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Part 6(A). What Happened To Virendra???

V and CK were sitting on the bed.

"I never thought you will tell your feelings to me in Shiv Dutt's previous room, said CK.

"But now its your room which you gave to me, said V.

"Its your room only, thinks CK in mind.

Scene shifts to Surendra sitting next to lying Padvika.

"This palace seems so peaceful like it was earlier before Shiv Dutt became the king since Chandrakanta and her friend Virendra came here. Chandrakanta could have easily misused her position but she had not done that apart from giving back to the ones messing with her. Jai Singh had such a nice daughter while we had such a cruel son, said Surendra.

"Shiv Dutt is not our son, said Padvika.

"Now I am getting more worried. Why you always say like this? asked Surendra.

"Because a man had exchanged our son with another baby because of which I came into this state. I feel something whenever Virendra is around me, replied Padvika with great difficulty.

"What are you saying? asked Surendra shockingly.

"Its true, Shiv Dutt is not our son. I want my son back, replied Padvika.

"If our son is alive then I will try to find him, said Surendra.

Scene shifts back to V and CK. Its been 2 hours since they were talking with each other. V looks at the fainting mehndi on her hands while holding out her palms.

"I am not finding Shiv Dutt's initial, said V.

"You won't find it because its not there, said CK.

"Why? asked V.

"Because I did not let the mehndiwaali to write his initial saying that it would ruin the design of my mehndi. When Kamini tried to force me to write his initial in my hand I shouted at her saying that I will get my mehndi done as I want as its my wedding not hers. She tried to complain pitaji but he instead scolded her only telling her not to trouble me, replied CK.

"Wow! That's nice. Was that mehndi spiked too like haldi? asked V.

"No but still I did not put mehndi sent by Shiv Dutt. I exchanged it like haldi, replied CK.

"Good otherwise you still would have Shiv Dutt's mehndi on your hands, said V.

"Yes, said CK.

CK got up from the bed.

"I am going to sleep now, said CK but V held her hand.

"Wait for some more time na, said V.

"Okay, said CK.

They talked with each other for a long time.

Next morning, CK came in Surendra and Padvika's room. JA and TS were also there. Padvika was sent to JA's parents place in Jamania as she wanted to stay there for some days.

"I will leave for Vijaygarh today and will give up my ruler position too but I can't release Shiv Dutt otherwise he will trouble us again. I can't forget what all he did, said CK.

"You don't need to release Shiv Dutt but it would have been better if you stayed here for few more days. I want to tell you one thing that Shiv Dutt is not my son, said Surendra.

"What are you saying? asked CK shocked that how he knows this.

"Maharani managed to tell me yesterday that she saw a man exchanged our son with another baby so she went in this state. But even if Shiv Dutt was our own son I would not want you to release him. What he did with you and your family could not be forgiven, replied Surendra.

JA and TS were shocked but relieved that SD is not his and Padvika's son.

"Aapne khud ke sautele maa aur bhai ko maarke acchha kiya, said JA.

"Vo dono mujhe seedi(ladder) ki tarah istemaal karke Vijaygarh pe raj karna chaahte the. Seedi ka kaam hota hai logon ko upar pahuchaana par vahi seedi agar fisal jaaye to log neeche gir jaate hai. To maine unn dono seedi bankar neeche gira diya, said CK.

"Aapne sahi kaha, said JA.

"You don't need to give your ruler position because you earned it, said Surendra.

"I can't because I did that for a reason which will be complete today, said CK.

"What? asked Surendra.

"I will tell later before leaving. For now, we have to go to darbar, replied CK.

"Okay, said Surendra.

As the 4 of them came to the darbar, they were shocked to see V sitting on the king's throne and all are calling him maharambuy he was in his black khunkhaar clothes only. V smiled at 4 of them.

"I was waiting for you 4 only, smiled V.

"Why all are calling you maharaj? asked JA shockingly.

"Because I am the new ruler of Naugarh, replied V.

"How is this possible? asked TS.

"Because I did coup(taktha palat) of previous Maharaj Surendra Singh and rajkumari Chandrakanta too. Now only I am the king and ruler here, replied V with a smile.

