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Read all remaining parts in one go.
Awesome it is. I want more of V in the story(hope u don't mind). He hasn't done anything except the last part.
I liked the bonding V n Padvika share. They both feel some connection.

TS bhi sudhar gya hai. Now he is on right side.

Everything was going smooth until u gave the hear attack with this V doing takhta palat twist.
Vaise what is with NG, jisko dekho takhta palat kar rha hai. Earlier Sd, then CK n now Virendra

What is this twist!!! V turning black. Plz don't make her black.
Or it is his plan to reach the other culprits along with SD. I hope this would be the case. Coz I can't see him as pushing or abusing CK like SD did.

With precap I have little hopes that V is only pretending.
Waiting for the next update
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Part 6(B). Escape From Prison

V gets the reply written by JA. He reads to others:

Virendra,

I can't believe you could hurt a woman so much. Well, what can be expected from a khunkhaar. You told us to dance which I and Tej Singh are ready to do but Chandrakanta will not dance. You can't tell a woman to dance to entertain others.

-Rajkumar Jai Aditya

V crumbles the paper angrily while saying, "How dare you, Jai Aditya?

"What happened, maharaj? asked Jagdeep.

"I will come soon, replied V and left from there.

V barges inside the trio's prison cell.

"Jai Adtiya, I got your reply. I see that you and Tej Singh are worried for your friend, said V.

"Virendra, don't do this to her, said JA.

"You don't tell me what to do, said V rudely.

"Chandrakanta will not dance, said JA adamantly.

"Youuu, said V angrily and raised his hand to slap him but CK caught his hand midway.

"You can't trouble anyone like this, said CK in a firm tone.

"You are no longer the ruler but just a prisoner here. So don't mess with me and be in your limits, said V and pushed her on the bed kept in the cell making her land on her stomach.

JA and TS went near her and sat by the side of the bed.

"Virendra, shouted TS.

"You 3 better be ready for your dance, said V with a smile and left after locking the cell.

CK starts crying while still lying on her stomach.

"Rajkumari, don't cry. We will leave soon from her, whispered TS.

"I hate him, shouted CK still in tears.

"Chandrakanta, we have to be strong, whispered JA.

3 of the 5 guards felt bad for the trio while the other 2 were happy seeing their state.

Scene shifts to V bringing an elderly man with him to others. He had a big beard.

"Who is he? asked Balraj.

"He is my uncle, Narendra Singh, replied V.

"I am proud of you, my son for winning a kingdom like Naugarh, said Narendra.

"Chachaji, the credit goes to that stupid Chandrakanta too, said V as he laughed.

Narendra too laughed with him.

Scene shifts to the prison. TS blows something on the guards via his magic. He then attracts the key using some magnetic kind of power before unlocking the prison cell.

"Lets get out from here, said TS.

The trio comes out. They take the swords from the unconscious guards and move ahead.

Scene shifts to a big room where many soldiers and some ministers are there.

"We have to do something to free them, said soldier 1.

"Yes, we should fight against Virendra. He can't win like this, said minister 1.

"We should see if there are more people loyal to maharaj Surendra Singh, said soldier 2.

"I am feeling for the ones he imprisoned especially rajkumari whom he betrayed, said minister 2.

The trio now had planned to free Surendra. While they were walking, some 8-10 soldiers who saw them came in their way. The trio injured them and moved ahead. One of them went and informed V and others who were furious. A guy of Kunal's age group had come.

"Sorry, I am late, said the guy.

"Who is he? asked V.

"He is our aiyyar Amber, replied Kunal.

"Okay, said V.

"Now we have to catch those 3, said Divakar.

"Yes, lets find them, said Kunal.

"We 3 and Jagdeep will go while others remain here, said V.

"I will also come as I am an aiyyar, said Amber.

"Okay, you also come, said V, "Divakar and Jagdeep will go in one direction, Kunal will go in other direction with few soldiers and Amber will go with me.

Everyone agreed with him.

The trio is walking carefully while hiding from the soldiers. As they are walking, Divakar and Jagdeep comes in their way. Some 10-12 soldiers who were against them also saw them.

"Looks like you 3 are in some hurry, said Jagdeep with a smile shocking them.

The trio started fighting with the soldiers. When the soldiers were knocked down injured, JA started fighting with Divakar and TS started fighting with Jagdeep.

"Rajkumari, you go from here to do that thing, said TS.

CK understood that he talked about freeing Surendra and leaves from there.

