the last blow and the damage was already done. i was heartbroken for life... i thought for a while and decided that if me leaving zain would make him happy. i will LEAVE him. so with shivering hands i signed the divorce papers and kept it on the side table. my tears were still not stoping, so ignoring the pain and agony, i started packing my clothes and took some of the photographs with me. soon i was done with the packing and the tears were also dried by that time. i gathered every ounce of energy left in my body and decided to leave a letter for zain telling him that i love him and i can do anything for him.

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Hope you guys liked it...

NEXT>>>

Edited by naina927 - 10 years ago

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Emaani.95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

LOVED IT..!!!!

You always do wonders with simple words and make a beautiful sentence that touches the heart!.

Loved the whole update<3

You answered many of my questions in this part. Thanks!

You portray feelings very nicely :)

Now I am really eager to know Zain's part of the story. Do write in Zain's point of view also.

Keep up the good work Naina.

Edited by Kyara.95 - 10 years ago

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Maneesha Reddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Okay here we got the answers for all the questions raised on the previous update...😃

According to Zain, Aaliya is a bad luck sign?😲

Aaliya signed the papers too😲...but what i learned is in islam if they want to unite again she has to marry some other guy and then come back to him😕

I hope the divorce is not accepted

waiting for the next part!!

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Kyara.95
LOVED IT..!!!!
You always do wonders with simple words and make a beautiful sentence that touches the heart!.
Loved the whole update<3
You answered many of my questions in this part. Thanks!
You portray felling very nicely :)
Now I am really eager to know Zain's part of the story. Do write in Zain's point of view also.
Keep up the good work Naina.

thank u sooo much kyara...!!! really means a lot... 😊
zain's pov will be coming up really soon...

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