*COMPLETED*#3!! FF:THE BROKEN BED, Chapters 21 to 27 - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
cliffhangers😈..u r a devil...oh no khushi is kidnapped...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Wiwy do hurry and update. Very good update btw
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Awesome update.

But I am really confused, Arnav likes Khushi, he did a lot many things to stop her. He even sent Raizadas to Gosak but why did he reconciled with Lavanya then?! He is the most confused man on the surface of Earth and he is now confusing me?! Nalayak Raizada..!!

Okay Khushi is going to say yes to NK?! This is bad. But who kidnapped her? Shyam?! And Lavanya, mamaJi and MamiJi all are together?! Holy...!! This is getting more interesting.

I am really sad for Khushi, poor girl. Of course ASR is a jerk, confused jerk..LOL

As they say, har kissi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein..!!


Hey Cheesy thanks for commenting inspite of exams!

Nalayak Raizada to woh hai!😆 He thinks it is his responsibility to keep Khushi safe from an evil man like Shyam. But he cant have a relationship with Khushi who demands love because he does not believe in love. He prefers a non commital relationship. So La!
Sach hai har kissi ko nahi milta yahan pyaar zindagi mein..!! Thanks once again for the song, your unique style of commenting! ❤️🤗 Hope you had a great day yesterday!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr

Wow! I think this is the most interesting chapter I have read so far! So many things happening. I can't wait to read the next update. (Quickly! Please!) I was a bit surprised at Arnav's turn of thoughts. Especially after he had sent Anjali and Nani all the way to Gosak.

Kushi needs to stop letting him control her actions, too! If she gets engaged to NK just because she's mad at Arnav, has she thought, she will have to sleep with NK when she gets married to him. I guess, she's so mad that she has not thought about that, at all!
I'm also surprised Arnav did not act upon his misgivings on Mamaji's hanging up on him and not answering his questions.
Wonder is Mamaji is involved in the kidnapping? I'm sure Lavanya is. And Mami?
Waiting for the next update.
Happy celebrations to you, too.


Thanks for finding it interesting! And thanks for commenting in such details!😃
As for Arnav he was always teda! He wants, he doesn't want her, he wants her, he doesn't want her...😕
Arnav will have to act now! Khushi's been kidnapped! What the! He can't just sit back!
I like what you said about whether Khushi has thought of the consequences of her marriage with NK...sleeping with NK to begin with! No she has not thought that at all! But I hope she realizes soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salooni

di you havve not pm me

why
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😆 I PMd you! 🤗

Posted: 11 October 2013 at 5:27pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: salooni

so villians are in action

lovely
loved how both are fuming in anger
wonderful mystery part
and at last so many to suspect
one victim in there hand
other in delhi
wow
many things in one instance
loved it 😃


Thanks for liking! Mystery will unfold in the next update once I begin writing it! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


Arnav made you cry😡 Rakshas kahin ka!
Poor dear. Don't you worry. Sab theek ho jayega.😃

but in sab ke piche toh app hai na😡

i know sab theekh ho jayega app ho na plz jaldi theekh karo nd updt do na di bohot time ho gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


😆 I PMd you! 🤗

Posted: 11 October 2013 at 5:27pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohk i completely hate u for the cliff hanger...but i love u for the update..its lovely...update soon andthnx for the pm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ee ka howat hai, Wiwy ji? Mamaji ka bakri ki dhaal ma bhediya hai? (wolf in sheep's clothing) You are making Mamaji an interesting character. Aww, Arnav thinks he can forget Khushi by patching up with La. But still he wants someone near her who can keep giving her news to him. His brain has gone bonkers.
Uff these love birds. One faints taking his name and the other jumps up from his sleep taking her name. Jao Arnav bitwa, Khushi needs you or rather you need her.
So, Shyam seems to be the likely culprit behind the kidnapping. But, why do I feel that it is someone else? Hmm... inbhestigation kareka padi.

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