Shine in my Darkness *sandhir new TS* last part updated :)

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Hello guys I don't know how this idea popped into my stupid brain but it indeed popped. So it's a two-shot story and i haven't written any TS till now. So do spare me with my mistakes. N thank u guys giving so much love to my writing. It's because of u all that I could encourage myself to write more.

SHINE IN MY DARKNESS

Part-1


It's been 5 long years without you. But I still crave for you like a small child craving for mothers love. U were my only family left ...but I still want you back in my life..I still feel your presence around me ur childish behaviour still happens to bring smile on my face. I could still see ur ravishing face infront of me those haze dark orb...that rosy lips..those soft cheeks..that smile which too curved my lips seeing you...which still attract me like a magnet but alas it's just my mere conception. I still held myself responsible for ur death...I have started to hate myself so I created a hell for me. Now, I'm living in dark..now its darkness who surrounds me...my curtains are always drawn my room have hundreds of web...my doors always closed. I don't sleep or eat much I just sit on my rock chair gazing ur photos which hung in my wall. But something different happened with me today after 5long years someone dare to open my room door without even knocking it or asking for it. I was hell angry with that person but when I turned my face I saw her. Was I seeing her the first time?? But it didn't felt like. I thought I was meeting someone special to me after a long it. Was I dreaming?? Is she here for me?? A flashback ran through my spine.

**Flashback (7 years back)**

'The only one who have right to trigger his anger'

FITE roodkee

'Let me help you yaar...we are a team remember??'

'I don't need ur help..I can do this all alone'

'Come on randhir leave ur MCP ego behind...u won't be able to do this alone and that too in 15 min'

'Don't u dare mess with me, sanyukta aggarwal' still keeping my eyes on the electric motor which still have some faults

'Randhir u r bonkers!!' She exclaimed

I frowned looking at her guts. It's 3rd year of the collage and no one dare to mess with 'The Randhir Singh Shekhawat' but exceptions are always there. Only and only Sanyukta could trigger his ego. She continued...

'Don't you remember that if WE aren't able to complete this task on time then Vardhan sir will kick both of us out of the dream team so let me in' which croaking her bows.

I sighed and then remembered that 'NEVER ARGUE WITH STUPID PEOPLE, THEY WILL DRAG YOU DOWN TO THEIR LEVEL AND BEAT YOU WITH EXPERIENCE' I chuckled thinking this.

'What are you smiling at?? Did I just cracked a joke..huh??'

'You are already a big clown...you don't need to crack a joke for that miss farzi'

'What?? How dare you, jerk!!' And folded her hand against her chest.

I always enjoyed looking her facial expression that gets change within a sec or so.

'Ohh bimbo...WE have to work on this task...so come here and help me'

She looked at me with shocked expressions...so I corrected my statement at once.

'I mean I don't want to get kick from the dream team because of u...so help me with this'

'Once a MCP, always a MCP' she spoke out

**Flashback ended**

'Randhir??' Her voice felt like a music to my ears. I was meeting her after 6 years. She was indeed my arch enemy from collage time but we both were the one who can understand each other's emotions without even uttering a single word. I wanted to hug her as tightly as I could but I controlled my emotions and once again started to stare on the photos which hung on my wall. I was hell angry with her as she didn't show up when I needed someone the most...but I know I was no one to her for ask her for this kind of affection. I know that she have always loved parth and maybe she would have married him till now or maybe she would be having her kids by now...but what she is doing here at my house?? To taunt me that she was right that I'm so careless that for my deeds i have lost her...I have lost my princess...I have lost my only sister
(So guys did I shocked u all...by the way what u guys were thinking I will make sanyukta die or bring a new love in randhir's life..naah I hate sad stories re🤣)
She came towards the window and flung opened the curtain letting out all darkness to creep out and lightness to make its path. Dust particles were clearly visible in sun light to which sanyukta made a disguise face.

'What have u done to yourself randhir?? Just look at you it looks like u haven't cleaned ur rooms from ages...and ur face from how many months haven't u shaved !! I doubt in collage girls drool over u.' She smirked

How can she smirk so well...that was mine trade sigh. These were my first thought after her statement but I brushed away those thought and drifted to my MCP mode again!!

I had it enough she was again targeting by ego like she used to do in collage.

'Just leave me alone farz...sanyukta' trying hard to control my emotions

' ohh so u remember my name huh?? Not bad' she came closer to me and sat on her knees infront of my armchair and held my hand, squeezing it a little.

'Let it out randhir...I will understand you'

Now I was broken...some dried up tears again formed in my eyes and made there way straight though my cheeks and landed up on sanyukta's hand holding up my hand tightly.

'Sanyukta I...I have lost...her sanyu...kta. I don't want to live anymore' I cried my heart out but I felt even more bad when I saw her crying too. I hugged her with my all mighty almost breaking her bones.
Did she too loved me?? Why is she back?? Why is she crying? How did she found out where I'm living?? And most imp. Is she married??

We broke the hug and stared at each other looking at the changing we have gone thought from last 6years.

I managed some ask her 'are you married sanyukta?'

She was astonished at my question and stood up from her knee and started walking but I held her hand tightly in my hands and said something which was hardly audible to her but she did understood...

'Please don't go sanyukta, I need you'

She freed her hand from my grip and started walking towards the room door leaving me all shattered all over again but to my surprise she turned around and said calmly

'Randhir...

To be continued😆

do leave ur valuable comments😃😃

Love
neha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part one - pg no.1
Edited by Fairystar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES FOR UPCOMING PART😉

unres

me 1st 😊

ok so no more crap i m coming to update

hey bhagvan neha tumne kya likha hai

its awesome dear

i love it so much

thank you so much for pm me

love you😊

sakshi

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shit Mann ...xD
Moi 2nd :(
Anyways reswa


editing...!!!

wanna shoot the person above me...🤢😕
anyways...
coming to ur TS...
UR DEFINITELY HOOKED TO THE WORD DARKNESS...
BUT HEY!
YOUR WORK ARE FANTASTIC...
LOVED THIS PART TO THE CORE ...
YOU'VE WRITTEN BRILLIANTLY...👏👏👏
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY...👏

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MOOCHER...😉😆

LOADS OF LOVE
ANU ⭐️


Edited by Honey-FLAB - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

Shit Mann ...xD
Moi 2nd :(
Anyways reswa


Hahah shukar kar 2nd tu aagyi😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES😳
UNRES
OMG Neha
Your TS is lovely,lovely, lovely written😳⭐️
love it to the core...dear❤️
Awesome written👏
plz update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
🤗
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
🥳looks like I'm the first to comment😉okay reading it now...😊
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IT WAS FABULOUSLY WRITTEN NEHA 👏👏
but you got me gal...
seriously even I thought for 1 sec that Sanyu is dead😔
but hum Sandhirians hain
kavi v unhe juda nahi hone denge🤣
But what ???😲
Randhir thinks Sanyu loved Parth
and Randhir...bechara kitna heartbroken hain...
Sanyu please uska khayal rakhna...
superb writing👏loved it❤️
waiting for the next part eagerly
update asap
thanks for the PM🤗
Love
Sudeshna
Edited by gossipgirl12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited guys...now plzz do unres ur posts _/\_
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.
Unres.

I opened your PM the minute you sent it to me and I thought that I'd be the first one to res but ugh. :'/
Anyways, this was beautiful Neha. Randhir lost his sister? o.O
Do continue jaldi.
Love,
Vanii ^_^
Edited by -Ms.Rocker- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start
interesting concept
do continue
thanks for the PM

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