EK THI RAJKUMARI(part 6 updated on pg 8)

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Ek thi Rajkumari

Character sketch

Rajat tokas ( Maharaj Virendra Pratap Singh or Veer)
Mugdha chapekar ( Rajkumari Ananya)
Samar Singh of Prc ( Yuvraj Aryan, Ananya's brother)
Laveena Tandon (Amrita)

Part 1

This is the story of a girl, of her ability to run a whole kingdom as the queen, of her attempt to avenge her brother's death, during the course of which she finds her soul mate and her actual annihilation of those who were involved in the intrigue against her kingdom as well as her brother's life. She was no less capable than a prince, infact in every respect she was far better than her elder brother, Aryan, may it be politics or warfare or anything else and more competent and efficient than her brother.

However, this does not stand as the barrier between the affectionate relation that both these brother and sister share. There was affluence of love and affection between them.

Now our story has its inception in a period when our princess whose name was Ananya, inspite of all her superior qualities, was devoid of any sense of responsibility towards her kingdom which was the consequence of her brother's blind love towards her, who did never let her do anything and as an elder brother he always tried to fulfill all her demands, thus fueling her whimsical and capricious nature.Hence, she grew up to be a very naughty, arrogant, capricious girl. Her decision about anything used to be the final word.

The story opens in the fort of Udaigiri, it was daytime and crowned prince Aryan was returning from the council hall known as the rajyasabha. As was his custom he headed straight towards his beloved sister's room. However, as he reached the room and went inside through the door he sensed immediately that something was wrong, that something was certainly out of place as all the maids were running here and there as if in search of some thing. The prince was astonished as he wondered what could have happened that made all the maids this much tensed.

Deciding to enquire about the problem, he stops the maid who was nearest to him and asked: "Baat kya hain, aakhir aap log is tarah kahan bhagein ja rahein hain aur kya dhoond rahein hain, koi kho gaya hain kya?"

The maid replied in a breathless and scared tone: mujhe maaf kar dijiye rajkumar, kuch der pehle to sabkuch thik tha, woh to yehin thi, humto bas unki liye dudh lane gaye the par pata nehin itne mein kya hua aur ????who kahin nehin mil rahin."

Dreading what the answer should be the prince asked in a very worried tone: "Humko sach sach bataye kaun nehin mil rahin? Kya who Anaya hain?"

The much frightened maid replies "Ji Rajkumar.Wo toh abhi yehin par thi lekin main laut kar dekhti hoon ki wo kahin par bhi nehin hain.Rajkumariji ko hum sabne pura mahal mein dhoond liya lekin wo humko kahin bhi nehin mili Rajkumar.

Rajkumar Aryan gives vent to all his anger, frustration at the inefficiency of those maids and boundless worry and anxiety about the safety of his beloved sister by bursting out on the maid: "Matlab kya hain aapka? Rajkumari mahal mein nehin hain toh phir who kahan chali gayi? Aur aap sab log kya kar rahein the?Sab ek saath dudh lene chale gaye the kya?Aap sab log dhyan se humari baat sun lijiye,aap sab ko pata hain ki humari behen hume humari jaan se bhi jyada pyari hain, agar usko kuch ho gaya na toh hum aap mein se kisi ko bhi jinda nehin chorenge,kahe de rahe hain hum?

Then again glaring at those poor, unfortunate creatures he angrily demanded: "Aura ab aap sab log yahan kharein kharein humara muh kya taak rahein hain?Jaiye aur jake jald se jald humare behen ko dhoondna suru kijiye,mahal ka har kona,har galiyari chaan mariye,humko humari bahen chaiye bas,jaiye dhoondna suru kar dijiye?

All the maids and other servants rushed out of the place in an extreme haste to search for the lost princess and even more to escape the boundless rage of the prince. Now the anxious and worried brother muttered to himself: "Hey Bhagwan pata nehin humari pyari bahen Ananya kahan hogi , kaise hogi?Uski raksha karma Prabhu?Ish puri duniya mein humein who sabse jyada pyari hain agar usko kuch ho gaya toh hum to mar hi jayenge
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice start dear.Post next part soon dear.
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Means what?? Sorry I dont get u??
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Originally posted by: sweetshera

Thanks Soooooooooooooo much Rakhi dear for liking it 😊 😊. I'll soon give the ud πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ.

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hi nandini dear its just too great πŸ‘πŸ‘post the next part soon me waiting 4 it but one request make ur font size little big plz πŸ˜‰great work dear
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Means what?? Sorry I dont get u??

nandini its mean she will read the story first and then coment on it πŸ˜‰hope u got it πŸ˜‰
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hi nandini dear its just too great πŸ‘πŸ‘post the next part soon me waiting 4 it but one request make ur font size little big plz πŸ˜‰great work dear

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nandini its mean she will read the story first and then coment on it πŸ˜‰hope u got it πŸ˜‰

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