|||| HaYa OS: That Day |||| *REMOVED*

Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

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not active in this forum so removing my work. sorry for the trouble if you wish to read my work always welcomehttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4497935/get-drunk-with-soju-join-in-for-the-ride-index😳😳

Edited by BlackWidowBaby - 9 years ago

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

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i did not mentioned Harman's name... mujhe use villain nahi banana tha 😭

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sparklingeyes

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Posted: 9 years ago

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U made me cry 😭

Saumya is going to suffer so much km the show as well

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Reenatyzed

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Posted: 9 years ago

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omg 😲
so deep and thoughtful
i am speechless 😭
u actually wrote somu's feelings which are not shown in serial
"kumkum touched my forhead i got to know i belong 2 him" ahhh this line is so magical ❤️
in the end somu's dreams were broken 😭
simply amazing os.
i am a big fan of ur writings now
hats off
PS-where is my OS? 🤣

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Dikshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I think I liked it 😲 😆

I would like something like that to happen in the show... Saumya becoming a stronger person bcoz of all this and later Harman to realize his mistake and redeem himself and New journey of HaYa to start 😳

Nice One Kitty it would be great if u'll continue it 😳 😆

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Sudha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It's beautuful, nicely written
I loved it😊

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xAishuuux

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aww... 😭 you made me cry re...
It is beautiful... make it longer. Continue it please... ❤️
The kumkum and crossing the threshold lines were indeed very touching... :( You portrayed Somu's feeling so well... Starting from the unknown feeling she had when he first walked into her house to the point where her dreams were broken. 💔 In few seconds her whole universe vanished and she doesn't even know what made him react like this... :(
I loved it re... 🤗
Want more of it... 😆 I'm addicted to your writing now... if you have time, please continue it. 😳

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes
U made me cry 😭
Saumya is going to suffer so much km the show as well

i know right hope cvz handle it very well

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Reenatyzed
omg 😲
so deep and thoughtful
i am speechless 😭
u actually wrote somu's feelings which are not shown in serial
"kumkum touched my forhead i got to know i belong 2 him" ahhh this line is so magical ❤️
in the end somu's dreams were broken 😭
simply amazing os.
i am a big fan of ur writings now
hats off
PS-where is my OS? 🤣

thanks fr d comment and regarding os i told u its on hold 🤣🤣

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Daety.
I think I liked it 😲 😆
I would like something like that to happen in the show... Saumya becoming a stronger person bcoz of all this and later Harman to realize his mistake and redeem himself and New journey of HaYa to start 😳
Nice One Kitty it would be great if u'll continue it 😳 😆

me too i like strong women who stands for themselves... lets see whats there in our platter... abhi tak socha nahi hai aage ka 😳

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