"Take care, said JA, "We will reach you soon.

"Okay, said CK and leaves from there.

As CK was trying to find a way to reach Surendra, she sees V around with a man whose face she could not see. She is shocked when she sees the face of the man.

"Amber, thinks CK shockingly.

She hides behind the pillar as the duo come in the same corridor.

"They will be here only somewhere. We have to catch them soon, said V.

As they came near the pillar, she went from there and hid under a nearby table.

"I heard some payal sound, said Amber.

"Must be of some daasi, said V.

"But why any daasi will walk out like this at this moment? I think its Chandrakanta. She is around here only. Let's look for her, said Amber shocking CK.

"We can't let her go otherwise she will inform Vijaygarh about us, said V.

CK moves behind another pillar as they moved near the table she is hiding under. She stealthily got out from under the table and moved behind another pillar and ran from there.

JA and TS are still fighting with Divakar, Jagdeep and some more soldiers who were coming to help Divakar and Jagdeep while CK was going in the direction of the way of the nazarbandh room where Surendra was held. As she entered that corridor, she was met by 2 soldiers. As they blocked her way, she injured them making them fall down and moved ahead.

Scene shifts to V and Amber still at that place.

"We both should go separately to find her, said V and Amber agreed.

As they went in a corridor, they saw some 15-20 soldiers there. V took out his sword from his back(V's style) and whispered something to Amber. He nodded and took out his own sword. They started injuring them making them fall on the ground. Those soldiers were too shocked to react on why V attacked them. V then looked at 6 soldiers who came there.

"They are from Surendraji's side. Put them in prison, ordered V to which they nodded.

"Now, we will go separately, said V.

"Where do you think she will be gone? asked Amber.

"I think I know it, replied V with a smile.

Scene shifts to CK meeting 4 soldiers who blocked her way. She injured them also before moving ahead. As he walked some steps, she heard her name from a familiar voice.

"Chandrakanta, she heard her name.

She turned around and saw Amber.

"I have found you now. Lets see how you escape now, smiled Amber.

"You cheater, shouted CK and attacked him with her sword and he blocked it with his sword.

He did aiyyari to make her fall but nothing happened to her.

"Looks like you forgot that I am immune to any kind of magic and aiyyari, smiled CK.

Amber remembered it shockingly. He moved it sword at her. She blocked his attack by doing cartwheel backward. He ran to her and attacked her with his sword but she blocked it. They got into a sword fight which ran for 5 minutes after which CK disarmed by kicking his hand. She then kicked him on the ground before knocking his head with a vase. She was dragging him with her to hide him when she comes face to face with V. She is shocked on seeing him.

"Were you going to rescue Surendra Singhji or to hide him? Or both? asked V.

CK pushed Amber into him making him fall down before running from there.

"I will not leave her once I get her, said V furiously as he got up.

CK reached the lower floor while running. V was searching her around but could not find her. Amber was not with him. He then saw her running on the lower floor.

"Run how much you want to run, said V with a smile.

As CK was still running, V ran a little forward and then jumped on the below floor landing in front of CK who was shocked on seeing him jumping before her and smiling at her.

"Your khunkhaar standard has lowered down to just chasing a woman, ridiculed CK.

V got shocked and taking the opportunity she tried to disarm him seeing his hand loosened on his sword but V caught her hand in a quick motion and turned her around making her back face him causing her sword to fall down. He kept his sword back behind his back and wrapped his one hand around her body while taking out a needle from his pocket with his other hand.

"I have stayed with you so long that I am aware of your tricks very well, said V.

She started to struggle in vain. He tightened his hold around her body. V pricked the needle at the side of her neck. She started feeling dizzy and he caught in his arms from falling. As she became unconscious, he smirked and hung her over his one shoulder. While he was taking her with him, 8-10 soldiers surrounded him. V got surprised on seeing them.

"Leave rajkumari, said soldier 1.

"We won't let you take her, said soldier 2.

"Save your rajkumari if you can, said V and took out his sword.

He started fighting with the soldiers while still carrying CK on his shoulder.

Scene shifts to Divakar and Jagdeep who ran from JA and TS while they were still fighting with some more soldiers. When the duo were done knocking them on the floor and injuring them, they started looking for CK but were not able to find her.

"Where is rajkumari gone? asked TS.

"I hope we find her soon, replied JA.