"Virendra, stop this joke, said CK with a smile.

"I am not joking, Chandrakanta. I have done the act of being your friend to get this throne. I was just using you all these time, said V in a serious tone making her smile fade.

CK as well as others were shocked.

"Then what you said last night to me was also an act? asked CK sadly.

"Yes, replied V in a rude tone as he got down the throne and came before her, "You were just a ladder for me to 1st get tilism key and now this throne. Now I don't need you.

"You forgot Virendra that if a ladder can make you climb higher then it can make you fall too if it slips. Do you really think you can get away after what you did? asked CK.

"Its because of you saying interesting things like this I could tolerate you for this long otherwise I would have gotten bored of you much earlier, said V amusingly.

"Virendra, said CK angrily and raised her hand to slap him.

He caught her hand her mid-air and said, "Do you really think you can slap me every time? Don't you dare to do this again or else you are going to see what a khunkhaar really is. I have not forgotten the slap you gave me in Vijaygarh prison(In this story, CK slapped V only once instead of 4 times). Today, I am going to make you pay for that also.

She was about to pull her hand but he tightened his hold.

"Your place is not in darbar and your room but in the prison. After Naugarh, now I will take over Vijaygarh and you won't be able to do anything. I have to imprison you so that you don't spoil my plan of taking over Vijaynagar. Come with me now, said V firmly and started walking with her.

CK was too shocked to react at his betrayal.

"Leave her. You are not doing right, said TS.

"Since I am the new ruler now, you will listen to me. You only take her to the prison now, said V.

TS looked at CK who was looking sad and still not reacting.

"No, said TS, "I once made a mistake by working with a wrong king but not now.

CK, JA and Surendra smiled V looked at him with anger with what he said.

"You will disobey your king? asked V angrily.

"I can't obey a king who is doing wrong, replied TS calmly.

"Virendra, I thought you as a nice man but you turned out to be like Shiv Dutt, said CK.

"Because I am Shiv Dutt's friend. Shiv Dutt became friends with me after coming to know that I am a khunkhaar. First I will imprison you and then free Shiv Dutt. After all, we khunkhaars and Shiv Dutt both are bad people who can kill others. I am not killing you only because I want you to see me taking over Vijaygarh and freeing Shiv Dutt helplessly, said V in a wicked tone.

"Virendra, don't do this to her, said Surendra.

"You are taking this girl's side who had imprisoned your son, taunts V.

"Because what she did was right and it was my son's fault, said Surendra.

He started dragging her again. Surendra, TS and JA came in the way.

"Leave rajkumari, said TS.

"You can't imprison rajkumari, said JA.

"Soldiers, these 2 are feeling bad for their rajkumari. Arrest them, ordered V.

Some soldiers came to arrest them but they started fighting with them with their swords. Seeing them fighting, CK took out her sword and freed her hand from V's hold.

"Let me see how long you will last before me, laughed V and took out his sword.

JA and TS were still fighting with soldiers. Surendra too was helping them. CK began fighting with V. It was not those sword fighting practice they had in Vijaygarh but it was a real fight. CK fought well against V being a girl and inexperienced but V disarmed her after 2 minutes as she was no match for him. As her sword fell down, he held her hand as he came behind her and puts his sword on her neck.

"I did not thought you could last even few seconds before me but you lasted for 2 minutes. Looks like your father has taught you very well. Poor him! That he will not be able to see his daughter's face," mocked V as she controlled her tears from falling down.

JA, TS and Surendra were still fighting with the soldiers.

"3 of you better stop or see her die, threatened V pressing the sword more on her neck.

The trio stopped fighting. Soldiers held JA and TS. V moved his sword from her neck.

"Virendra, stop all this, said Surendra.

"I have not even started, Surendra Singhji. Soldiers, put him in nazarbandh, ordered V.

Soldiers held Surendra too.

"Virendra, you can't put chachaji in nazarbandh, said JA.

"Okay, I will put him in prison along with 3 of you. This way, he will not get bored alone, joked V.

CK grabbed V's neck with her free hand and barked, "You are crossing your limits, Virendra.

