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Part 11(B): Jai Singh Kills Shiv Dutt
Its the mehndi function of CK.RG, Padvika, JA's mother, Champa, Chapla, Siyali and other women are around CK. They were waiting for mehndi woman.
"The mehndiwaali has not come yet, said Champa.
"Sorry I was late, comes a female voice.
All looked up to see a beautiful woman who unaware to anyone was none other than V. He reminisces bribing the real mehndiwaali and telling TS to show him several mehndi designs.
"Who are you? asked RG.
"Maharani, my name is Chandini. I am the mehndiwaali sent for rajkumaari, replied the woman.
"Okay, take your seat beside Chandrakanta. We will be starting the menhndi now, said RG.
RG started the function by making small mehndi design on CK followed by Padvika, JA's mom, Champa, Chapla and Siyali. RG then signalled Chandini who has to make most of the designs to start. As V held CK's hand, she recognized the touch. She was about to move her hand from his hand in shock, he held her hand a little tightly to stop her leaving his hand.
"It took me efforts to come here. Please don't tell anyone who I am, whispers V.
"I won't tell but how will you draw mehndi? whispered CK.
"That you leave up to me, whispered V.
CK is worried on what he will design by mehndi and him getting caught. V reminisces TS showing him some Mehdi designs and getting him to practice some designs without anyone being aware of it. He starts to draw the design on her hands. CK was stunned to see him designing so well wondering how come he can design mehndi.
"What a beautiful design you have made, Chandini, smiled Chapla.
"Write yuvraj's initial in the mehndi, smiled Champa.
"Okay, said V.
V writes V's initial(in hindi) Va' somewhere in CK's mehndi as everyone including ChaVi smiled.
"Such a beautiful mehndi you have made, smiled RG.
"How you learnt it? whispered CK.
"Tej Singh taught me, whispered V.
"Its really beautiful but now go and change before anyone catches you, whispered CK.
"What you both are talking in whispers? asked Siyali doubtfully.
"Nothing, replied CK.
Scene shifts to Chunargarh. Marich, SD and PJ are getting ready with their army.
"Our spies told that today they are doing Chandrakanta's mehndi ceremony, said PJ.
"This mehndi ritual will turn into stream of blood, said SD.
"We need to prepare properly as the security is increased, said PJ.
"Let them increase their security how much they want but we will destroy them, said Marich.
Scene shifts to Vijaygarh. All the guests have left. CK sneaks V into her room. V changed into 1 of his clothes which were still in this room as they lived here together for several days.
"Thank God, we finally came here. Outside the room, many men were checking me out. It was so embarrassing. Some men even gave me flirty smiles, said V horrified.
"Who told you to become Chandini then? asked CK as she laughed.
"I made such an effort to attend your menhdi and you are laughing, sulked.
"Okay sorry, said CK as she smiled.
"Now I want reward for the mehndi, said V as he smiled naughtily.
"You will never change, said CK rolling her eyes.
"You said right. And why I will want to change? I am waiting for the reward, smiled V.
CK smiled and kissed his lips.
"Here you are, smiled CK, "Now leave from here before anyone sees you in this room with me.
"I can't even live together with my own wife, said V.
"It's a matter of only 1 day. From tomorrow, we will again live together, said CK.
I can't wait for it, said V.
"Me too, said CK, "First time in history, the groom himself applied the mehndi to his bride.
"In our case, its also a husband applying mehndi to his wife said V.
"Good that you did not get caught, said CK, "Now go.
"Okay I am going but we will meet soon, said V.
"Okay, said CK.
They smiled at each other before V left from the window.
Scene shifts to Marich and others riding on their way to Vijaygarh.
"There is a possibility that they will get their powers today, said PJ.
"Pitaji, you should have kidnapped that Chandrakanta too along with her mother, said SD.
"I did not knew that Ratnagarbha's daughter was Chandrika in her last birth and also that she too is the claimant of tilism otherwise I would have kidnapped her too, said Marich.
KB who was following them from the sky flew fast past everyone to reach Vijaygarh soon.
"Today no one will be able to stop Virendra and Chandrakanta's ruin, said SD.
"Be careful, maharaj as your powers will decrease on leaving Chunargarh, said PJ.
Scene shifts to CK changing into her grey dress after washing off her mehndi. She goes out of her room as its her turn to look around. As she walks outside in the corridor, V who too was looking around sees her and comes to her. Before they could talk, KB comes flying.
"Khuda Baksh, said V.
KB sits on V's hands and signals them to look into his eye. ChaVi looks into his eye and are shocked to see Marich, SD, PJ with khunkhaars riding to Vijaygarh to attack them.
"Enemies are coming here. We need to get ready, said V.
"How they know its my mehndi? Someone spied for them, said CK.