Scene shifts to a big room where there were 3 ministers, Madhav Singh, Kunal, Amber, Narendra and 7-8 soldiers. They were sitting on couches. It was different room from they were earlier talking. At a corner, CK was still unconscious and tied to a pillar with V standing beside her. He picked up a jug from the table before everyone and sprinkled some water at her face. CK opened her eyes and is shocked to find herself in a room and tied to a pillar. She looked ahead to see V smiling at her. She then saw everyone in the room. She saw 3 ministers, a bearded elderly man and some soldiers. She was then shocked to see Madhav Singh and Kunal too in the room. She realized that they helped SD in doing Surendra's taktha palat.

"Virendra, why you have tied me here? asked CK, "Let me go from here.

"I don't want you to be a problem in my plans and I don't want you to try to run again so I had tied you here. You made me run a lot. Your 2 bodyguards Jai Aditya and Tej Singh will come here searching for you then I will capture them also, replied V with a smile.

"I will not spare you father-son, screamed CK at Madhav and Kunal.

"1st you need to be free to do that, taunted Madhav.

"I never thought I will have to fight with a beautiful and cute girl like you, said V with a smile and pulled her cheeks in a mocking way which irked her and she started to struggle to free herself.

"No use of struggling, said V and went back to his seat.

Scene shifts to that room where the soldiers and ministers were talking about fighting against V and the traitors. JA and TS reaches there on knowing from a soldier about their discussion.

"We are not able to find rajkumari, said TS.

A soldier comes in.

"I heard that Virendra has captured rajkumar, said the soldier worriedly.

JA, TS and others are shocked hearing that.

"What? asked JA shockingly, "Don't know what he will do with Chandrakanta.

2 soldiers come in with Surendra.

"We have freed maharaj and imprisoned the soldiers guarding him, said soldier 1.

"Very good, said JA.

JA and TS had told them to do that.

"Don't let this news reach Virendra otherwise he can trouble rajkumari, said TS.

Others nodded. A soldier who was a spy among them left the room.

"What happened to Chandrakanta? asked Surendra.

"Virendra has captured her, replied JA.

"Oh no! We have to free her soon, said Surendra worriedly.

Scene shifts to V and others discussing their plans.

"We will 1st capture Jai Aditya and Tej Singh and then attack Vijaygarh, said Balraj.

"Good idea, said Narendra.

The soldier who was spying on good people came in.

"Maharaj, many soldiers and ministers are planning against you along with rajkumar Jai Aditya and Tej Singh. Some soliders have freed old maharaj Surendra Singh, said the soldier.

V and others were shocked while CK smiled.

"You leave now, said V.

"Maharaj has been freed even after you appointed guards to watch over him, said CK with a smile, "You all are not going to win in any of your dirty plans.

Kunal gets up from his seat and walks up to her.

"You bitch! You killed bua and my cousin, shouted Kunal as he slapped her hard across her face, "Very soon, you will die. After that, your family will also die.

He started pulling her hairs hard making her wince while saying, "Now I will get my revenge for every time you insult and ridiculed me from childhood and for killing bua and Mayuk.

V walks up to them and removes Kunal's hands off her hairs. CK was looking hurt from what all Kunal did. After removing Kunal's hands, V looks at CK with anger.

"Let her have some happiness because very soon all her happiness will be gone, said V coldly.

Kunal smiles evilly and goes to his seat.

"Those soldiers have freed Surendra Singhji but Chandrakanta is with us. Jai Aditya and Tej Singh did a mistake in telling the soldiers to free Surendra Singhji so Chandrakanta will be punished for their mistake. Whenever they both or anyone else will do any mistake there she will be punished here for that, said V and untied CK from the pillar.

She tried to run but he caught her hand.

"Amber, you go and see who all are against us. Someone has to be there, said V.

"Yes maharaj, said Amber and left the room.

"As for Chandrakanta, her punishment is that she is going to dance in front of us, said V.

"Virendra, shouted CK.

"You are shouting as if I told you to dance on in a darbar filled with many people or told you to dance on the streets. Its only few of us. You go to the next room and get dressed for it, said V.

"I will not dance. Do whatever you want, said CK showing a finger at his face.

V puts her finger down with his finger and said in a threatening tone, "You are not in a position to disobey my order. If you did not do as I say then your 2 bodyguards sorry 3 bodyguards Jai Aditya, Tej Singh and Surendra Singhji will pay price for that. You have seen me yourself in Jwaar Ghaati that how dangerous I am so you better don't disobey my order.