"I have not even started to cross my limits, Chandrakanta. I have given you a chance to kill me that day but you did not make use of it. Don't think I will be giving you such a chance again. Look there, Chandrakanta. Here you strangle me and there Surendra Singhji loses his life, said V amusingly making her shocked as she saw a soldier pointing his sword at Surendra's neck.

"Go ahead and kill me, taunted V.

CK left V's neck in compulsion.

"Good that you got your sense in place, Chandrakanta, joked V, "If you all have any problem with Surendra Singhji in nazarbandh then he can join you in prison.

The 3 ministers who always taunted CK moved forward.

"Congratulations for what you did. Now we can free rajkumar Shiv Dutt too, said Balraj.

"Now we don't have to listen to orders of these 4, said Jadeep.

"Its good that you played with her feelings. She deserves it after rejecting many men including yuvraj Shiv Dutt. Now she got the taste of her own medicine, said Divakar.

CK was hurt as he said that.

"You just shut up, Divakar Singh, lashed JA at him for saying that.

"So it's you 3 who were helping Shiv Dutt to do my coup, said Surendra.

"Yes, smiled Balraj.

"Who else are there with you? asked JA.

"Do you want to know everything so soon? asked Divakar, "Wait for some time.

"I think we have talked enough. Its time to show them their place, said V.

JA, Surendra and TS looked angrily at V while CK was not reacting due to not able to believe what V was doing. The soldiers started taking the 3 men from there while V was taking CK. Surendra was put in a nazarbandh room by the soldiers while the other 3 were taken to the prison area. The soldiers pushed JA on the floor in a prison cell followed by TS. They got up. V then pushed CK in the prison. TS stopped her from falling on the floor. TS and JA stares at him angrily for pushing CK while CK is still in shock. V leaves from there after giving them an evil look.

"How could he do this to us? asked JA.

"I never thought he could do this, replied TS.

Their attention then went to CK's face which was not showing any emotions.

"Chandrakanta, said JA.

"Rajkumari, said TS.

"Virendra is joking. He is just playing pranks with all of us, said CK as she started smiling, "He can never do this to us. He can never hurt me. Last night only, he told his feelings to me. He will come back and say that he was joking all this time before releasing us from here. We have spent a lot of time together. He was always there when I needed him. He can't do this to me.

JA and TS looked at her sadly.

"Chandrakanta, control yourself. Virendra has betrayed you, said JA.

"Yes rajkumari, he used you for his benefits, said TS.

CK started crying on realizing V's betrayal.JA and TS hugged her from each side to comfort her.

"I am betrayed again in love. Now I will lose trust on love, said CK in tears.

"Don't say this, rajkumari, said TS.

"You should not cry for him, said JA.

"Maa-pitaji trusted Virendra and sent him with me. If they will know that he has only imprisoned me here like this then they will be so worried, said CK sadly.

"We have to think of something to get out of here, said TS.

"How will we get out? asked CK, "There are guards outside.

Scene shifts to a room where V is sitting with those 3 ministers.

"Its good that we got rid of that girl, said Jagdeep.

"You 3 tolerated her for 1 week but I tolerated her for 1 month, said V.

"The ones who helped us will be coming soon, said Balraj.

"Who are they? asked V.

Before he was about to reply, an elderly man and a young man entered. V was shocked as he recognized both the men. The men smiled and took their seats.

"He is Rampur's king Madhav Singh and his son Kunal, said Balraj.

"Yes he is the brother of Chandrakanta's stepmother and he is his son, said V.

"So your are Virendra Singh. I heard that you changed the party, said Madhav.

"I have never changed any party. I only wanted tilism key and then to get Naugarh, said V.

"Why are you against your friend? asked Madhav.

"She was never my friend. I think these 3 ministers told you everything, replied V.

"Oh I know. Now you have got to know that I and Kunal had also helped Shiv Dutt to become the king. Now I have also helped you because I want to take revenge from Chandrakanta and her father for killing my sister and nephew. I feel like going and killing her myself and then sending her head to her father who will die on seeing her head, said Madhav.

"We have to wait for that, said V.

"Why? asked Madhav.

