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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, this story is getting only better and better. No matter where your creative muse leads this story to, at least we've been given a glimpse of the depths of their feelings for each other, more important THEY'VE been given a chance to show each other what they feel. That knowledge does change the dynamics of the situation and will inform any of their future behaviour.

Hats off for such a powerful, amazing story, Arisai.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
i had a feeling this IS going to happen to save Arnav's reputation...this is sazd...but lets see...update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. I can't even. This was just amazing. The way you portrayed Khushi's look and emotions was just perfect and then the way you turned her from this evil woman in front of the media to the helpless girl that she actually is was fabulous to read.
Hahahah and what a time for Anjali to go into labour.
The end had my like ;O helll nawww! But you're right, it must be done to clean Arnavs image! Man Khushi is doing so much for him. Her rant to Arnav was brilliant and she was total right. Aww. She's totally broken. :(
Great stuff this is, thank you!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..what an end to the chap.. this is such a great ff..
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Posted: 12 years ago
why is everybody round her so adamant to break my heart??.i have never liked breezy, feel-good and i-am-going-to-puke-over-this-mush stories... i like them dark and sinister and heart-tugging???but hey!!! i am also a mere human... how much schock can i absorb??!!
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but anyway, i love the way you are taking the story forward!!! though i would like see more interactions between Arnav and Khushi... because i guess its their life... their story!!!
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so i would like to see both of their takes on the situations and things!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Don't be sorry.
Be Fast!
And Update as fast as you can!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was just hoping that it will go like this.
i feared it and it happened .
i was hoping of arnav's reaction as a true lover which he did.
the same with kushi as a best wife and lover.
but it is really tough to expect any thing good further,
but hope you being the writer will do some thing to end up well.
hopefully eager to see good things happening.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nooo...they cannot get a divorce...oh man it was beautiful...simply brilliant n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
No. They are so in love. God the world of politics.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i sensed something is wrong seeing d sorry in d pm itself... though it was a power packed update...hope everything gets well next...
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