"Okay, I will do as you say, said CK staring at him.

"You got scared, teased V.

"Yes, I am scared. Scared of what will happen with you for making a woman dance, said CK.

V simply laughed.

"You will get dressed in the next room and come here. There is a dancer in that room with whom you will dance so you will have company. Now go and be ready, said V.

CK turned to leave helplessly.

"Wait, I will come with you so that you don't run again, said V.

Scene shifts to Surendra, JA and TS looking tensed. That soldier came in.

"Where were you? asked Surendra.

"I went to look for rajkumari, lied the soldier.

"Have you come to know where Virendra took her? asked Surendra.

"No, replied the soldier.

"I have doubt on this man, whispers Surendra to JA and TS who nods.

Scene shifts to V taking CK to the next room. The dancer V told about was standing with her back faced to them. As she turned, CK smiled to find that she was Chapla. Chapla returned the smile back to her. V signalled Chapla and other dancers and daasis to leave the room.

As they left, V smiled at CK. CK then smiled back to him as they laughed together.

"I can't believe we have reached this far according to our plans which mostly are your plans. If we go on like this then we will succeed very soon, Virendra, smiled CK.

"None of our enemies can imagine that our being enemies is our plan, Chandrakanta, smiled V.

"You got angry at me for signaling not to do anything to Kunal for hurting me, said CK

V recalled how he was about to beat Kunal for hurting her but she signalled him with her eyes to stop causing him to look at her with anger for stopping to do anything with him.

"Yaksh Mahal me tumne tilism ki chhaabhi paane ke liye Shiv Dutt ke kitne zulm aur beizzati saha par aaj Kunal ne mujhe takleef di to tumse uss waqt bardaasht kyu nahi hua? asked CK.

"Kyunki tab baat sirf meri thi, Chandrakanta. Maine khud pe huve takleef seh liya par tumhe koi takleef de aur main chup-chaap dekhta rahu vo aasaan nahi hai, replied V.

"Bas thodi der aur. Uske baad tum Kunal ke saath jo chaahe vo karo, said CK.

"Tum chaaho to nahi naach sakti ho, said V.

"Sirf naachna hi to hai. Naach to ek kala. Aur ye naach to humaare yojna(plan) ka ek hissa hai. Vaise unn logon ki itni aukaat nahi hai ki vo mera naach dekhe par unhe dekhna to padega hi, said CK with a smile, "Tum pichhli baar mera naach nahi dekh paaye to aaj dekh sakte ho.

V smiled at what she said.

"Ab tumhe jaana hoga. Mujhe taiyaar hona hai, said CK.

"Mujhe mera inaam do, smiled V.

"Kuch inaam nahi milega tumhe. Tum jao yaha se, smiled CK.

V left the room disappointingly while CK smiled as he left.

Next- Part 7(A). Tu Cheez Badi Hai Mast Mast

Precap: #CK and Chapla starts to dance on the below song with the below steps. No one recognized Chapla as they have not seen her earlier even Madhav and Kunal.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppOUWr-Zp-U[/YOUTUBE]

"Ye kaisa naach hai? asked Divakar shockingly.

"Tune aisa naach pehle nahi dekha to meri galti hai, gavaar kahi ka, replied CK while dancing.

Divakar is shocked while V controls his laugh. In the middle of the dance, Chapla gives a look to CK causing her to wink at her. Chapla served alcohol to everyone including V while CK stealthily put a pill in V's drink to stop the effect of alcohol in making him drunk.

Blue- CK

Purple- Chapla

#Tej lifts that spy soldier in the air by his neck threatening him tell whether he is with V scaring him like hell while Surendra and JA stares at him angrily.

A/N: So, V was not at all a villain. It was all a plan. People reading the story should have figured it out as none of them had talked anything to themselves in their mind and everything they talked was with their mouth. All V did to CK was say some villainous dialogues and pushing her only for Tej Singh to catch her or push her on the bed only.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 6 years ago
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#63
Awesome update
Love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon
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Juhi
Wonderful update

The twists n turns are like edge of the seat thriller. I kinda figured it out Virendra as genuine when he pushed Ck in prison cell on the bed. But then again I wanna be sure.

They did so much hard work on the plan. Takhta palat, prisoning the trio, then eascaping and now dance.
Now the plan is almost worked. Hope they will nab all the traitors in NG n nee enteries ftom Rampur.