"Because I want to take over Vijaygarh before her eyes, replied V.

"That's great, said Madhav with a smile.

"Why you have helped Shiv Dutt in doing the coup of Surendra Singhji? asked V.

"Because I did not wanted Chandrakanta to win against Shiv Dutt so that she becomes his daasi and never gets to have the throne of Vijaygarh. I did this as Kamini and Mayuk told me to help them. Surendra was helping her so I had to help Shiv Dutt throw him out of the way. We all had done everything when Surendra, Jai Aditya, Tej Singh and many of trusted soldiers and ministers were not around. We all had spread wrong things among people that Surendra got Shiv Dutt arrested and is planning to join hands with Jai Singh and Chandrakanta which will result in bad future of Naugarh. We manipulated a part of Naugarh people as well as many people inside the palace. Since majority of the people inside the palace supported us, we succeeded in doing the coup of Surendra. I helped Shiv Dutt and these 3 ministers from behind and not let anyone know that I too was involved otherwise people would doubt us on finding that Chandrakanta's own relative helped Shiv Dutt. Helping you become king was more easy as we just had to convince people in the palace to make you the king, replied Madhav.

"Thanks that you and your son too helped me, said V with a smile.

Scene shifts to the prison.

"Don't know who else are helping them? asked TS.

Just then, a soldier hands a letter to CK from outside the cell.

"This is from maharaj, said the soldier and left.

CK opens the letter and starts to read while JA and TS listens:

Chandrakanta, Jai Aditya aur Tej Singh,

Mujhe umeed hai ki tum teeno ko kaid khaane me bahot maza aa raha hoga. Tum teeno ko ab iski aadat daalni padegi. Maine ye patra isliye likha hai ki main chaahta hu ki tum teeno aaj humaare 2 khaas mehmaan ka manoranjan karo. 1 ghante ke baad tum teeno ko aaj humaare chhote se daawat me naachna hoga jo daawat-kaksh(party hall) me hoga. Vahaan hum sab aur kuch sainiko ko lekar jyaada nahi sirf 10-15 log honge. Mujhe umeed hai ki tumhaara manoranjan acchha hoga aur hum sabko pasand aayega.

-Maharaj Virendra Singh

JA snatched the letter from her to see and then showed it to TS.

"How can he tell us to do this? asked TS, "He did not spared rajkumari also.

"I will reply to Virendra that Chandrakanta will not dance, replied JA.

He started writing the reply on the other page given to them for reply with the pen given to them to write. As he starts writing the reply, CK sees his handwriting and is shocked.

-----Flashback------

The day V left, CK was sitting alone in her room. A pigeon comes and gives her a letter. When CK picks up the letter, the pigeon leaves. CK starts reading the letter in mind:

Rajkumari Chandrakanta,

Main ye nahi bata sakta hu ki main kaun hu par main itna bata sakta hu ki main Naugarh se hu aur main aapka bhala chaahta hu. Aap Maharaj Shiv Dutt se shaadi mat kijiye. Vo sudhra nahi hai. Vo aapse shaadi karke aapko Naugarh ki Nagar Vadhu banaakar saare chauraahe par nachaana chaahta hai. Nagar Vadhu naachne ke alaava aur kya kya karti hai aap to jaanti hi hogi. Isliye aap ye shaadi karke apni zindagi mat barbaad kijiye. Kisine aapka dil toda hai iska matlab ye nahi ki aap hosh kho kar galat faisla le le jisse aapki zindagi barbaad ho jaaye. Main aapke liye dua karunga. Jaisa aapne ab tak lada Shiv Dutt ke khilaaf vaisa aap abhi bhi ladne ki koshish kijiye, rajkumari. Apna khyaal rakhna aur humesha khush rehna.

-Aapka Shubhchintak

"I already got to know about Nagar Vadhu thing due to Devgiri being there as Tej Singh but who is this person sending me this letter? Who don't want me to ruin my life? thinks CK.

-----Flashback Ends-----

JA finished writing the reply and showed it to CK and TS.

"It was you only na? asked CK to JA.

"What are you saying, Chandrakanta? asked JA confusingly.