TS comes there and asked, "What happened?
V signalled KB to rewind everything to him. TS is shocked at what he saw.
"Go and inform senapati of Naugarh to reach with some parts of our army, said TS.
KB nodded and flew from there.
Scene shifts to V, CK, JA, JS and Surendra getting ready in their warrior attires separately. The aiyyars were dressed in their own clothes adding only shield and wrist guards to their clothes. After that, everyone went to the planning room to make strategy. The soldiers were placed everywhere around the palace. Even half of Naugarh soldiers sent by TS were guarding.
"We have to be careful as Marich will do surprise attack all of a sudden. He did that during yagna 100 years ago and also got attacked several kingdoms many times, said Param.
"Unfortunately, I was also part of 40 attacks by him, said V.
"He even did surprise attack in Vijaygarh mandir before kidnapping maa, said CK.
"We put some tracking metal on Marich's horse yesterday night to track him, said Siyali.
Siyali produces a tracking board via her magic(GPS thing shown in the show).
"See this is the map of the way from Chunargarh to Vijaygarh. The light which is showing is the location of Marich and others. They are not far now, said Siyali.
"We have to get ready now, said TS.
"I and Siyali will try to stop as much khunkhaars as possible using our powers, said Param.
Scene shifts to Marich and others reaching outside the Vijaygarh palace.
"There are so many soldiers guarding including Naugarh soldiers, said PJ.
"We have to enter the palace, said Marich.
"Attack, ordered Marich to the khunkhaars.
As 1 set of khunkhaars from front were about to release their bows from their arrows, they themselves were attacked by the arrows much to Marich and others' shock.
"They already got to know about our attack, said SD.
"Who's there? asked Marich loudly.
ChaVi, TS and Chapla emerged with 1 set of soldiers.
"So you all got to know about our attack. Lets see how long you will last, said Marich.
JS appeared in another direction with Devgiri, Champa and another set of soldiers. Surendra appeared in another direction with JeS, JA, Badri and lots of Naugarh soldiers. Param, Siyali along with a set of Vijaygarh and Naugarh soldiers appeared in another direction.
"Yakshraj and Yakshrani, you both also? asked Marich puzzled.
SiyaRam did not said anything but stared at him.
"No matter how much preparation you did you can't defeat us and khunkhaars, said Marich.
"Time will tell that, Marich, said V.
Marich signalled the khunkhaars to move towards the palace. ChaVi, TS, Chapla being the best archers among others started attacking the khunkhaars with bows and arrows along with a set of their soldiers. They managed to kill lots of khunkhaars with some of their own soldiers getting killed. Marich, SD, PJ and the khunkhaars managed to enter the palace. The khunkhaars started sword fighting with Vijaygarh and Naugarh soldiers. CK, Champa, Chapla, JS, Badri, Surendra and JA were also sword fighting with the khunkhaars. V was fighting with SD. TS and Devgiri were fighting with Marich. Param and Siyali were creating storms to injure some khunkhaars as well as hypnotizing some khunkhaars into getting them killed by their soldiers or by their own swords. JeS was fighting with PJ. Marich was getting tensed on seeing his khunkhaars getting killed. He threw TS and Devgiri who were bravely fighting with him in the air via his magic making them fall far away. He then looks at CK who was fighting with a couple of khunkhaars. She produced a spear via his magic and aimed it at CK's back recalling how he killed Chandrika. He threw the spear in her direction. V saw Marich throwing the spear and recalled how Marich did the same to Chandrika in the last birth. V started running in CK's direction pushing SD on the floor who tried to come in his way. Before he was about to shout to alert CK, she herself sensed something on her behind and turned around to see a spear coming in her direction. By now others too saw what was happening and got worried. She caught the spear as she recalled how Marich attacked her in the same way in the last birth. Marich, SD and PJ were shocked while V and others was relieved. CK looked at Marich with anger and threw the spear at him only but he stepped aside and PJ who was some distance away from Marich fighting with JeS got impaled by the spear as he was not able to move out of the way in time. Marich is shocked seeing PJ falling on the ground. V comes at CK's side.
"Pandit Jagannath, said Marich shockingly as he sat near PJ.
"Maharaj, now my time has come. I can't be of your help anymore, says PJ in pain and dies.
"Pandit Jagannath, shouted Marich unhappily.
He then got up and looked at CK who was standing with V.
"Chandrakanta, shouted Marich angrily and ran towards them.
V immediately came before CK who was visibly terrified. SD too came to them.
"I am still very powerful. If you don't want any destruction then come with me, said Marich.
"We won't let you fulfill your intention, said V.
"We will see, said Marich and threw ChaVi in air via his magic and making them fall down.
ChaVi held each other's hands as they sit up and look at Marich and SD.