Pichli baar naach nahi drkh paye the line gave me the vibes of AT where we used this kinda dialogue.
And V needs Inaam here too πŸ˜† . Hope he got one, that he is actually craving for πŸ˜‰

You provided the dance video too. Thanks for that

Now waiting for the next part
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Brilliant Juhi. Mind blowing.

aty hi JA nay V ki ego hurt kat di. not fair JA.πŸ˜†

or V ka dance k liye inta ghussa . anger is not Good for Health V.

or ye Chaines Tltliyan ( Chinese Butterfly ) kahan sy Chapla or CK lgti hain.πŸ˜†

V ko yahan bhi inaam ki pari hai . πŸ˜†

new additional like dance video and pice are superb idea. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ

Thanks for PM.

continue please.😊
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oh god after reading this chapter I got relieved it was like jaan pe jaan aai
so it was chavi plan to know abt their enemies πŸ‘
such a brilliant plan no one could guess chavi plan πŸ‘
hope tej jai aditya & maharaj surendra know abt chavi plan
just like viru even I wanted to kill that asshole kunal for hurting chandrakanta 😑
but chandrakanta stopped virendra as it would have spoiled their plan 😊
now no one will can save those monsters from chavi πŸ‘
glad chapla came to help chavi πŸ€—
continue plz
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Beautifully written
Continue soon
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Thank u😊
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Juhi
Wonderful update

Thank u😊

The twists n turns are like edge of the seat thriller. I kinda figured it out Virendra as genuine when he pushed Ck in prison cell on the bed. But then again I wanna be sure.
In regular shows even in normal scenes the heroes grabs heroines arms and twist her hand but here all V did was push CK only for either anyone catch her or push on the bed.

They did so much hard work on the plan. Takhta palat, prisoning the trio, then eascaping and now dance.
Now the plan is almost worked. Hope they will nab all the traitors in NG n nee enteries ftom Rampur.
They are royals so they have to think properly to find their enemies. V vs CK enmity was to trap and fool the enemies so that they will be caught because V and CK were BFFs.

Pichli baar naach nahi drkh paye the line gave me the vibes of AT where we used this kinda dialogue.
The dance thing was planned and V had not forced her for it. The dance is a part of the plan like we saw heroines doing in movies to fool the villains.

And V needs Inaam here too πŸ˜† . Hope he got one, that he is actually craving for πŸ˜‰
He will get his inaam for sureπŸ˜†

You provided the dance video too. Thanks for that
And even the song alsoπŸ˜†

Now waiting for the next part

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Brilliant Juhi. Mind blowing.
Thank u😊

aty hi JA nay V ki ego hurt kat di. not fair JA.πŸ˜†
It was more of a bhai-behen vs villain sceneπŸ˜†

or V ka dance k liye inta ghussa . anger is not Good for Health V.
That gussa was also planned because there was no force for CK to danceπŸ˜†

or ye Chaines Tltliyan ( Chinese Butterfly ) kahan sy Chapla or CK lgti hain.πŸ˜†
Aur koi dresses nahi dikha mujhe net pe. Baaki sab dresses bahot hi fate hue the jagah jagah pe. V will surely laugh seeing their chatak-matak dressesπŸ˜†.

V ko yahan bhi inaam ki pari hai . πŸ˜†
He will get his inaam for sureπŸ˜†

new additional like dance video and pice are superb idea. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ
And even the song alsoπŸ˜†

Thanks for PM.
WelcomeπŸ˜ƒ

continue please.😊

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oh god after reading this chapter I got relieved it was like jaan pe jaan aai
so it was chavi plan to know abt their enemies πŸ‘
such a brilliant plan no one could guess chavi plan πŸ‘
The plan is so well made that no enemies could guess it. They are acting everywhere in the palace to catch hidden enemies without V torturing CKπŸ˜ƒ.

hope tej jai aditya & maharaj surendra know abt chavi plan
They are also in the plan along with V and CK.

just like viru even I wanted to kill that asshole kunal for hurting chandrakanta 😑
but chandrakanta stopped virendra as it would have spoiled their plan 😊
Kunal was surely removing some old enmity from CK being her cousin step-brother😑. Kunal has no idea that with whose love he has messed upπŸ˜†.

now no one will can save those monsters from chavi πŸ‘
They have no idea they are being trapped so badlyπŸ˜‰

glad chapla came to help chavi πŸ€—
Now there are 2 women in the planπŸ€—

continue plz

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