"You only wrote letter to me na alerting me not to marry Shiv Dutt? Your handwriting matches with the handwriting on that letter, replied CK shocking JA and TS too.

"Is it true, rajkumar? asked TS.

"Your face says it, said CK.

"Yes it was me, rajkumari, said JA.

"Why didn't you say it? asked CK.

"I did not knew how to say when I acted like a coward to not do anything to help you. Anyways, my letter was of no use since you knew it already due to Devgiri, replied JA.

"I knew it already through Devgiri but I was happy that there was at least someone in Naugarh who took a little courage to alert me about Shiv Dutt. I wanted to know to know who that person was and it turned out to be you. Thank you very much, Jai Aditya, said CK and hugged him.

"No need to thank me for that, Chandrakanta, said JA and hugged her back.

"Do you know what you replied in the letter, Jai Aditya? asked CK as they broke the hug.

"I don't want you to dance, replied JA giving the letter and reply to the soldier who left.

"Don't know how Virendra will react seeing the reply, said CK.

"We can get out of here as I am an aiyyar which everyone forgot. They even forgot about my ring from which I get special powers, whispered TS so that the guards do not listen.

"I hope we are able to get out of here, whispered JA.

"The man who always helped me and encouraged me to fight with my enemies is now doing all this to me. He fought for my freedom and now he only captured me, said CK sadly.

"Don't think about him, rajkumari. He was always bad. After all, he was a khunkhaar, said TS to comfort her.

Next- Part 6(B). Escape From Prison

Precap: #CK, JA and TS escaped from the prison through TS's aiyyari of making the guards unconscious. The trio fights with the soldiers who try to catch them. While CK was hiding, V saw her and caught her. He tied her to the pillar in the room where he was sitting with those ministers and the father-son duo. CK is shocked to see Madhav Singh and Kunal.

# Many soldiers and ministers who are loyal to Surendra have decided to fight against V. A soldier comes and informs V that Surendra is not in nazarbandh room shocking him and others. CK smiles and says that they are not going to win. Kunal gets up and slaps her. He starts pulling her hair hard while abusing her. V stops him telling him to let her have some happiness because after that all her happiness will be gone. Kunal smiles evilly and goes back to his seat.

#V forces CK to dance and calls a dancer from the palace to give company to her. As both the girls start dancing, the other woman gives a look to CK causing her to wink at her.

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Awesome update
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Awesome update

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Brilliant written Juhi.

Wll done.

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Brilliant written Juhi.

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Started reading from the start and finished reading first 2 parts.

Part 1 & 2

First two parts are more CKfied. She is everywhere and a superwoman
😊

In the wedding, she dropped a bomb on SD by sudden attack on NG army. JS is with her as well. This is completely different take. RIP, Kamini n Mayuk.

V rescued RG. And he knows about his birth secret but doesn't know about his biological parents. Btw V is acting as a spy. He keeps on tabs on everyone.

KS ki bhi abhi khair nahi.

All n all awesome 2 parts.
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Originally posted by: Neenzm


Started reading from the start and finished reading first 2 parts.

Part 1 & 2

First two parts are more CKfied. She is everywhere and a superwoman
😊
The logical thing I showed is that it's the 5 aiyyars who did the most work especially Devgiri who even took Tej Singh's place in Naugarh and CK was the last to involve in physical fight being the least experienced. CK was being mastermind along with her father.

In the wedding, she dropped a bomb on SD by sudden attack on NG army. JS is with her as well. This is completely different take. RIP, Kamini n Mayuk.
I wanted JS to act like a king and father in the show too by not letting CK marry SD evem if she agreed due to heartbreak from V. JS told CK to kill them as they did wrong things.

V rescued RG. And he knows about his birth secret but doesn't know about his biological parents. Btw V is acting as a spy. He keeps on tabs on everyone.
Because he heard father-daughter talk about KS being evil and after his life. He had earlier saw KS lusting on CK on his 1st day in Vijaygarh but what he saw now horrified him.

KS ki bhi abhi khair nahi.
KS will surely get a dose from V one day.

All n all awesome 2 parts. Thank u😊

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