"What you both thought that you will happily plan to marry and we will sit quiet? asked SD.
ChaVi got up but Marich made them fall again via his magic. They held their hands as they were lying on the ground. They looked at each other and recalled their last moments with each other holding their hands before breathing their last. They then looked at Marich and SD.
"No, we will not let history repeat this time, said V as they again looked at each other.
"Yes, we can't let Marich and Shiv Dutt win, said CK.
They got still holding hands. Marich again did magic to make them fall but this time they ducked saving themselves from it. V then jumped before Marich with his sword.
"Looks like you want to die so soon, said Marich and moved his sword at him.
V blocked the sword. They got into sword fight both trying to have an upper hand on each other. CK and SD were standing where they were. As V was having an upper hand over Marich, SD threw mud over his eyes temporarily blinding him. Marich took this opportunity and kicked V on the ground. CK got angry and charged towards SD. She punched him on his face angering him.
"How dare you? asked SD angrily grabbing her hairs tightly.
She removed his hand and pushed him.
"That was for putting mud in Virendra's eyes, replied CK with equal anger.
The mud effect on V's eyes gone and he could see again properly. Before he could get up, Marich kicked him again. He then puts his one foot on his chest and presses it.
"The dog I looked for so many years is barking at me and biting me, said Marich.
V tried to remove his foot but Marich too being strong kept pressing harder.
"Virendra, shouted CK in worry and was about to run to him but SD held her back.
"Not able to see your husband like this? asked SD with a taunt.
She was struggling to free herself but SD being stronger and herself tired from so much fighting even being inexperienced she could not come out of his hold.
"Virendra, get up, shouted CK.
V looked at her who was struggling to get out of SD's hold. V felt angry and pulled Marich's leg making him fall down before getting up. Marich too got up. They got into wrestling fight. V punched Marich. Marich punched him back. V was about to kick Marich but he used his magic and made him slip causing him fall on the ground. V got up but Marich made him fall again with his magic. Marich moved closer to him and stomped on his chest.
"Virendra, shouted CK still struggling to free herself.
Since others were busy fighting with the khunkhaars they were not aware of all this happening.
"No use of shouting. Pitaji will not spare him, said SD.
"Shiv Dutt, leave me, said CK.
Marich stomped on V's chest again.
"Virendra, shouted CK, "Marich, leave my husband.
SD laughed as he said, "Today you both will die again like you died in your last birth.
"No, it won't happen, said CK and freed herself from his hold after gaining some lost energy.
SD was about to hold her again but she pushed him on the floor. She ran to V. Marich was about to stomp on V's chest again but CK reached there and pushed him on the ground.
"Virendra, please get up, CK said as she helped him to get up.
V noticed some red marks on her arms due to SD holding and got angry.
"You, said Marich angrily to CK.
He got up and tried to make her fall via his magic but V saved her by pulling her with him out of the way. Marich came to them. SD too came to them and held CK's hand to take her away from there but V held her other hand to stop him. He punched SD on his face causing him to leave her hand. CK removed her sword and kept it at SD's neck.
"This was for hurting Chandrakanta, said V angrily.
SD fumed and was about to punch V but CK pressed the sword on his neck.
"Don't you dare to move, warned CK making him fume more.
V and Marich got into sword fight. Very soon, V was having upper hand on Marich. While CK was busy looking at the fight, SD pushed the sword off her hand. He was about to go to help Marich but CK picked up her sword and came in his way.
"I will not let you go and help Marich, said CK.
SD removed his sword and said, "For this you have to fight with me.
CK got tensed and looked around.
"No need to look for anyone. Before anyone gets to know what's happening they will only see your dead body, said SD with a smile which got her more tensed.
He moved past her but she came in his way again.
"Looks like before Virendra, you are only going to die, taunted SD.
CK did not said anything but just stood there. V was still having upper hand on Marich. Marich tried to do magic but V jumped at him and then kicked him on the ground. SD moved his sword at CK but she blocked it with his sword. SD moved his sword at her again but this time she hit his neck with the side of her palm and then hit his gut with her knee. SD fell on the ground shocked with her moves. CK attacked him while he was lying down but he blocked her sword. He pushed her sword hard with his sword making her fall down. He then attacked her with his sword but she blocked it. He pressed his sword on her sword and she was finding it hard to stop his sword from reaching her. She was getting scared that she may fail in stopping SD at any time. As SD kept putting more pressure with his sword on her sword, a third sword came in between and removed his sword from her sword. SD looked at the person stopping him looked up and was shocked and angry on seeing JS. CK was relieved to see him and got up. JS had seen V and Marich fighting and also CK having tough time in fighting with SD.
"Jai Singh, said SD.
"How dare you hurt my daughter again? asked JS angrily.
"As if your daughter is so innocent and did not do anything, replied SD with sarcasm.
"Its you who started it. I will not leave you now, said JS.
"Good that both father and daughter will die together with my hands, laughed SD.
But JS did not got tensed or scared a bit. He recalled the time when SD started his insults on CK by sending her marriage proposal and how she will not be his rani but his daasi after marriage along with sending those humiliating gifts for her.
"I did a very mistake by accepting your proposal for my daughter and telling her to meet you in Yaksh Mahal. And today, I will rectify my mistake, said JS.
SD laughed and said, "Why you want to die so soon?
CK recalls her horrible dream where SD enters Vijaygarh palace and kills her father. She gets scared for some moments but then comes and stands next to her father.
"Not pitaji but you will have to die, Shiv Dutt, replied CK.
SD attacked CK with the sword but JS blocked his sword. JS and SD got into sword fight. JS being experienced from years was giving a tough fight to SD.
V saw JS and SD fighting. He got worried for JS and CK. He wanted to go to help them but Marich was not letting him go due to the tough fight he was giving him.
JS and SD continued to fight while CK looked on. JS kicked SD to the ground. JS recalled SD dragging CK with him after poisoning V and how CK nearly killed herself had V not stopped her.
"You hurt Chandrakanta so much. I will kill you today for it, said JS.
As JS raised his sword to kill him, SD threw mud in his eyes temporarily blinding him.
SD laughed as got up and said, "Now lets see who will kill whom.
Taking the advantage of his cheating, SD raised his sword to slash his neck but CK jumped before him and blocked his sword with his sword. They got into sword fight with SD having upper hand on her. CK was somehow managing to defend herself while trying to attack him some times. When JS recovered, he joined the fight and they double teamed him. SD was still giving them tough fight. When they were having upper hand on him with their continuous attacks, he pushed CK on the ground. He was about to kill her but JS blocked his sword with his sword before pressing the sword hard causing him to fall on the ground.CK got up and stomped on SD's chest half a dozen times recalling how he humiliated and tortured her in Naugarh in the darbar and the prison cell. SD tried to throw mud in her eyes but she kicked his hand stopping him from doing so. When he managed to get up, JS came to them and started sword fighting with him again. At one point, SD was having upper hand on him but after some time JS managed to have upper hand on him. JS recalled how SD humiliated and tortured her in Naugarh and kick him on the ground in anger so hard that the sword fell from SD's hand.
"You made my daughter cry a lot. Today, I will punish you for it, said JS in anger.
SD tried to take his sword from the ground but JS kicked his sword few meters away from him. SD tried to get up but was kicked again on the ground by JS.
"You have caused a lot of troubles to Chandrakanta, Virendra and others. So I punish you for all your misdeeds, said JS and everyone's attention went to them.
Marich got worried for his son and was about to go and help him but V did not let him go.
"Shiv Dutt, I hate you very much. You deserve to die, said CK with hatred.
JS raised his sword and stabbed SD in his gut making him scream. He stabbed him again.
"Shiv Dutt, shouted Marich seeing his son stabbed by JS.
CK came closer to SD and smirked at him.
"Chandrakanta, said SD in pain.
"Good bye, Shiv Dutt. Go to your wife Shyamala who may be bored alone in hell. Even Shyamala will not accept you as you only used and cheated her always, said CK with a smirk.
SD looked at CK with anger. Marich managed to come near him. V too came there.
"Putra, said Marich sadly.
"Pitaji, said SD.
He then saw V.
"You deserve this for hurting Chandrakanta and others, said V with hatred.
SD looked at him with anger.
"Pitaji, don't let them win, said SD in pain and breathed his last.
"Shiv Dutt, shouted Marich.
He then looked at JS with anger. He was about to charge at him but V came in his way. V signalled JS to take CK away from here. JS held CK's hand.
"Pitaji, I will stay here. I won't leave Virendra alone, said CK.
"Virendra will be alright, Chandrakanta. Trust him, said JS.
CK looked at V who assured her with his eyes that he will be fine. JS took her away from there. V again turned to face Marich. Param and Siyali got ready to help him anytime he needs.
Next Part- Part 12: Most Probably Final Part
Precap: #Marich uses all his powers to hurt V. CK is worried. She wants to go to him but TS and Devgiri along with JS does not let her. TS and Devgiri goes to help V.
#SiyaRam are doing some magic to take away Marich's powers that he got from those 2 pages.
A/N: The person dying by CK thowing the spear is Pandit Jagannath. Yes, its Jai Singh who killed Shiv Dutt instead of Virendra. I thought of showing a father killing the man who hurt his daughter a lot making her going through hell instead of Virendra. But Virendra too got to beat Shiv Dutt a lot earlier. And the main villain will be killed by Virendra only.
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